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Reviews for Striving For Something Not Temporary

By : DirtSquirrel

From ANON - lilycat on November 14, 2005
I stupidly didn't notice the all caps notice that Ch. 11 was up until today! I kept thinking you'd just been editing or something. Anyways....

Yahoo! I love how unique this story is. It's definitely the only one I've ever read with Draco FARTING! And the Dutch Oven! *cackles gleefully* I must admit that this is something my husband introduced me to. Astonishingly enough, I grew up with three flatulence obsessed siblings but never learned about the Dutch Oven until my future husband merrily demonstrated the concept. Eesh. Boys. Any how, it is SO hilarious that Draco would do and say things like that (calling Blaise ass-crack was another moment that I particularly enjoyed!

It's a unique take, but a good one I think. Yes, they are wizards (rich ones in Draco's case) but they are also 17 year olds. What teenagers don't have a bit of that sense of humor? Come to think of it, it lasts much longer than that. Anyhow, it makes me giggle and I love the way you write them!

There is something very endearing about Hermione and Draco's relationship. It has that "Awww" factor in spades. The ending was brilliant- Hermione's realization that she couldn't imagine life without our darling Draco. Sigh... I can't imagine it either.

I hope that you are moving past your insecurity because I greatly enjoy your writing! *Hugs you!* You are up for DL awards too aren't you? Congrats! It's awesome that your first story got nominated!
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From ANON - Evil Turtle on November 09, 2005
ALllright New chap. Nicely done dutch over
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From ANON - moonjameskitten on November 09, 2005
Awwww !! I love Draco saying 'baby' ! and keep on reading again and again ! this is so ...sweet from his mouth ! Totally fits Hermione ! Again, I can only say that this story is really SEXY, and then, you put some 'danger' ... so it is SEXIER !! You can guess that I really CAN'T WAIT for the next chaptersssss to come ??

Feeling warm when reading such tenderness and love between Draco and Hermione. Keep on writing, please ?

Moonie
xxx
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From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2005
i love the story, update soon
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From ANON - Jessi on November 08, 2005
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I love this Hermione. I lived in England for three years and I think that more kids that age smoke than not and I probably would too if I was under the pressure that she was (and if it did not make me nauseous.) I think that you could make Draco a little tougher without him being a git in the process. Draco is Power HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
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From Chavela25 on November 08, 2005
I did! I radically enjoyes it.
I'm so glad to see an update. This is one of my favorite stories so I was totally psyched to see your new installment.
Thanks! That made my night.
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From ANON - hunidew on November 07, 2005
Your writing is absolutly beautiful. You capture an outlook of life that is truly real. Just remeber that you can always consider someone elses opinions but never forget your own for they are the ones that truly matter. keep writing with all your hearts content.
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From ANON - hunidew on November 07, 2005
Your writing is absolutly beaytifull. You capture an true outlook of lie. You can always consider someone elses opinions but never forget your own for those are the ones that truly matter. Keep writing with all your hearts content.
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From ANON - moonjameskitten on November 07, 2005
Awww ! what a great chapter ! I can't wait to read what's going to happen ! 'human sacrifice' !? wow ! And I love the growing up relationship between Draco and Hermione ! Tender, hilarious, hot ! what a mixture ! Keep on writing, please !!

Moonie
xxx
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From ANON - Stacy on November 07, 2005
I loved this new chapter. I can't wait to read the next one!
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From ANON - lilycat on October 25, 2005
Don't apologize! It hasn't been that long AND everyone should understand that computer problems (falling under the category of real-life interferences) happen. Hope your woes end soon, and we will be here eagerly waiting when you do update!
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From ANON - moonjameskitten on October 24, 2005
Oh ! wow !!! OMG that was intense ! and the loving, the sharing, the coming danger !! I looooove Draco being cuddled-lover and tender sweet ! Amazing how we can so easyly imagine the real Draco Malfoy (the one of the movie) being possible to called Hermione 'baby' !! that 's sooo lovely ! the power of you fiction makes us think that the unthinkable CAN possibly happened (in our Dramione fans' hear) : Love between Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy !

Keep on enchanting us !

Moonie
xxx
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From ANON - moonjameskitten on October 24, 2005
Oh my god ! this is a spectacular hot piece of writing !! I love it ! love it so much ! Their growing feelings, their passion ! their strenghness and of course, they weakness ! The sex-scene is wonderful ! so impetious characters ! you described them so well !! I came there and found that I've already missed 2 chapters !
gonna read them ! gonna read them !

Amazing work !

*hug*

Moonie
xxx
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From ANON - liz on October 23, 2005
great story i hope that your comp get's fixed soon... I'm looking forward to the next chapter... I was wondering if there is a way to be informed when the next chapter is posted.. if there is please let me know.. any one.. read this story it's great.. oh and i love that they both smoke.. being a smoker my self I totally understand about the whole it relaxes your from school and other stress
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From ANON - luna luck on October 23, 2005
Sorry to hear about your computer....will be waiting patiently for your next update
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