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Reviews for Striving For Something Not Temporary

By : DirtSquirrel
  • From ANON - HiddenAllusion on October 22, 2005
    Thanks for your explanations to my questions! I'm always afraid that it'll be misinterpreted, so I'm glad you didn't take offense. Lucius escaping is an interesting twist... can't wait to see what's up next. I hope you can fix your computer relatively painlessly... or at least with less pain than you've had so far. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - BigBad on October 22, 2005
    That sux, I don't know whats going on with Dell. If it's a hardware problem and it looks like it is then it's not a virus.
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  • From ANON - sarabee on October 16, 2005
    Oh Wow i love what you have done with your story! It was Great!
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  • From ANON - Lrnd on October 16, 2005
    I love this story so much, whenever I want to read a good story, I just reread this one
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  • From ANON - Sunny on October 16, 2005
    Your story is great...Draco is so sweet!!!!My goodness you are funny...the "is that is" line in ch 9 was freakin hilarious I wasn't expecting it!!! Please update soon...your doing a great job!!!
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 16, 2005
    A riveting chapter- I liked Draco's assertive streak towards the end, also the protective streak- two of my favorite Draco traits. I like your Hermione quite a bit- she has grown on me considerably. She's very lovable- doesn't take any crap (like the canon Hermione we know and love), and you've manifested her rebellious streak in an interesting way. It's certainly a fresh perspective (something which I often feel is lacking in my own writing) which I also enjoy.

    I just read the last 2 chapters, and I have to tell you- I LOVED your sex scene. It might have been the cutest thing I've ever read. I think it's made funnier by how true it rings. How often do we let things like that slip out before realizing how they sound? Poor Hermione and Draco- but they laughed about it and I really enjoyed that too.

    I am loving this story- there is a terrific blend of humor, romance, sarcasm, drama, etc. I am sure I am missing some elements, but it's late and I am on way too much cold medicine to try and formulate logical thoughts. Speaking of which- I apologize for the rambling and incoherent nature of the review. I'm probably too out of it to be attempting to string together ideas, but I wanted to drop you a note while I was thinking about it. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2005
    I love this story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on October 13, 2005
    Loved the way you stuck with Draco's feelings in this chapter. It's nice to see that side of him. I was captivated.
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  • From ANON - KawaiiRyu on October 12, 2005
    Yay, sex! This story is very well written, and I can't wait to see where it goes!
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  • From ANON - jchaser on October 12, 2005
    Your story is just incredible and this chapter was just mind blowing. Loved Draco's kiss to the sleeping Hermione. Was so achingly sweet. And their first time was wonderfully written...hot, romantic and just great. Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
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  • From ANON - Sexy relly on October 06, 2005
    LOL good way to end that chap. Please contine soon! Lol who would have tought the prince of slytherin farts lololololololololololololol
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  • From cruttan on October 06, 2005
    I forgot to add that the farting conversation cracked me up! Very original- never would have pictured that for Draco, which is what makes it so funny!
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  • From cruttan on October 06, 2005
    Wow! I have been seeing this pop up for awhile but haven't had a chance to read until today and I'm really glad I did! I see that you, like myself, are a fan of Crookshanks, which I applaud of course. I like that Draco was calling her baby in the last chapter- it makes him seem even sexier, if that's possible.

    I am really looking forward to the rest of this.

    Catherine
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  • From ANON - HiddenAllusion on October 06, 2005
    I finished it! I was ever so sad when I saw there wasn't a next chapter button... but I expect you'll fix that eventually, so all's good. If you have an update email list would you add me to it? I definitely like this, although the smoking/language thing still surprises me... Malfoy is very easy to believe (gotta love him), but Hermione just doesn't seem to fit. Maybe justify her change a little? Just a thought. I liked the scene with Ginny, and Malfoy smelling seems to be a recurring theme... and it always makes me laugh. Anyway, this review is becoming ridiculously long so I'll stop singing your praises. Excellent chapter, excellent story! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - HiddenAllusion on October 06, 2005
    I love the wording of the dream sequence... the phrasing and the imagery is very well done. And they kissed!!! So that made me happy. *grin* There are a couple of grammar things in here, nothing a beta can't fix, but enough that I notice them. Oh, and tense confusion... I think it's in their thought processes, but everything gets a little confused. you might consider italicising their thoughts, or putting them in single quotations. Sorry, I think I might be just a *little* obsessive... anyway, other than that, I still love it! The tickling/stink scene had me giggling to myself. Anyway, I'm off to read more... thank you!
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