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Reviews for Lost in this Masquerade

By : Rebeka
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - Julz on September 23, 2006
    Hey please write annother chapter soon. Im really curious as 2 wat happens nxt.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 11, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Jessie Deal on February 13, 2006
    not bad so far. I will definitely be looking forward for more chapters
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  • From ANON - Katrina on November 24, 2005
    I think it is a wonderful story so far, and I can't wait until I can see where the plot's going. However, I kept getting distracted from the story because you incorrectly use quotation marks. You don't need to put quotation marks around each individual sentence, just when a character starts speaking and when they are finished. Also, when you switch characters speaking, begin a new paragraph.

    Please hurry and finish this, I'm curious to see what happens.

    P.S. I love the thought of Snape dressing up as a bat. I t made me giigle ^_^
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  • From ANON - Satai Delenn on November 18, 2005
    Please update! This is intriguing! Don't leave me hanging!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sleeper_girl on November 14, 2005
    I can't wait for more story! I love this!
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  • From slygriff21 on November 14, 2005
    Great start so far! I can't wait to find out what Ginny did to Hermione! Please update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Lua on October 02, 2005
    More More More

    Please write more
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on September 21, 2005
    MEAN, MEANIE, MEAN HEAD, M_E_A_N.
    that is what you are. for making me wait. update!!!! PLEASE!!!!
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - maggie on September 21, 2005
    I'm not hard core about spelling, being dyslexic and all, but the gramatical errors make it very difficult to read. for dialouge the quates are placed aroung what the person is saying. example:
    Bob sat down and said "you should see the weather out there!"
    "Really?" Mary said in disbelief, "it was beautiful earlier."
    good luck.
    maggie
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  • From ANON - kit on September 13, 2005
    ::squeals and giggles:: rock on! I can't wait to read the next chapter! yer doing great ^_^ update very soon!
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  • From ANON - Sallynne on September 12, 2005
    This looks to be very promising! Great read so far and can't wait for future chapters :) !
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  • From ANON - FranB on September 11, 2005
    Nice touch! Can't wait to read more.

    FranB
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  • From ANON - Golden on September 10, 2005
    Oh, please update! I am absolutely loving this!
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