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Reviews for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - anya on October 02, 2005
    I am at a loss for words. Utterly brilliant, doesn't seem to do this justice. There are so many elements to this story. It's spellbinding, so original... and... well... brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 02, 2005
    Missed me? *lol* I have been gone for a couple of days, and look at what I come back to! Yeah! OK, so I loved the 'flowers while I breathe' scene. Sheer beauty. I loved it. The fight was very graphic and exciting, of course. I was very worried for moment when both of them were at Death Eater's mercy. But....hooray for house elves! Man, they come to the rescue all the time! Eli is just the cutest. Master and his secret....too precious. I am happy Hermione was the one who killed Draco. At least the other Death Eaters will know a new threat is out there and not dare to come back for more! Lovely as always. It is so nice to read more than one chapter at a time! Looking forard to your lemons ahead!
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  • From ANON - Koda on October 02, 2005
    Lemons are tasty!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2005
    oh oh oh so good!! you are SUCH a great writer!! i just love your stories and i just can't wait for the next chapter to come up!!!! UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 02, 2005
    Wow! You wrote Draco's death brilliantly! Well done! I love the way you incorporated the House - elves into it too... it was brilliant! It left me speechless for a few moments so that should give you some idea how brilliant it was!
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  • From ANON - Holly on October 02, 2005
    *cries* The ending! ..So sweet! *cheers* THEY WON! And no one died. Except Draco. But he's an ass, no one likes him. lol! @ the house-elves. Couldn't you just imagine that? XD
    Anyways. Another great job done!! Woo! Go Ms_Figg. You're my hero!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 02, 2005
    Great chapter. Good action and I'm glad it was Hermione who got Draco. He deserved it and she deserved to know that she was the one to do it after all he had done.
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on October 02, 2005
    Draco - unrepentant to the last. Well, I suppose we all have our own idea of Paradise.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 02, 2005
    WOW! That was a scene and a half! It was very powerfully written and kept me at the edge of my seat the entire time. You gave no real indication that they would be able to win against the deatheaters. Draco had to go...otherwise as Minerva thought, the killings would continue. Draco was too firm in his beliefs and they would never let him rest until Hermione, Snape and others were removed from the earth.

    I hope you update soon, we need a little closure to this part of the story. I'm saying this part of the story because I'm certain you will find another plot to involve these two in...they just won't leave you alone, will they? Wonderfully written.
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  • From ANON - Stormi on October 02, 2005

    Chapter 29 - WELL DONE! It was very realistic and filled with emotion, which gave strength to the story line and characters. Draco's hatred almost gave me shivers. I cackled with glee when Eli, Leaf Ear, and the rest showed up to help. (Vicious little creatures when pissed off.)


    The tender moment at the end between Severus and Hermione was also very touching. Hopefully, you
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  • From goddessnape on October 02, 2005
    bloody briliant!! I believe you that this was a hard chapter to write but you did an excellent job :)
    well, now we just have to wait for the happy ending...lol (and maybe some lemons?)
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on October 02, 2005
    You are really great!!!!

    Your storry is breathtaking and I hope you will write a lot more, even after the end of this fic.


    Thank you

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Filauria on October 02, 2005
    gosh. normally i don't like it when severus gives hermione flowers--he doesn't seem to be one for trite gestures--but the way you've written it is just perfect :) i love your stories!
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 02, 2005
    Ch. 29 - AHHHH! YAY! The little bouncing ferret is dead! WOO HOO!!!!! Oh, I'm so glad you made them survive, yaaaaaaaaay! I love a nice ending that doesn't result in death, hehhehehe! Severus and Hermione don't need to die now. They have much too much intelligence and brilliaance to be taken from the world just yet. HAHA! I really hope this is persuading you to keep them alive for a long time, muahahahaha! Well fun read as always. Toodles!
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  • From ANON - JW on October 02, 2005
    Ch 28 - ack! Do I want the next chapter tonight or tomorrow .... hmm, if you promise to not kill Leaf Ear, Eli, or the other house elves, I can wait until tomorrow, 'cuz if you post tonight you might get impatient and kill off an elf, and I don't want that. Thanks for explaining about the park names - if only Hermione hadn't been so unclear in her itinerary!
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