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By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - Akuma on March 06, 2013
    PLEASE write again! You have been gone for over two years and many of your stories have been dead for 5 years. Please return to us!

    How to seduce females by normal and Dark means by Miranda Black
    Surprised a woman would write that in some respects not in others.

    WHy would Salazar write book on his own brand of magic that can only be used by his line and than release it to the public?

    Why is a copy of the Book of the Dead just for sale?

    Tonks was licking at an ice-cream which was filled with alcoholic ice flavours.
    Unless she can get drunk on it that would be nasty most likely.

    The amounts seem off for most of the things he buys.

    Then I call my servants: Dark Bringers
    Might I suggest Dark Harbingers.
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  • From bill560682 on December 04, 2011
    as far as any idea against harry and the creevey brother think about it harry wore out both bella and tonks. so to even come close to being able to keep harry's sex drive in check while he is playing the role of good harry he would need at least 2 partners several times a day. so you could have harry have oral sex and anal sex with both creevey brother 3 times a day, so harry is dumping 12 loads of cum into the creevey brothers each and every day.
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  • From bill560682 on December 03, 2011
    an as far as the creevey brothers go since they are some of harry potters biggest fans if not his biggest no one would think twice about them trying to be around harry all the time. also you could have the creevey brothers start pranking ron so bad that he is forced to be held back if not even leave the school all together. an you can use harry's life debts to turn granger and ginny into the school whores who must have sex with anyone anytime they want. with hogwarts that news would not take long to get out and you would have them standing in line. you would have every 11 threw 14 year old boy in line waiting to get their dick sucked morning, noon and night heck they would even be stopped in between classes to give quick blow jobs. i think crabbe and goyle would likely even get some sex for once. an ron being pranked anded in with granger being the school whore along with his little sister would drive ron out of his mind. an with the girls as the new school whores they will not have time to plot against harry for some kind of revenge. an the life debt will keep anyone even doubledore from findout why the sudden change in the girls because every time he tries to read their minds to see why the change happened the girls magic will protect the secret from him because harry made that a part of the debt. as for mr. weasley he just became harry's spy within the order of the roasted chicken since snape will not be let in on everything but arthur weasley would be trusted since dumbledore holds a debt of about 250 thousand gallions over the family namely their childrens schooling costs. so it is you play along or i albus dumbledore call in the money you owe also if you play your parts well i may even give you a chunk of the potter-black money after i have harry die protecting the light.
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  • From bill560682 on December 03, 2011
    as for ideas i like the idea of harry bringing lily back for sex. of course if you are sending harry back to hogwarts you need to make sure he plays the role of stupid weak harry since that is what everyone thinks of him. he also needs to slip away from time to time to keep up the new dark lord role as well. an you might want to work in the fact that several people owe him life debts. there is granger, ginny, fliur, mr. weasley and you could say luna owes him one from the department of mysteries. also you could have harry see what are the limits to the room of requirements. can you bring things out of it as was hinted at in the books when dumbledore mentioned filch needed cleaning supplies an the room showed up full of them. if things can be taken out of the room then harry could create his own ready made army. an i do not think your harry is into it but i would think the creevey brothers would do anything for harry such as morning blow jobs an i think they would fight over who got to get fucked in the ass by harry first. now that does not mean harry is gay but is using them as cum buckets.
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  • From bill560682 on December 03, 2011
    i think the reason you like the harry/tonks pairing may have to do with the fact that both of them hate the reason they are well known. harry hates his fame because it cost him his parents and tonks hates her shape shifting because everyone wants her to be the life of the party be changing and the fact guys want her to look like their favorite girl instead of herself.
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  • From Sharpe49 on July 06, 2009
    That is a real evil Harry. Even if the last update was a very long time ago, I would like to read the next chapters if they are published.
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  • From MDK95 on October 09, 2008
    Hi i thout this was a good story so fare and i'm looking foward to the next update keep up the good work :)
    and i love dark/evil harry.
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  • From iceywolf123 on January 29, 2008
    hey, im a huge fan. i think you should continue this work. it really is quite good.
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  • From MaggotElite89 on November 11, 2007
    Dude this story kills. I LOVE IT. The power hungry Harry, the killing OMG its beautiful. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.
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  • From UltimateFucker on August 01, 2007
    Very interesting story so far, please add more soon
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  • From on July 30, 2007
    Not a bad start, but it seems rushed. Also, you desperately need an editor. Please find an editor, have the existing chapters edited, then repost them. Hopefully, by going over the changes/corrections the editor makes, you can improve your writing.
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  • From Draphonix on July 05, 2007
    Please update. its a Interesting story, would love to know whats happening next.
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  • From shinjithegoodsharer on April 22, 2007
    Nice job! I hope to see more soon!
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  • From Extraho on April 21, 2007
    hey i like it. dont know why you stopped
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  • From Draphonix on March 14, 2007
    Man loving the evil side of Harry
    Would like to read more
    I realize your busy with school and all but please update
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