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Reviews for #3 ~ You Shouldn\'t Walk About in the Dark

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Addict on September 21, 2005
    You just keep getting better and better...well done. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 21, 2005
    Okay, at first I thought it was Lucius, but then remembered your mention at the end of the sequel about their little games. Then came the quesions and I realized it was Severus. I felt that the way you had written him would make him unsure about how she could truly love him, and being the Slytherin he is, I think this was the best way for him to find out for sure how deep her love could be.

    Great work.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 21, 2005
    Ch 6 - ah, you big tease!! You had me all twisted in knots trying to figure out if it was Severus or someone else. Thank you for letting it be Severus, and for getting both of them to deal with their stuff but in a sneaky way. Now since they play that "game" later on, does he ever confess to her that this was him? More, more - we have to keep you chained to your keyboard!!
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  • From ANON - Joyous on September 21, 2005
    *Sighs* I love your stories, and hate to see them end... But, I do like the way you end them... like I've said before, you have a wonderful way with words... I hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - Scully_m_ on September 21, 2005
    Incredible as always... very bad Severus!

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2005
    good story. story is a little more evil since the last story but good. i seriously think that the deatheater who took hermione is actually severus. and decieded to test her on her loyalty.
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on September 21, 2005
    Damn it woman, if this is Snape at his most twisted, I hope Hermione flattens him when she finds out. I can see how he might need incontravertable proof that she wants and needs only him before he finally gives himselve over to her, but I can't see her letting him get away with all that.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 21, 2005
    Ch 5 - (reader feels woozy .... ) Who IS this Death Eater?!?!?! Where the blazes is the real Severus!
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  • From ANON - Hope on September 21, 2005
    Argh, next chapter. If you keep me in suspense much longer I will do something drastic like eat a pint of ice cream.
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  • From TheAngelOfSilence on September 20, 2005
    Brilliant idea! Keep going. Obviously I am hoping it's Lucius.....is he still dead?
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  • From ANON - JW on September 20, 2005
    Ch 4 -
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on September 20, 2005
    Oh my giddy aunt! Three chapters, children! THREE a-bloody-mazing chapters in less than 12 hours! Holy Moses on roller skates! Abso-bloody-lutley wonderful! thank you! thank you! thank you!

    Now, for all of those trivia-minded people. Very interesting that our dear author used Scheherazade (sp?) as a reference to this wonderful tribute of smutty goodness (tame as it may be at this point in the story, it still deserves the title.) Reason being: Arabian Nights (translated by Richard Burton, also known as Tales of 1001 Nights) was actually outlawed in the U.S. for the LONGEST time due to racy content. Yes, ladies and gentlemen, actually OUTLAWED, as in, you couldn't own a copy, you couldn't import the book. And all I can think in response to that is thank heavens the powers that be back then didn't have our wonderful Ms_Figg's work as a comparison. Darling, we would be soooo lost without you providing entertainment for us and allowing us to live vicariously thru dear sex-pot Hermione, (alright, alright. and Severus the wonder-dong for all those gents out there.)

    Wonderful chapters! Can't wait to read more! Taa!

    Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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  • From Rebeka on September 20, 2005
    the death eater is snape, isn't it.He knows hermione likes pain and he is going to give her some isn't he.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 20, 2005
    Interesting.... i have a small incling that the Death Eater is Severus.... but that just be my weird brain! Lol! I look forward to your update!
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  • From ANON - angel on September 20, 2005
    yes more more and the mad man is right snape dose love her now when he save her he should tell her and she should tell him that she love him plese update more and soon i love it in till then later

    angel
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