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Reviews for #3 ~ You Shouldn\'t Walk About in the Dark

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Applekissis on December 28, 2005
    That wassss greatttttttt!
    I had a feeling it was him..I'm glad I was right!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Dyien on December 16, 2005
    wow u know i kinda xpected the deatheater to be him after a while. cool twist

    ;)
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  • From SataiDelenn on December 07, 2005
    He's such a sadistic bastard and yet we love him anyway. What in the world does that say about us? lol.

    I knew it was he who had abducted her after he started questioning her. I just wanted to figure out why. My guess was that he wanted to teach her a lesson about wandering around alone without thought to her safety and got a little more than he bargained for. Something tells me that if she had let her abductor touch her, then her relationship with Severus would have ended....

    Interesting story.
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 02, 2005
    CAWDOR: Hey there. I read the blog. Good stuff...but this is fantasy fic as well as fan fic. If you want to laugh...go right ahead. :) If you think my Sev is bad, wait till you read about Marcus :) On a more personal note...I know a woman who went with a guy from Haiti who was purported to be about Sev's size (and I saw no reason for her to lie, Made no difference to me)...she was a small woman, really curvy...but she dealt with this guy intimately for quite a while... and according to her, he wasn't the gentlest of lovers. She didn't have any ruptured organs, but according to her, she now has a kind of unsual tilt to her uterus. Sorry for too much info for those of you who didn't REALLY want ta know. And thank you for the review.
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  • From ANON - Cawdor on November 02, 2005
    "'How long?' the man demanded, his voice becoming dangerous.

    "'Thirteen. Maybe fourteen inches,' she said, feeling horribly embarrassed."

    Try this exercise: get a measuring tape. Place the end of it between your legs. Measure fourteen inches up your torso. Mark that spot. Go fetch an anatomy text, and find out what should be sitting where Snape's cock apparently would reach. I'd bet you good money, if I had any, that the answer is not "the cervix." Or anything below the cervix, either.

    Recommended reading, because you badly, badly need it: http://www.livejournal.com/users/kantayra/178138.html Have a look at that section about baseball bat sized cocks and Buffy's spleen. Then at least *consider* doing some editing, here. Come on: there's a line between hot and just plain funny.
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  • From ANON - Linda on October 13, 2005
    Love how you're building this relationship, story by story. Good writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2005
    *Claps* Very very good. I think the way you think ^_^
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 22, 2005
    That was wonderful! A little painful emotionaly on poor Hermione. What a terrible position to be in! I guessed it was him, but knowing you, it could have been anyone! But he loves her...*sighs*. Thanks so much for writing that piece. It helps those of us who are shedding our own tears of goodbye for your stories. Love to read about love afterall! As always Ms_Figg....you are the queen.
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 21, 2005
    hehehe....: )
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 21, 2005
    HAH! I was right! It was Severus! And yay, he told her he loved her!!!!! Giggles!
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on September 21, 2005
    I still wanted it to be Lucius.He's so hot. Could you resurrect him, like Volders in the Goblet of fire, just to add sex-worship value?
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  • From ANON - angel on September 21, 2005
    that was great and im glad he told her he loved her ..... in cant wait in till i read other one of your storys well in till then keep up the great work and later

    angel
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  • From ANON - Catpower on September 21, 2005
    Eeek! The bastard! I hope he never tells Hermione it was him in the shrieking shack. Great writing, as ever but - that man is mean!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on September 21, 2005
    I KNEW IT!!!!! LOL! That was utterly fantastic. What is the next story going to be? When is the next story coming? Can't wait.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 21, 2005
    Wonderful ending! Stupendous! Fabulous! Made me almost think about crying. Soooo glad you preserved dear Severus' snarkiness throughout the 'declaring love' part. Great job! Taa!

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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