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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - anay on September 12, 2005
    Brilliant,
    but, do "temper" him! Them! Please!
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  • From SAS33 on September 12, 2005
    ooooo will he be able to stay away from her sexually, they'll be working pretty closely from now on, can he resist her *grin*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2005
    Dear god, you are an amazing writer! Part 1 left me a soaked puddle of...well, soaked. And quivering. Geez. Keep writing- for the love of all things holy, KEEP WRITING!
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  • From ANON - Allie on September 12, 2005
    Wonderful!!! But this better not be the ending - they better get back together. But like another reviewer said, please don't make him give her roses and teddy bears. That's not Sev. At least make them get back together! Please! If you do I'll give you roses and teddy bears!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 12, 2005
    Sad chapter. While I only see Snape as a sappy character sometimes in fics and enjoy the fluffiness, I also like the portrayal of him this way too. While I believe he is a man that can love and has loved, he is still dark.

    I do though hope you don't keep them apart permanantly. I don't expect him to give her roses and teddy bears but I'm hoping for a happy ending here.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 12, 2005
    Good chapter. What a drama queen Sev is - although what he says IS sort of justified by his life. Still, he knows how to milk it for all it's worth, doesn't he? Now Hermione won't be able to resist him even more and Sev seems to have actually convinced himself with his own speech that he can avoid Hermione (yeah, right - he's going to be next to her 24 hours a day). I do appreciate these quick updates a lot.
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  • From ANON - Joyous on September 12, 2005
    It's unbelievable how addicted I am to your story... I get so excited to see when you've updated. And I'm extremely thankful that you update as fast as you do. I was actually falling away from the Hermione/ Severus stories when i read your story... although I still had my favorites that I'm waiting for updates on (She said What? By Ladydeathfaerie and "Unlikely Connections," and "Tying the Knot" by LadyTuesday)

    Severus' last confession to Hermione was brilliant... And let me just say it's about damn time! Though i have to say, I'm annoyed Hermione let him leave... it's just one of those things that you just don't do...

    1. You don't wear white after labor day
    2. You don't go swimming after you just ate a heavy meal
    3. You do NOT let the person you love walk out your door.... lol Can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 12, 2005
    PS re Ch 8 - I meant "horrid talk with Hermione" as in "horrid emotionally-draining talk with Hermione where he walks out on her, seemingly forever and without hope of ever being happy" - but very well-written. Just horrid for Severus.
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  • From ANON - Princess on September 12, 2005
    ahhh every one together we love our sevvie!
    thanks this is such a great story, i never review so feel really special, keep writing!
    :)
    Princess
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2005
    These stories are beautifully written. Unlike most fanfiction, these are written with intelligence and vision. They are my dirty little secret.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 12, 2005
    Ohhh...I never expected to hear him say all that to her! You story is like an onion. I thought it was one thing and layer after layer, it becomes another. I am very happy and touched by the turn of events. Anyone can write smut. It takes a real writer to make thier reader see and feel. You have done just that with this chapter. Well done, and as always...looking for more.
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  • From ANON - June W on September 12, 2005
    Ch 8 - ACK!! After this horrid talk with Hermione, NOW he has to go face Voldemort. Wicked author!! Sheesh, Hermione insisted he tell her how he felt, and she's got it now. She doesn't even know he has just been summoned. Such powerful words you wrote for Severus - "someone like me could never have someone like you
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    oh god what is going to happen what are you going to do. oh i can't wait update update!!
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  • From ANON - Lindsey on September 11, 2005
    OMG, that was one of the best chapters i have ever read! i loved it...the sincerity, the truth, and just the whole thing. i can't wait for the next chapter!!! i really wanna find out wat happens next, i wonder how hermione will end up and with who, and i wonder wat will happen to snape.. please update asap!
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  • From ANON - Lindsey on September 11, 2005
    i don't mean to be mean or anything, but i kinda hate severus rite now, and i semi-hate hermione for still liking snape...well, i still enjoy ur writing, i hope u kno that i just needed to get that out, i still love ur story and hopefully snape can make up for himself... til next chapter!!!
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