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Reviews for Striving For Something Not Temporary

By : DirtSquirrel
  • From ANON - HiddenAllusion on October 06, 2005
    Good grammar! I'm already swooning... not being able to read stories because of bad grammar drives me absolutely crazy, so I'm very pleased with this! I like the story and the way you're developing it, although Hermione seems a little out of character. I really can't imagine her smoking and swearing quite as much as she does... will there be justification for it later? Haha... and I've just realised that there are another four chapters to go, so I'll shut up for now and review later. Excellent beginning!
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  • From ANON - moonjameskitten on October 06, 2005
    God ! How haven't I found you before ? How have'nt I read your amazing story ! This was an incredibly great story to read ! I love you style - very true and animated - the way you write Draco and Hermione's characterizations ! As a true Dramione, that was EXACTELY what I was looking for ! Instinctive passion, passionate and growing relationship between them, recognation and knowlegdgement of both of their feelings ! Admirable ! Refreshing ! Please, keep on writing that fantastic fiction, cause, I need my tender and sweet and teasing Draco and I need my fragile, out-of-control and vulnerable Hermione !

    I am fan. Really, I am.

    Moonie
    xxxx

    Ps : I want to nominate your story at the 'Dangerous Liaisons awards site'. would you mind if I do so ?
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 06, 2005
    I love it! I needed a good laugh and something to lighten my heart some, and thank you for providing it. I can't wait for the update, and more info into Hermione's dreams, and what Draco saw.
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  • From ANON - sexy relly on October 05, 2005
    Great new chapter. Cant wait to see wat happens between them next!
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  • From ANON - Faeriewing on October 05, 2005
    Shivers going down my spine...can't wait to read more!!!! I love your story... I love the inner turmoil...I love the conflists! Keep writing! Please!!!
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  • From ANON - jchaser on October 05, 2005
    Oh my...your story is so wonderfully written and absolutely breath taking intense that I just about died when there wasn't a "next chapter' at the bottom. Your writing style is so enjoyable to read and their dialogue sounds so dead on. Draco's words to her were just heart breaking. Cannot wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Evil Turtle on October 04, 2005
    i LovE your new Chapters. It is so nicely done. I loved The crazy cat lady part too.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 04, 2005
    GOD.... what a great chapter... i hope hermione let's him in....
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  • From ANON - zara_luvs_qts on October 03, 2005
    I love it! Keep going, cuz this story kix ass...that and the fact that I fully admire the fact that you made them smokers. :D It's about time we were admitted back into society and not ostracized b/c of that lung cancer crap... lol. :D
    Kudos to you.
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  • From ANON - Princess_Malfoy on October 03, 2005
    Nothing like a good smoke to clear your mind, eh? You know, I have found, some of the best conversations I've ever had with people occurred on a smoke break. Anyways, I love your story and I absolutely love your style. Your story flows unlike some I've read that are really choppy. Keep up the good work and update soon!

    Your loyal reader,

    Princess_Malfoy
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on October 02, 2005
    Very sexy and well written. I'm looking forward to what Draco will do with such a confused Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Sommer on September 29, 2005
    Loved the last line.
    Great Part
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  • From ANON - readymate on September 28, 2005
    Great start i love How them two act together it is funny as hell and pot and kettle refence was nicely done!
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  • From ANON - sarabee on September 27, 2005
    MORE! i love it! don't you dare stop!
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  • From ANON - EvilTurtle on September 21, 2005
    I LOVE It
    please give me more!
    If you stop I will cry
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