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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Stormi on September 10, 2005
    Chapter 5


    Ms. Figgggggg!!!!!! (Lots of whining here.) What a horrible place to leave off at. Now what am I suppose to do while I wait for your next chapter? Hummm....


    Seriously, keep up the great work.


    Stormi
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 10, 2005
    Large Lemons! Congratulations, you have reduced me to *squealing* Grrr. Love the thought conversation. You know, I think that is almost more effective than hours of foreplay between them. He's in her thoughts before he's in her. Oh Goodness! Freaud would be so proud!

    Really can't wait till the next chapter. Could we have more mind-speak, PLEASE?

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 10, 2005
    I don't think any of us could hold ourselves from him for too long either. But I'm glad that he also admitted to her that he also needed her. And while neither of them want more, or seem to want more than what they are about to do, but perhaps in the coming days with working together they will realize that no one else can satisfy each other. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 10, 2005
    Of course there are *large lemons* on the way...Severus is on the way!! *wink, wink, nudge* hahaha Great chapters 4 and 5. I'm sorry though that we are reaping the benefits of your personal turmoil though. Hope things work out positively for you soon.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 10, 2005
    Ch 5 - hey, you cut off the chapter just when it was starting to get really, really hot! Get back to your keyboard right now!! And when will Severus realize that HE is addicted to her and needs her too? Just thump him on the head....
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on September 10, 2005
    I don't think I would have held out as long - - especially with that dead sexy voice echoing in my head! I'm just a sucker for a low seductive growl! Great chapter BTW, Severus sure knows how to seduce her brain as well as everything else - makes you wonder if he had been spying on her all year!
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  • From ANON - Joyous on September 10, 2005
    I absolutely love you story, and I am so glad you decided to continue with it... Personally, I don't think i would've lasted as long as Hermione did...
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 10, 2005
    Wow, Severus speech was amazing - well done!!!!

    I can't wait to read how Hermione settles into the castle!!!
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  • From ANON - ha ha on September 10, 2005
    cool beans and keep it up
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  • From ANON - JW on September 10, 2005
    Ch 4 - wonderful plan! I'm glad she's not insisting on hanging out with Ron and Harry; she's smarter. The chapter title - "Her Rightful Place" - was sort of a tease, 'cuz I thought her "rightful place" was ... you know .... in Severus' bed, but perhaps a future chapter??? Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 10, 2005
    firewall - thanks for the "Relaxo" spell explanation! I couldn't figure out why he'd want to "relax" his ... you know ....
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on September 09, 2005
    Although I love that you update so quickly. I hope what ever is troubling you will soon be replaced by peace. I know how it is to be in some tough times. Keep your chin up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2005
    yay!! i can't wait to see what happens you are such a great writer!!! update soon please!!
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  • From ANON - pokerfan on September 09, 2005
    you are an amazing writer....cannot wait for the entire story... I love the way you kept true to snape in Part one...of course the romantic in me would love to see a happy ending...LOL....I can't wait to see what you come up with.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 09, 2005
    I took some time and read 'What was I thinking' part one the other day. It was fanyastic, but I was upset at the abrupt ending. Then I was so pleased to run across this tonight. I beg you to continue as soon as you can. Isn't writing a wonderfu release? My hat off to you for not turning Snape into a pansy lover-boy. Very, very well done. I am enjoying this very much. I will be back often to look for updates. Thank you for the story.
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