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  • From Annecia89 on December 09, 2014
    Loved!!!
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  • From ANON - Missi on October 24, 2005
    I loved this-it was so cute! in your other fairy-Harry-tale you were asking about an epilogue for this. It's at a good stopping point but a one-shot of their anniversary or OOHHH-Pansy and Mione's wedding, with Draco and Harry recreating their wedding night afterwards or something. But it's not necessary, just fun to think about.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on September 27, 2005
    I think u should make a wedding night
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  • From ANON - LadyX on September 27, 2005
    And they all pretty much lived happily ever after-
    I liked that bit. It made me smile. Theo should have died. I expected him to do something like that though. I look forward to reading more stuff by you.
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  • From ANON - Yana on September 27, 2005
    cool story i loved it
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on September 27, 2005
    That was just too cute. loved it.
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  • From ANON - Storm on September 27, 2005
    Such a great ending. I had a smile on my face for almost the entire last chapter. I also really loved the 'such a great story to tell children' line. It was really funny and the whole Severus not happy about Sirius hounding him but still a good day line at the end was cute. Great job and I can't wait to read your next story. How about Umbridge as an evil witch? She was pretty nasty in my opinion. And you could always turn somebody evil...I mean personally I think Trelawney would be hilarious as an Igor-esque servant to the evil witch or wizard. And I could definitely see Aunt Marge as being an evil witch, you could always just give her some powers, even if you wanted to not just give it to her, you could have her make a deal with someone to get more power and such and such. But can't wait for your next story. Oh and you could always do an epilogue chapter (wink;)wink;))to this one maybe about Harry being pregnant and the birth of the next prince or even twins. I personally think it would be hilarious to have Harry yelling at Draco or punching him again when he's in contractions or in a mood swing. Good luck on your next story.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 27, 2005
    Awww! I didn't want this to end!
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  • From ANON - chi on September 26, 2005
    more more more
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  • From ANON - aurora_eos on September 26, 2005
    I love this story, its great. You really should do more fairy tales(stories, etc), sleeping beauty is my fav. it would be awesome to see/read one with H&D!. Etc. YAY!

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  • From ANON - you\'ll never know! on September 26, 2005
    update soon!!!!!!!!!!!i LUURRVEE this story!
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  • From ANON - Yana on September 26, 2005
    aww that was so sweet
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  • From ANON - elecktra on September 26, 2005
    I love it!! I can't wait till the necht chapter!! And a fairy tale story.....anastasia or little mermaid!!! I loved those movies!!!
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  • From ANON - Storm on September 26, 2005
    Great chapter. I already said I love the classics so I'm all for another one. Sleeping Beauty is my favorite but do what you want to do. It's your story after all, it doesn't matter if it is modeled after a classic, you put your own twists on it and voila! You've got your story. I would suggest you pick the next story line you like best and feel most comfortable with and go from there. If you want to do 'Sleeping Beauty' do it. If you feel like 'Snow White', write it. If you have 'The Fox and the Ferret'...Oops I mean 'Hound' ;) in mind, let it loose. Do what YOU want to do as it is YOUR story. Good luck and I can't wait for that last chapter and hopefully another story from you.
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  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on September 26, 2005
    Cuteness! Update! ^-^
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