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Reviews for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Kat1441 (anon) on September 23, 2005
    So she doesn't need to know she supposedly number 4 on a list of people. Gotcha. Not that the order seems important, you've knocked 30-something people already without a single attack against Hermione having occured. Good point, I had forgotten the commercial spell developer job, which makes it seem even more unlikely that she would be allowed to remain at the school if she's in so much danger, she's not even a teacher. I notice that you didn't comment on the lack of attacks, or any indication of Deatheater interest in Hermione, other than Severus of course. I agree with Lemonade, she should hate him by the end of this. Of course we know that you've established your happy ever after, this is just making it seem incredibly ridiculous. I mean really, oh I love you so much, I am going to break your bones for your own good, and she buys that? Whatever. I think I'll wait for whatever next story is in the series, as I mentioned I have enjoyed the majority of what you've written, and I hope there is more. I'll just skip this one.
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  • From ANON - JW on September 23, 2005
    Ch 4 - ah, but will Harry let it slip that she's fourth on the list.... If they wanted to not be seen on the broom, should they have flown at night when the darkness could have hidden them?
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  • From ANON - Megan on September 23, 2005
    Ignore everyone else, please. You're brilliant to have this evil a Snape. I assume this fic is labelled "N/C" for a reason. There must be a way to make that disturbingly erotic. Go for it, and keep it detailed :)
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on September 23, 2005
    I wonder what wicked stuff you will have Severus do to her... Hmmmmm
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on September 22, 2005
    it's sooo good to see you writing again, and so quickly too! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on September 22, 2005
    JW: Training starts tonight...one word...Abstinence

    ANON: Snapeslover11 is pretty much on point. All I can ask is that you continue to read or bail on this one. Hope you see it through though.

    LEMONADE: I'm sure Hermione will utilize whatever is necessary. She's brilliant after all. Being muggle-born allows her to think in a manner outside the wizard-norm, which is a big advantage. What isn't available, she could probably create. I agree however, helpful doodads are definitely in order, and in the words of Mr. F. Gump, that's all I have to say about that.

    ALL: Let's not underestimate Hermione, alright? You know she's a zealot at anything she applies herself to. You see what happened to poor Ron. She thought he was Severus. Didn't hesitate. For all we know...she'll beat the crap out of/escape Sev every single time. lol He might be agonizing over nothing, underestimating "his woman" as men often do. Let's just see where the story goes a'ight? a'ight? Much love
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  • From ANON - lemonade on September 22, 2005
    Hmmm.... this is a BAD idea of Severus'. Very bad. He/Albus could have motivated her with the information and pictures BEFORE resorting to harming her 'for her own good'. I'm thinking Severus will deserve to lose her by the end of this, if we're to go by the way he is talking. I won't blame her, either, at this point. And where are the aurors hunting down these death eaters?? Will she be able to wear any portkeys or such? Are those viable options in this fic? She's just to try to get away from him, right. But 5 TIMES IN A ROW?? What a zealot. I'm looking forward to Hermione kicking his backside in the further chapters. ;D
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  • From ANON - JW on September 22, 2005
    Ch 3 - eeks..... This chapter was lovely in just how much Severus loves her, funny with Ron's reaction to Hermione's defense, and heartbreaking in how much Severus fears for her life and fears she will hate him. Now, if her "training starts tonight," why is she leaving in the morning?
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 22, 2005
    Oh Anon...I must respectfully disagree with you. I see it as Severus actually caring about her to show her those photos. She wasn't taking it seriously. All she wanted to do was fidle around in the lab and shag him. He had to show her what was real. Secondly, the safest place to be is Hogwarts. Everyone knows that. So he is talking about the times that she is not under his nose. Maybe in Hogsmeade? Maybe outside the grounds? Who knows. And finally Dumbledore, he is always, in my mind anyway, been the type that would want Hermione to learn by any means necessary. He did tell Severus to keep it "quiet", whatever his means were. He really wasn't told, was he? But I guess, he does know..Dumbledore seems to know everything. Anyhoo...I love it and think it is wonderful, like everything Ms_Figg writes. It can only get BETTER from here on out!
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  • From ANON - McHell on September 22, 2005
    WOW!
    I'm quite excited about this fic. I've loved everything you've done so far. I hope you make this quite intense and heart clenching.
    More soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2005
    What is the point? Strikes me more as your Severus just wants the chance to beat the shit out of Hermione. I have yet to see a "real" attack on Hermione, so where does all the supposed concern come from? The only person who has attempted to harm the girl has been Severus. At this point the girl needs to be looking for a new job, and a new lover. Showing her those photos seems to have served no purpose other than to terrorize her, not to instill healthy fear, but actually part of some ridiculous mind game. I find it hard to believe anyone's version of Dumbledore would agree to this nonsense taking place in a scholl she is supposedly teaching in. How is she supposed to focus on her job if she's under attack by another member of the staff? I also fail to see why this is the first she has heard of "the list", if she is so high up it why wasn't she immediately warned whent he list was discovered? If she is such a target why is she even allowed to remain at the school, surely she's endangering the children with her very presence? i thourghly enjoyed most of the previous stories, but this one makes no sense to me at all!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 22, 2005
    This is going to be so hard for them, but I'm glad she has finally realized she's got to focus. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on September 22, 2005
    Really, Ms. Figg!! You know I love a mean, nasty Severus as much as the next wench, but aren't you making him just a tad too evil here?? Wouldn't it be better to have Hermione sharpen her wandless magic skills instead? Or maybe that wouldn't be as much fun for Snape. I'm seeing dark things ahead!
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  • From ANON - Allie on September 22, 2005
    Oh it's like my dream come true, a new story! I read the other fic, too, Hermione walking alone. I had an inkling as to who it was during one part...

    This fic, however, is wow... You are one of the best writers I've come across, and I've been reading fanfic for over 6 years. I'm anxious to see how Hermione's training at the Headquarters is going to go, and of course how she'll react to Attack-You-When-You-Least-Expect-It Snape. He won't "lose" Hermione in the end... Will he? If this is supposed to be like a branch off "What Was I Thinking?" then he can't! He can't!

    ...And thank goodness you didn't lower Sev to showering Hermione's rooms with roses. Eck. That is *not* the Sev we all know and love! Not at all!

    Looking forward to to the next update! And I'm happy I have something to look forward to every day again! :)
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on September 22, 2005
    Oh no!! I am so angry right now! How could you do this???!!! No sex? For weeks? That's like...10 chapters???? So he's going to do "terrible things" to her? Oh no. But hermione loves him. She will remember that he's doing it for her own good...right? RIGHT? Oh and btw, yes...I was wrong. It wasn't Severus...just Ron. *sighs* I hope you updated quickly. I can not go a long time without updates. I look forward to your story so much everyday. I get all excited when I see an new chapter!

    Thanks Ms_Figg!
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