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By : CynthiaAnastasia
  • From ANON - Jane on September 23, 2005
    This is a wonderful story! I love your writing style, and the plot is creative and surprising (in a good way.)

    I think your note at the beginning of chapter five was great and very mature... it's great that you're not loosing your temper over one reveiwer who (as it seems) hasn't even read beyond chapter 1... I've seen authors loosing their temper over positive reviews with friendly remarks about a reoccuring typo and stuff like that!

    I'm looking forward to you next chapter.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Susa on September 23, 2005
    He He He,

    I Like it! Go on with the Story ^^
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 22, 2005
    LOL! That is truelly hilarious!! Although the phrase Suck it up seems very American to me, but, hey, it's your story and it's funny - so keep at it! AND..... Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 22, 2005
    hahahahahaha! what a hoot! Carry on just the way you have been! You are doing a wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 22, 2005
    ~lol~ ohhh hell no .... man he his soooooooooo gonig to kill her befor the end of the year ....i just love it .... i cant wait in till the next update please update sooon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later

    angel

    ps your opening paragraph was not over the top and i think no i hope the flamer get the point ~giggels~ in till then later
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 21, 2005
    hahahaha what a pair.
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  • From ANON - aglaia on September 21, 2005
    you know you've passed far beyong the realms of a normal family when you read this story to your mum, and she thinks it's hysterical...
    but aside from that, *I* think its hysterical! wonderful work, my dear, absolutely thrilling!
    I adore some of your one-line little jabs (par example:"And she would [throw a tantrum], because she was fiery and passionate, but mostly she was impatient and enjoyed getting her own way." Or:
    "Hermione had bent to scratch her knee (which is ok when you have an itch, unless you're nearly naked.)"), and your characterization is brilliant - just enough snark and humour.
    and so: I'm down on my knees,
    I'm begging you please!
    To update soooooon!
    lia
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  • From ANON - Susan on September 21, 2005
    I am just finishing chapter 2 and I have to admit I am surprised! And that was in a good way. I really thought this story would be going in a different direction and you didn't take it there. Well done thus far...am on to chapters 3 and 4. Thanks :)
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  • From ANON - Aradia on September 21, 2005
    Please enlighten me, why do so many people the need to make a highly intelligent woman like Hermione a scarlet woman, vamp, female Rambo or even a whore? This is just as ridiculous as Severus as a pansy.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 20, 2005
    ~lol~ yes yes yes it is going to be an every every every long year for them i cant wait in till you update again i just love it and in till next time love peace and fan fics ... later

    angel
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  • From ANON - pickles on September 20, 2005
    great beginning onto the next chapter
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 20, 2005
    Amusing - extremely amusing - please update!
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  • From ANON - angel on September 20, 2005
    man its going to be a long year for them if they keep it up ~lol~ man i cant wait in till your next update and in till then keep up the great work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 19, 2005
    Hehehe! Brilliant! Although i feel sorry about Neville!
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  • From ANON - bobbie on September 19, 2005
    Very good start you have there. I hope to be reading more soon..they say anger is a form of passion...keep up they good work.... hope you post often...please dont leave us hanging...
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