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Reviews for Biding My Time: Our Way

By : watchyerback

From ANON - Inspire on October 04, 2006
Wow, I just found this story. I'm up to chapter 4 and I plan to finish catching up as soon as possible. I like the concept and the way you're developing Harry's character. Thanks for posting.
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From ANON - tabitoo on October 03, 2006
Sooooo....F/M/M hugh??? Sounds great to me!!!! LOL. Don't know how the people at portkey will feel about that but I LOVE IT!!! More more more. I've always wondered why so many people want Hermione to have to choose between her two best friends, Yeah. Loved that hug scene in PoA. So sweet.
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From ANON - Portkey reader on October 03, 2006
I started to read this over on Portkey, are the diffrances really big in this? If so what are they?
Anyay, I love the story over on Portkey, but I'm not too sure about the threesome part, but I love the story enough so I'll give it a try. Hope you can update on Portkey soon.
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From ANON - lisa on August 16, 2006
I love it, keep up the good work. I can't wait to see where this all goes. and I hope you update soon. Poor Hermione and Harry and Ron. I love Snape so it's hard to see him as the bad guy. You' re doing grea though and hope you continue.
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From ANON - hightemplar on August 14, 2006
great fic! i really like the way you write. one question, is hermione gonna end up with Ron?, becuase so far the canon said that, anyway great fic! obviously i'm a R/Hr shipper
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From ANON - hightemplar on August 14, 2006
great fic! i really like the way you write. one question, is hermione gonna end up with Ron?, becuase so far the canon said that, anyway great fic! obviously i'm a R/Hr shipper
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From ANON - tabitoo on January 19, 2006
Really missing this story, please I beg of you, please post soon. I really hope you haven't decided to drop it. I know you have a life and that's great just hope you decide to contiue with this excellent story.
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From ANON - paige on January 05, 2006
I've had this saved on my computer for the longest time, and finally sat down to read it one night. I stayed up nearly all night. It's fantastically darkish and very well written. Hope you update soon!
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From ANON - Waiting on December 31, 2005
OOOOhhh, such an incredible chappie, I can hardly wait for the outcome of this! Soon, please please please.
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From ANON - Amira on December 28, 2005
I love this story, it is well done and thought out. I'm a big harry and hermione shipper fan and think that the angst portrayed is pretty good. Keep on writing more. I enjoy it immensly.
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From ANON - Jake on December 26, 2005
Hi. It's me again. I reviewed chapter nine of your story today and I thought I was missing something in your story that was important but I couldn't figure out what it was. I must say if I am right about this then I am very impressed with your foreshadowing skills. In my last review I talked about the question of what would happen if Hermione thouched the augmentor when Ron was around. It didn't hit me until just a few minutes ago of the importance of this question asked by Avanell. I think I know what the answer to the question is. She would still think about Harry. I don't see how she could have any reaction other than this one. If the augmantor magnifies the feelings you have for someone then it would have magnified all of the feelings that he had for Ginny as well because he was around her at the Burrow and then there is the fact that he was not always around her when he felt the effects of the augmentor. Then that must mean that the augmentor causes the person toutching it to hve increased feelings about the person they love the most even if they do not realize it. That would mean that Hermione love Harry more than anyone else because of the fact that she had feelings about him magnified by the augmentor. That must be something that Snape over looked because he had to know she would eventually touch the augmentor if everything went according to plan and if she started to return those feelings to Harry Snape's plan would have been shot. Snape thought like everyone else that Hermione's true love was Ron and that was the flaw in his plan. After all the only reason that Snape knew that Harry was in love with Hermione was because of the fact that he had been in his mind. Not even Harry truly knew how he felt until he was affected by the augmentor and the potion.

PS E-mail me if you wish to discuss this further
PPS It is around midnight so if a sentence or two doesn't make sense then it is because I am half asleep
PPPS If I am right about what I said in this review then you are one of the best authors I have ever read anything by.
PPPPS The above stament really means something beacuse I spend on average five hours a day reading short stories, fanfiction, books. or poems deppending on what kind of mood I am in.
PPPPPS Great story.
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From ANON - jake on December 25, 2005
Great story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. I am a big fan of the H/Hr ship and I really like the way this story is written. I don't know wheather or not H/Hr will be togeather at the end of this story but I fear that if there not Harry is going to have to die. I mean I don't think that Harry will be able to live with himself if Hermione follows through with her plan and does not stay with him. That is the only way that Harry will believe that it was not his fault. Not to say that Harry would act like he was planning on killing himself but that he would after he gets Snape and Tom kill himself without any warning. As for what was said in the last chapter in response to asking about what Hermione would do if she toutched the augmentor when Ron was around I don't see how that would be possible. The Order if they had any sense at all would have destored that thing already beacause it is too dangerous and it serves no other purpose than to harm them. That is not even metioning the fact that Hermione would be very careful with it if she knew it was around. I do however think that this plan will be the downfall of Tom and Snape though. It makes sense with what Albus hinted at that love was the key to defeating Tom. I think that Harry can defeat him one of two ways in this story if you use what Albus hinted at. One Harry and Hermione could end up falling in love and they working togeather would defeat Tom and Snape. Or Harry could end up not being with Hermione and go after Tom and Snape with a vengence because they caused him and the one he loves so much pain. The latter would most likely end up with Harry killing himself though. There is a third option as well Harry could defeat Tom because of the love his friends have for him but as this story is showing the Golden trio is slowly unraveling and there is the fact that the love of friends is not as strong as love between two people that result in a marrage. Wow that was hard to word the difference between the two. I hope you found this review helpful. Happy holidays!!!!!!!

PS Please don't try to cause the ship to be Harry/Ron/Hermione. I don't think you will but it doesn't hurt to make the statment anyway.
PPS Update soon. :)
PPPS I relly like writing PS's (Is that proper) oh well!!!
PPPPS Sorry for any typos (is that how you spell it).
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From ANON - beth on December 22, 2005
Wow this is one of the greatest stories i have read,please finish it and write more fanfics.You are really talented.Thamks for writing this and please finish
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From ANON - tabitoo on December 22, 2005
You are amazing!!! This story is AMAZING!!!! I'm in awe of your writing skills. You have indeed been blessed with talent. You have to be a profressional writer...if not then you should be!!!! This story is so great. You should really post it at other sites, like schnoogle or portkey if considered H /Hr or checkmated if considered R/Hr. Fiction Alley is another one you could consider. Even with the NC-17 rating, I think maybe it could pass for an R. It's just such an emotional well told story, I think it should be shared with a wider audiance. Fanfic.net would also be a great site for this story. Though that's just my thoughts on the story, I'm just pleasantly suprised that I found it here. This site is lucky to have this story. I could go on all night but have to stop at some point. Thanks so much for posting again and I can't wait for the next chapter. AMAZING!!!!
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From ANON - Shannon on December 20, 2005
We're all here for the smut, of course, but oh man! You've had me on the verge of tears for the last...what, 5 chapters now? (Just picked up your story today, so ya know) We all know that a happy little rainbow-sunshine it's-all-right-again ending won't be right for this story, but how 'bout bittersweet/silver lining? On the other hand, it's been a while since I've read a good, solid tragedy, and if that's your vision then I can't really argue...
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