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Reviews for Centerfold

By : CynthiaAnastasia
  • From ANON - Remetan on September 19, 2005
    Oh, this looks to be quite fun. I can't wait to see what you do next!
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  • From ANON - creader on September 18, 2005
    Great start to the story. I actually like the idea of it being Hermione in the centerfold. Hmm. Wonder what her tattoos are-any silver and green snakes? Keep an eye out for typos on the word That. I think you type faster with one hand than the other and that has lead to a couple of mistypes. Also, I noticed in chapter 1 defense was misspelled with a v. Keep with your plan to have this progress slowly or else any relationship will be unbelievable. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - amsev on September 17, 2005
    Very nice interaction between our two protagonists as the sparks begin to fly...
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 17, 2005
    Very very nice! Your first chapter caught my interest...it was a novel beginning and then you compounded it with your revelations in the second chapter. Poor Neville! I hope someone finds a cure. I hope you update soon; I'm really anxious to read your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 17, 2005
    man poor neville and i fell sorry for mione she lots her friend and what or who is doing this ... i cant wait in till the next chapter please update soon and in till then keep up the great work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Death on September 17, 2005
    Very cool. I hope you update soon! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on September 17, 2005
    This really is a very good fic! Your doing much better than me when I started out! :) Don't flip straight to the sex just yet. I like where your plot is going and I can't wait to see the students reactions to her teaching there. Your writing flows well and I love how your writing the characters! Keep up the good work! I'll be keeping an eye on this one. :)
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  • From ANON - Nightwine on September 17, 2005
    Wonderful! I'm absolutely excited to read more. I love how she was like, pfft, wasn't me in your dirty magazine. Will we find out why her eyes change? Some sort of spell or something? Or is it just irrelevant fact that I'm looking into too much?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 17, 2005
    I still get the feeling it really was her, but we shall see. I'm curious as to who did that to Neville.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Maela on September 17, 2005
    Interesting start. I am glad that it wasn't really Hermione in the magazine though. No matter how "wild" she might have gotten her seventh year, I can't imagine her making that leap. So sad about Neville and his grandmother. Great launching pad for a story. Update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on September 17, 2005
    man ...i like it keep up the good work and please update soon in till then later

    angel
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  • From ANON - LCDrusilla on September 16, 2005
    Nicely done. I love the fact that Hermione is implied as having a rebellious streek. It's hard to find a fic that has Hermione acting other than her book-worm self or someone who is utterly shy.
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  • From ANON - Sherry on September 16, 2005
    This story has a great start! I can wait to read more, update soon, please!!
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  • From ANON - amsev on September 16, 2005
    Very, very nice first chapter. Can't wait until Hermione shows up at Hogwarts (evil snicker). Methinks poor Sev won't know what hit him!
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  • From ANON - Lianna on September 15, 2005
    Two very enthusiastic thumbs up so far! I'm looking forward to reading more of your story!!
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