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Reviews for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - firewall on October 01, 2005
    All Right, An early morning chapter for me too!!! Most impressive that Severus feels his vulnerability in the coming fight and expressed it so beautifully. I had to laugh at the deatheaters' garb...most appropriate. Hmmm, Snape is not at Snape Manor, who will Eli tell? Are we going to see Doby? Hmmmmm.... Run, little house elf, run!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 01, 2005
    I can't believe how fast you seem to get these chapters out. And let
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  • From ANON - Stormi on October 01, 2005
    Chapter 26 - Go Leaf Ear! Hopefully, between him and Eli they will be able to help Severus and Hermoine. Write more soon please.

    Stormi


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  • From ANON - angel on October 01, 2005
    man i still fell sorry for Annadale she sould have let the elf take is to him ... i hop he get is good well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - HYpatia on October 01, 2005
    What was that which you stated earlier, Ms. Figg......about "too many lemons.." ? You've proven that there is no such thing, try as you might otherwise.

    Brava!!
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  • From slygriff21 on September 30, 2005
    OH NO! WHat are Severus and Hermione going to do now? I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - JW on September 30, 2005
    Ch 25 - Shropshire Gardens? When is that scheduled for - after the picnic? Hermione and Severus should've limited the itinerary so that the picnic was the only option. By the time they get to Shropshire Gardens (if it's after the picnic) they may be so tense that they'll make mistakes. Eeps! Poor Leaf Ear; too bad Draco doesn't throw him a sock or something. Ooh, you're good at drawing out the tension! Wicked....
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 30, 2005
    I knew you would post another chapter before I had to go to bed. Thank you. Good thing that Dumbledore created that marauder-type map of Severus and Hermione. It sounds like they may need it. Ohhh, that poor little barmaid. She should have listened to the little house elf. Silly girl.
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  • From ANON - Holly on September 30, 2005
    HA! I finally figured out how to review!! XD! It was right there the whole time. Anyways. YAY! I love your writing style.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 30, 2005
    man Annadale i hope you just owl him the itinerary ...i fell sooooooo sorry you ... in till next time later and i hope is will be soon in till then keep up the aweosme work later

    angel
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  • From ANON - JW on September 30, 2005
    Ch 24 - nice surprise, to have Annadale be the witch golem from RoR. Stupid girl, to sell out S&H just for the promise of a shag. Oh well, I just hope Draco and his buddies also get "something pretty horrible" in future chapters. BTW, my fave line in this chapter: "If this were to be his last night on earth, he intended to go out with a bang. And..." Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on September 30, 2005
    How do you do it?! I just love it!!! Such wonderful writing, sweetie! I can never get enough of these two! I can well imagine Snape taking advantage (in a good, enjoyable way!) of a drunken Hermoine! And it's good to know that I have a common thread with Hermoine, for I, too, am a "silly" drunk! Ah, where is MY Snape during these times of lowered inhibitions? Not that I need lowered inhibitions to let Snape have his way with me! Please update soon with those delicious lemons you promised! Happy writing, mi chica! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Sloppy drunken kisses,
    Killer K ;}
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  • From ANON - Stormi on September 30, 2005
    Chapter 24 - I don't envy the bar maid but that's what you get when your bad. Can hardly wait for the lemons ahead! Wirte more soon please!

    Stormi


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  • From ANON - Stormi on September 30, 2005
    Chapter 23 - Did Severus test the wine to see if it was poisoned? If not he should have. What an easy way to get to them.

    Nice sentimental chapter. Keep up the great work.


    Stormi


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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 30, 2005
    Im so looking forward to the next chapter after that one! Jeez that must have been hard for Severus to restrain himself!
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