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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Lindsey on September 11, 2005
    this chapter was kinda sad... i think snape deserved to wait that long, he was the one who didn't want any more "contact" with her after the first time. but i guess him being a guy and all, he blamed it on her, so i think i see where his perspective is from... i'll just wait and see till the next chapter!! til then, keep up the good writing!
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  • From ANON - deathraven on September 11, 2005
    omg i just love love love this story its so good!!!!! well i can't wait for the next chapter to come up!!!
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  • From ANON - Koda on September 11, 2005
    Lmao, I loved your author note.
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  • From SAS33 on September 11, 2005
    Excellent, I'm looking forward to more, this sooooooooooo HOT!!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 11, 2005
    No kidding she's been ruined! Literally and figuratively....lucky girl. hahahaha Seriously, a tidy chapter that will form a nice bridge between her former residence and her new residence. I'm looking forward to see how things go at Hogwarts under the watchful eyes of the students and staff. Hmmmmm, could be interesting.
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  • From demorie2003 on September 11, 2005
    great story :) update soon :)
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  • From ANON - macropis on September 11, 2005
    Great stories (parts 1 and 2)! Very hot and erotic. I think, though, that after reading the latest two chapters, I agree with Catpower. This should be classified as S&M, and I'd like to see this realization explicitely explored more in the characters. To go on as if the last meeting was just normal sex is unrealistic for the characters.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 11, 2005
    Yes, and something dark will be inside that woman again. Great chapter. I didn't think she would be too put out about what she looked or felt like. I also think she will be needing his services again. You are correct, I don't think she could ever be satisfied by any other man again.

    I do hope though that Severus admits to her a little more freely that he needs her just as much as she needs him.

    I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on September 11, 2005
    I love how Severus can be so brutal yet caring at the same time. You write his characterization perfectly.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 11, 2005
    This came so quickly, I hope anothe part os oon to follow! Poor Hermione...I mean...lucky Hermione! Fantastic and waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 11, 2005
    Wow. That was a shag. I'm a bit shocked actually - it was like consensual rape. I loved chapter 5 - found it exciting to think of such a passionate man inside one's head. And then chapter 6 happened. And then chapter 7 showed that the injuries were real and not imagined due to drama.

    This is a very good story and I shall certainly keep reading. I do think though, that maybe this story should be classified as S&M. I know HG/SS aren't using any equipment (yet?) but chapter 6 seemed very violent to me. I didn't think that about Part 1 so much - a bit of rough and pain is still normal sex IMO (and I like it). But leaving bruises all over her back and trouble walking the next day - that's sadism in my book.

    I would find it interesting to read a bit of exploration into HG realising and coming to terms with the fact that she's a masochist ('cause I really think that's what she is, here). Or alternatively, confronting SS and saying it was OK the one time because she was so sex-starved but he's got to be more gentle next time or she will deny him.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 11, 2005
    Ch 7 - PS - if Severus had stayed overnight, he could've made her breakfast in bed! Given her a massage, applied salve personally, snuggled.... he wouldn't have had to kill her!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 11, 2005
    Ch 7 - nope, nothing inside her now, but you can fix that soon. (grin!) Loved the poor raven - "I swear I will transform you into a featherduster before you can fly ten feet.
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  • From ANON - Gracie on September 11, 2005
    I love you. I don't even know what else to say. You update almost too fast for me to keep up...and the quality....OOOoooohh the quality. Amazing. You are hands down the best author on this site. I love you.
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  • From ANON - carrie on September 10, 2005
    im smiling and im speechless
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