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Reviews for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Allie on September 26, 2005
    It's all out on the table now - everything is perfectly set up.

    All of your fics kick the crap outta everything else I've ever read. I can actually feel what Hermione is feeling, what all the characters are feeling - it's great!

    Bring on the wars!!!
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  • From ANON - JW on September 26, 2005
    Ch 13 - this was so sweet and sad! Dumbledore really touched on all the salient points - Severus' reasons for his actions, and what is at stake for her success. He acknowledges caring for both S&H, and changes Hermione's motivation to succeed from "I'll prove Severus wrong, that I *can* protect myself" to "I love Severus." I do hope she does her five consecutive escapes all in one night so they can get back to real shagging, and to killing off Draco. Doesn't that sound romantic? Killing off Draco?
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 26, 2005
    Umm.....need to amend my last editorial review statement. Hermione needs to give it back to Severus good. But not run away like a scared rabbit. She's a Griffindor....a lioness. Time to give Snape a taste of his own medicine!!!!


    Ms. Figg....I'm sure J.K. Rowling is reading this somewhere with her jaw on the floor, with a look a jealousy that would make Snape proud. But that's not important right now. There's no way she can incorporate any of this in her books, for obvious reasons. Go, Ms. Figg....go!!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 26, 2005
    Ms. Figg-

    Aarrgghhh!! I'm DYING here!!! How dare you leave us all with such a tantalizing cliffhanger!!! I sincerely hope the greasy git has some semblance of rudimentary decency concerning Hermione and any future interactions, but he probably doesn't!!! Ooohhhh...I hope she gives it to him good...since his memories are now in that pensieve...by the way, Ms. Figg...please take care to see that the house elves don't accidentally dump out the memories. Go, Hermione!!
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on September 26, 2005
    AAAAAAAAH!
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on September 26, 2005
    great!

    yuo really keep gooing fast.

    i`m absolutly fascinatet with your storry, and check quite a few times a day.
    you have me

    greetings

    sandra
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 26, 2005
    Oh i am glad Severus isn't cheating - being sneaky by being able to see how much she has improved - but not cheating!

    Well done on the chapter and I look forward to the explosive chapter to come!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 26, 2005
    OK!!! here we go!! *rubs hands together grinning like an idiot* I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! Hurry please Ms_Figg! I never beg you, but this is a special request. I simply can not wait too long for this, for I might die of anticipation!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 26, 2005
    Severus isn't going to cheat is he? He is a bad boy if he is!

    I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 26, 2005
    No kidding...*stops biting on fingernails to write the rest* This is going to be a bit more intense than I thought. I don't know how it flew past my head that Severus would be angry at her new founf confidence. But he needs to draw strength from somewhere too I suppose. This is like the Clash of the Titans or something. Two very formidable foes going at it, under the cove of darkness. A silent war. Man....I can not wait for the first "battle" to take place. We are all in for a right treat!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 26, 2005
    While I love the fact she is confident, I think that has more to do with those probably concealed weapons she had made. I love that she was smart enough to think of making these things. But I would hope she isn't going to rely solely on those things to get her thorugh this. I don't want to see her fail, but I would also want her to realize that in the outside world she might not always have those weapons. That was the whole point of Severus wanting her to learn hand to hand fighting.

    Curious for more.
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  • From ANON - jane on September 26, 2005
    OK I am aware that you have a life and probably need boring things like sleep food etc. I know you have done an excellent job updating but this is getting so excruciatingly exciting. You portray every character so brilliantly. Unbelievable. Please continue please please please
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  • From ANON - lemonade on September 26, 2005
    He's quite the sadistic bastard, isn't he? I hope Miss Granger kicks his butt up and down the dungeon corridor.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 26, 2005
    Ch 12 - yikes! Is he going to forget himself and REALLY hurt her?? Is she really that angry still that he thought she wouldn't be able to fight him off? That's a pretty nasty comment about using his bits for a male enhancement potion.... better tell the other teachers and students to clear the halls!
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  • From ANON - Sonia on September 25, 2005
    He he he, what an interesting story.. Can't wait for more. I really like the way that you described all of the defence moves that Hermione learnt. Did you study some form of Martial Arts??? Anyway keep up the great work and I will be watching this fic closely for up and coming updates.
    Cheers, Sonia
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