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By : cruttan
  • From on November 22, 2005
    can't wait to read more. I had to read it all before i reviewed. I loved the sexiness of Draco. and the total approval of both of their parents. I could see Hermione down in Draco's dungeons, only for sex games, could be interesting. I was expecting Hermione's mom to give Draco a picture of Hermione as a baby running around naked, it would have been too cute.
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  • From ANON - Vashka on November 21, 2005
    Erhm... So I didn't review the last chapter. Eep! My only excuse was that I have had some horrible RL issues (and I've been sick). bleh. So I'll try to leave an extra-special review this time! I think your story is turning out to be a cute little piece of fluff. Very enjoyable... like cotten candy. Or marshmallows. mmmm... am making myself hungry. Anyway, The progression of the relationship is going well. Meeting the parents is a very big step. Usually I don't like Hermione's parents in a fanfic because I despise original characters, but your parents were pretty believable. And likable- thanks for that! Although I was initially surprised by Richard's quick acceptance of Draco, I can see that it works in a way. Not too shabby, but perhaps you should have lengthened their animosity? It makes for good hunor, anyway :P And the smut... you have such a lovely knack for description. mmm... Keep up the good work Catherine, and I'll heep reading!

    PS- I am trying out the LJ thing as well and also get confuzzled (username vashka_kat). I may try to friend you in the near future, if I can figure out how to do it :P
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on November 21, 2005
    Nice scene at the Granger household. LOL Such a protective dad! Good thing Draco took it so well. And the sex was yummy too. It seems Draco is beginning to get comfortable with the L word - good for him! Looking forward to more.

    Oh, yeah, someone did hack into my story. :( A bit disappointing when that happens. It could have been worse though. He or she could have added a really bad chapter. LOL I guess I should look on the bright side.


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  • From ANON - SlythErin on November 21, 2005
    Hehehe...I love angry Mr. Granger. It totally reminds me of bringing my ex home for Christmas a few years back. I was raised in the midwest, very rural community, and my oldest brother is probably one of the biggest redneck grease monkeys you'll ever lay eyes upon. Needless to say when you bring a strict PETA worshipping vegan home for him to converse with, hilarity definately ensues.

    Great chapter! Can't wait to see what those two are up to next.

    Hehehe...Poor Crookshanks...so much he reminds me of my kitters...
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  • From ANON - Debi on November 20, 2005
    Oh Cat!

    This just keeps getting better and better I love it so much!!!
    I love the last chapter, meeting Mr. and Mrs. Granger! Perfect!
    Just to funny! I love how you made Draco so caring towards Hermione,
    But the same time he's still himself in ways. Like his familiar smirks.
    Or his sense of having to tease Hermione, or her friends. But you know,
    In a nice way. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Hope your Thanksgiving,
    Is a wonderful one and Take care dear, post more soon.



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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 20, 2005
    Yay! another great chapter!! I have to admit I was really nervous about how it would go with Hermione's parents, but I was so happy with how it went! I loved how after a rocky start with draco and Hermione's father really got along with the conversation concerning hermione's safety...that was really good. Oh and I love the smug draco remark when they were leaving( the i told you so...all parents love me lol) that was so draco...I love it when those bits of him peak out...teasingly of course!

    as always, amazing job on this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Michelle
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  • From ANON - tashi on November 20, 2005
    beautiful
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 19, 2005
    There I finished. Wow! I am so glad that I found your story. I loved your representation of Lucius and Narcissa and the fact that they represented a large portion of the comedy in the story. Gotta love that sexy Draco.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2005
    what the fuck is wrong with you? this was good but now it sucks. are tehy going to ever have real sex?
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 19, 2005
    I've seen this story up many times and for whatever reason, never opened it to read. Well, I'm kicking myself now because I have been missing a really good story and good writing. I'm only on chapter three but will definitely continue reading and reviewing.
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  • From ANON - anon on November 19, 2005
    Why do you keep reposting your story when there aren't any updates? Its really annoying because then you can't see what is really new!

    Besides, your story doesn't *need* the extra reposting. Its 14 chapters long, you've got people hooked. And when people like a story they check back for it. So: extra reposting not necessary just to get hits or reviews.

    Thanks, I really do love your story (especially this last chapter ;D), just tired of same the same stories over and over again when nothing has changed....
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  • From ANON - Witchiepooh on November 19, 2005
    "Draco stopped, shivering slightly.
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  • From ANON - Kristal on November 18, 2005
    yey! yey! i got an actual review!! woot!
    not just one of those "oh thnx for reading!"
    lol i love it!! cus i usually get one of those! :(
    i wanna know what Mr. Granger said to Draco.. it must've been good if DRACO cowered! (sp?)
    poor crookshanks, she left him! but aren't we all glad?? lol
    well i wont promote anymore fear in you! lol i stopped by your live journal! (but you obviously knew tht)
    so ill ask nicely: "Please Please Please with a cherry on top, update asap!"
    kk thnx
    bye
    Kristal
    (emails, oh i love emails!)
    P.S. im kinda hyper...if you cant tell! :-P
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  • From ANON - aleja21 on November 18, 2005
    hey great chap and thanx for letting me know you posted the newxt chap. this was really good.
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  • From ANON - Kenda on November 18, 2005
    Oh what a treat a new chapter of Catalyst and I get to see Goblet of Fire on the same day Difference being i have critisms of GOF and i don't about your update.

    The scene with Draco and Hermione's dad was brilliant, I loved the way he was being the protective father and terrifying Draco and then how they bonded over Hermione's lack of awareness for her safety,not too nice for poor Hermione to endure, but very funny to read about. I think I loved it all the more because it reminded me of my other half and my dad back when they first met, except my mom didn't put a stop to it instead she joined in. Also loved Draco's sympathy for Mione's Dad when faced with the prospect of two angry Granger women. The whole scene was just perfect and I adored it, the relationship and characterisation of Hermione's parents was great. The similarity between her and her mom and also the contrast they bare too Draco's family was fantastic. Also liked the way we get to see some of Draco's feelings towards his relationship with his parents, which was very touching without being too much. The 'love you back' thing was very sweet too! You never fail to make me smile when I read your updates.

    I'm quite excited by the prospect that you might go back to the issue of the pictures, I hope you do, as i think it wouldbe very enjoyable watching Draco convince Hermione of the idea.

    Honestly I can't wait to read the next chapter and could you please add me to your update list too!
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