Click Here!

Reviews for CinderHarry

By : MarsInsane
  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on September 21, 2005
    awww...thats sad...I cried...I'm a sucker for fairy tales :D
    sooo, is harry's godmother--er, godfather (dog father more like hehe) gonna come to his rescue??
    hehehe I love how this is turning out!!
    Please update soon..
    and ur rite, you better update soon so that it gets happier ;)
    ciao!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - elecktra on September 21, 2005
    That was great! And yes that was a sad ending!! Please update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - niamh on September 21, 2005
    aww poor harry!! i feel really bad for him!! omg please write the next chapter quikly, i need to be cheered up!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Yana on September 21, 2005
    poor Harry
    i really hate them
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ura on September 21, 2005
    Oh, poor Harry.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 20, 2005
    Oh poor Harry! I can't wait for chapter 5!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - niamh on September 20, 2005
    oh em gee im luvin it keep the updates coming PLEEZ!!!!

    *mwah*
    niamh
    Report Review

  • From on September 20, 2005
    KAWAII!! OoooooooooOOooooooooohhhhh I cant wait for the ball! does pansy like Hermione? what is blaise going to do about ron, and out of curiousity is hermione going to be the fairy god mother or are plaining to split that part up? Just Damn that was A good chappie.
    cant wait for the next one!
    peaches

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Yana on September 20, 2005
    oo i bet they change their minds
    Report Review

  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 20, 2005
    Who does Pansy want Harry to introduce her too? Oh I can't wait for chapter 4!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Plato\'s Muse on September 19, 2005
    *sigh* See? Even I am not infallible. My hint was supposed to be (Harry Potter + beta readers). I know that the fictionalley.org community has a sound forum for young (and old!) writers of HP fiction, and there is likely someone there that can assist you. Work at it! You never know what might come out of this story with a bit more time and a lot more patience. ~Cheers.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Plato\'s Muse on September 19, 2005
    This is crap. Complete and total, unoriginal, rehashed crap.

    Have I got your attention? Good. Keep reading, you might get something out of it.

    Your use of colloquial language combined with the pastoral autocratic setting is bloody infuriating. The "aww man!" in your dialogue is what eventually made me hit the back button. This is a BAD thing! You shouldn
    Report Review

  • From ANON - myniephoenix on September 19, 2005
    i do hope you update soon.... i truely do..
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Storm on September 19, 2005
    I liked this chapter. Hmm I wonder who Pansy is interested in? I wonder how the other party will react to that. And I'm anxious to see Harry and Draco's next meeting. Can't wait to read the next update. Good Job.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - elecktra on September 19, 2005
    I love it! Please update soon!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!