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Reviews for Catalyst

By : cruttan
  • From ANON - Emmeline Vance on November 18, 2005
    Hello!

    Thanks again for the e-mail reminders, which are very much appreciated. I absolutely loved how smoothly the meet-the-parents turned out to be, and am glad that their love is out in the open. It wa so sweet, and I loved that Draco said "I love you back" to her. Nice!

    I'm so grateful that you've updated again, and am hoping that I'll be able to read more soon. Peace!

    Love, me.
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  • From ANON - snarky4severus on November 18, 2005
    I wonder what her father actually did to him. Hmm... Well atleast after the initial "discomfort" things started looking up, especially when her father and Draco ganged up on Hermione and her lack of security, etc. Heh.
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  • From ANON - cleopatra on November 18, 2005
    Gotta love that first meeting with the parents dont you?! Im supposed to be studying but as usual, im looking for ways to procrastinate and your story is always perfect for that! Thank you for taking the time to actually write this and update instead of doing what many of us do (myself included!) and just thinking about it.
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  • From ANON - Liz on November 18, 2005
    As well Cat; please add me to your updating list!
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  • From ANON - Liz on November 18, 2005

    Gah; Catherine.... you outdo yourself girl!!! My belief that a man who is secure in his own masculinity; would no doubt allow his wife, to so *efficiently* put him in his place, not once but twice. Only a *man* would allow that; no questions asked. Love your characterisations of the Grangers. Lovely; and the lovemaking?? It never hurts to be a romantic.... *sighs* thanks for an amazing chapter!! I'm right there beside Lorett!
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  • From ANON - Alice on November 18, 2005
    I've really enjoyed this fic so far - I HOPE I've reviewed already, I think I have - but I have to say I strongly dislike the device of having 'menfolk' 'bond' over criticising a female loved one. I find it really distasteful, and even though Mrs Granger stepped in in this instance, it was still overt enough that it really left a sour taste in my mouth. I know it happens in real life, but it really diminished my respect and appreciation for the characters you've created and I also think Canon!Hermione would have stood up for herself more and not just sit there letting them poke holes in her life. Just my opinion though.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on November 18, 2005
    I really like this story and it's refreshing that it isn't entirely smut...
    I also must say that you write sex scenes extremely well.
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  • From BlackxBellax on November 18, 2005
    First... Added you to my LJ friend's list (wslyswmn)...

    Now, onto my review...

    Richard Granger was sprawled out in his newest acquisition, a plush recliner. The television was blaring some sort of sports program that was barely audible above his raucous snores.

    Oh yeah... I know this... Seems Richard was based on my own 'dear ole dad'. LoL.

    I can truly, truly empathize with Hermione in this chapter. And another great chapter it was. I've lost many a perspective beau because of my dad's "Hurt her, it's not just me who'll kill you..." speech.

    I loved the characterization of Hermione's mum, what I liked best was how Hermione is a copy of her mum. Right down to her temper. This truly was an awesome chapter. And I especially like the way you had Draco and Richard's bonding experience at the dinner table. (Been that road too).

    I also enjoyed the way you had Draco reply to Hermione's declaration of love. Very sweet.

    - Dear Santa,
    For christmas, I'd like a Catalyst Ch 14 Draco all for myself
    Bek -

    Please update soon.

    Bek.
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  • From ANON - Amada on November 18, 2005
    I believed I cried (No, it was not sleep deprivation...it was your story.) Ah, so well written. HAve I said so enough? This chapter was delightful. Both funny and poignant. Looooooove it!

    PS: I am cold but have no Draco....*sniff*
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  • From ANON - Mrs. Malfoy on November 17, 2005
    OMG..this is such a good story...i dint think i was going to like it in the beggining..but it truly is good...keep up the good job!...i cant wait for the next chapter
    much love
    mrs. malfoy
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  • From ANON - Kueble on November 16, 2005
    Wonderful! I just found the story tonight and read everything you've posted so far. Can't wait for the next section.
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  • From ANON - eddie on November 13, 2005
    Another brilliant chapter. I'm feeling insecure too. Maybe Draco could come soothe me as well? LOL. Harry is too adorable. I do love the way you've written him. And Draco's reaction was hilarious. "Well done, Potter."

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  • From ANON - Tashi on November 12, 2005
    Oh this is a GREAT story! Please email me when you update again, I would appreciate it so much...I'd love you almost I as much as I love Tom Felton.
    This was such a fabulous story, I love it TONS! And from this writer, to another, your plot is great. I write Hermione/Draco fics too, but they are just R-rated on fanfiction.net. Update soon please! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2005
    Wow. I was expecting this to be much better than it was from the number of reviews. The characters are all wrong, there is no plot and most of it just doesn't make sense. I guess that you're trying to write a romance. Here's a tip. Read the books. They are nothing like what you have written.
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  • From ANON - LilyCat on November 11, 2005
    Harry is a bit out of character. I dunno why you feel the need to make him more like Draco but it seemed a bit off. I know it happened in the movie but Draco made a move first then run saw and tried to copy it. It wasn't like that.
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