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Reviews for #2 ~ What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2 (Small Edit)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - amsev on September 20, 2005
    HOLY BUGGERY (heh) but that was HOT! I think I have a new favorite to go alongside my old fave of humor/romance/angst: angst/hot,mildly masochistic sex/more angst/love. I like the fact that you didn't turn Hermione into some kind of total submissive to Severus' Dominant. Don't like those stories much. She's too damn ornery to ever be a true "bottom." Hot, hot, hot!

    Dang, that was so good I read parts 1 and 2 through a second time!!! And now I think I have the creative fire in my belly (snicker) to go finish a PWP I started ages ago that has been languishing for a while. (it's a SS/NT, but, hey, that pairing has its moments, too!) Whooooeeee! Hope to read more of your works.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 20, 2005
    Fabulous! Fabulous! I loved it all. "Severus pulled her back roughly to the other side of the bed, like a carriage return" - cool metaphor. House-Elves with teeth and their agressive history. Albus listening in (eek!).

    Great new sex position - pushed up on the headboard, high in the air, wheelbarrow-style, for the more gymnastic of us to try out (nb: must have strong or magical bedframe).

    The unexpected Final Battlescene and how they lived happily ever after - added almost as an afterthought, but it works.

    Can't wait to read your next story. When's the novel coming out?
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  • From ANON - TheBloodyXXX on September 19, 2005
    One of the best HG/SS stories I've ever read!

    :)
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 19, 2005
    That is the BEST ending I've read for a long while, I'll tell you what! Wonderful way to tie up all loose ends! Fabulous! Awe-Inspring! And dang-it, It's just a fun family story, (okay, maybe not, but it's still pretty great all around!)

    Now, don't forget parts 3 - 297! And great job with Voldie-kins! long hard and thrusting hahaha! Taa!

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From ANON - Amy on September 19, 2005
    THIS WAS PROBABLY THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ....I APPLAUD YUOU AND I WOULD LUV TO READ MORE IF THEY ARE ANYTHING LIKE THIS ONE. GOOD WORK!!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 19, 2005
    Did Severus realise he loved her? I'm going to assume he did *grin* brilliant ending! Well done!
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  • From ANON - Koda on September 19, 2005
    That epilogue was rather funny at the end.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on September 19, 2005
    YEEAAA!!! Oh my gosh! That was terrific!!! Such a great ending to a GREAT story! I could just cry! It's almost bittersweet actually; I mean I love it, but now it's over! What am I to do?! I hope that you are at this very time working on a new project. You really should, you have remarkable talent! Thanks for so much! You have truelly given all your readers a wonderful gift! Happy writing on whatever catches your fancy! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Much love,
    Killer K :D
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  • From ANON - Lord Voldemort on September 19, 2005
    Squib, Lord Voldemort is most displeased.
    I can only assume that this
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 19, 2005
    yes...would read just about anything you wrote Ms. Figg. BTW: I tried my hand at a little short 6 chapter fic about ALbus and a love affair. (Not Minerva) Won't link it unless you say so...but if you're looking for some more inspiration.....*giggles*
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 19, 2005
    Yup, me again, just read your contribution to your review-page and had to answer right away: Snape and Hermione doing dark deeds in dark corners sounds like a veeeery sexy read ;) The love life you gave them is one hell of an 'inspiration' *cough*, so keep it coming ;)
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 19, 2005
    *deepsigh* Such a perfect ending to a perfect story! Severus still scowling, but happily married and a father is a marvelous combination, really ;) I know I wrote it before, but I have to again to sum it all up: I LOVE IT! You got me hooked with part 1 and kept me reading and re-reading till now. My respect to your imagination, your style and your determination in creating such a beautiful, sexy story with characters that really come to life and enchant (and have the best sex imaginable ;) ). Thanks for sharing this story, it's been a blast :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2005
    I loved it.. The whole bloody thing was great !!!
    Thank You ...
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 19, 2005
    *sighs*
    Well...what a lovely ride you took us on. I feel like my vacation is ending and now I must pack and go and rejoin the real world.
    What a wonderful job you did of it too. I am pleased that you stuck with it and finished it. With so many fans, all over the globe, how can you ever feel bad agian? Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. Thank you for sticking to your guns and writing something few people dare to do with grace and depth. Myhat is off to you....*bows*
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  • From ANON - Allie on September 19, 2005
    That was perfect! The best ending ever! :) Excellent fic, easily one of the best I've ever read. I'm serious!
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