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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Allie on September 13, 2005
    Okay no teddy bears and roses, but at least let him live! I'd rather him live and not be with Hermione than die at all!

    This story certainly isn't a PWP anymore. In fact, this is actually one of the best stories I've come across. And to that I say Well Done!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 13, 2005
    Poor sweet Severus. Will he use the mind connection to call out to Hermione? Will he tell her where he is so she can get him? Please hurry, I feel this is reaching a climax (no pun intended) and I want so badly to see the end. Whatever that may bring.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 13, 2005
    Two great chapters there. I'm really glad that you decided to keep going with this story - it is developing well. I have never come across the idea of developing a spell using scientific methods before - v interesting. So what does H do to adjust the spell, I wonder. Different wand flicks? Extra words? A key piece of parchment with the precise effect of the spell written on it so that the exact spell, when spoken, will be evoked? It's got me thinking.

    But the poor rats! I bet Hagrid is crying his eyes out in his hut.
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  • From ANON - ladyofthemasque on September 13, 2005
    Wow. Angsty. ...Um, did I mention I like Happy Endings
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2005
    girl you better not let him die, and if you do and end the story that will only be okay if you start another story!! hehehe oh well update update!!
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  • From wormey on September 13, 2005
    wow... this actually has a plot to it!! it's good!!! Um, in the pheonix chapter, it's spelt Pomfrey, not Pomphrey. (Not picking, i hate it when cannons are spelt wrong!!!) Apart from that, it's great!! WOOT!!!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 13, 2005
    Ch 10 - (holds head in hands) What was I thinking ..... I hoped to encourage author to write HAPPY ending, not painful - agonizing - bone-breaking - nightmarish ending, which looks a bit more probable from this chapter! Yikes, I sure hope she has that Relaxo spell waiting for Severus at the Apparition point. (backs away from author) Nice Figgy... nice Figgy.... Relaxo, Figgy!!
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 12, 2005
    I love this story so much and your characterisation of snape. Please don't kill him yet. I know you feel its is finished and by continuing you run the rsikof writing a repetitive lemon, but I think Severus needs to survive by his own strength. It would be great if he could hold dominion over hermione and in that kinda S&M arrangment create a way that will allow him to be happy withouty the teddy bears and roses. Hell, I just like the passion in your stories and don't want it to stop. Withdrawal is a killer.
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 12, 2005
    You are a very prolific writer...I was amazed at having 2 chapters to read tonight. I can see why you would have wanted to end the story at chapter 8 but I must say t he chapter I just read was very powerful and I'm glad it was written...I don't know if it was 8 or 9(The Phoenix song?) Anyway, kudos on a well written couple of chapters...I feel really really sombre right now.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 12, 2005
    Ch 9 - Hello! I am one of those pesky "readers foaming at the mouth for a happy ending." If there is character death, let it be Lucius and Voldemort. I think a happy ending would be quite compatible for the story theme of "What Was I Thinking" - e.g., for Severus to realize he was wrong in thinking "Your beauty isn't meant for me" or wrong in thinking "I want you to marry for love, .... Your name listed in history books. This will never happen with me. Ever." I mean, in the first part, he was wrong in thinking that Hermione would never want him. So a happy ending could fit in, and he could still be snarky (and sexy). Please??????? Ummm..... I'll send Death Eaters to your door? (makes hopeful but evil glare at author)

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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 12, 2005
    Awww come on! I'll find a way to sneak a 'Bondage-Fun' teddy bear and a dozen black roses into your email box if it's the last thing I do! MWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Zoltaire the Inscrutable SHALL prevail!

    'Hmm-hmm' Now that that is out of my system, great chapter! I see this is really turning into something other than PWP. Very nicely done, bringing in a sense of urgency to the story now. I can see myself behind Hermione with a bull-whip! "Work faster, Slave! That 'Relaxo' spell must be stronger!" "Stronger, I say!"

    Can't wait for the next chapter and all its snarky goodness! Taa!

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - Mayken on September 12, 2005
    Wonderful story so far, it's very engaging.

    I wont sent you a teddy bear or roses, I think a bottle of scotch is much more stylish.

    can't wait for the next bit
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 12, 2005
    Great chapter. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2005
    oh girl you had better not stop!! and if you do you should start another story, you are such a good writer!!! update and soon please!!

    Deathraven
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 12, 2005
    Perhaps it's best to end the story here...ALTHOUGH I'M DYING TO READ MORE!!!!!

    Ms. Figg......You are truly the Faulkner of Fan/Fuck fiction. (Is there a Pulitzer or Booker Prize for erotica?? If not, there should be!!
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