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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on November 10, 2005
    Oh shiver... I enjoy sex at the end of chapters. *sigh* I absolutely loved the dinner scene with Draco discovering his toddler naked bits had been exposed, LOL. It was very funny. And Harry seemed so playful and emotional in this chapter. Great job.
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  • From ANON - liz on November 10, 2005
    Awsome update... I loved the Hary brake down... and the part about him coniving the effection of the females towards him and against Draco... priceless... there really are some qualities in Harry that make him Slytherin material... jejeje.. hope that next chapter is coming soon
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  • From ANON - Kathy on November 09, 2005
    Yippee!! One of my favourite stories has been updated. Another wonderful chapter and I loved sneaky Harry at the dinner table. LOL! I can picture Draco's expression now. Hermione is becoming more sure of herself meeza thinks -- he was so sweet to her. I have to thank you for continuing to write such consistently great chapters -- it's awful disheartening to become addicted to a fic and wait anxiously for another chapter only to have it abandoned by the author. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - tg on November 09, 2005
    sexy...
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 09, 2005
    Thanks for adding me to the update list!

    yet another amazing, fantastic, wonderful and all things good chapter!! I loved it! I love a calculating harry and I love kinky hat comment...that was so funny.

    Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is the perfect mix of sweet, funny, and sexy.
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  • From ANON - Audrey on November 09, 2005
    Another wonderful chapter as usual. Although I do have to say, the replying to reviews is slightly annoying. Perosonally I think its better at the bottom, after the good stuff :-D. Just a suggestion!


    Audrey
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  • From ANON - Emmeline Vance on November 09, 2005
    Hello again!

    Thanks again for the quick update, and for the wonderful update e-mails you send out. I love your dedication to this story, and enjoy the story more and more each chapter. It's amazing how vocal he is about his love and adoration for her. The fact that he made her realise how beautiful she was nearly got me crying, and the hot sex was a perfect topping to the cake. Thanks again for the wonderful update, and hope that there'll be more love, excitement and kinks soon. Peace!

    Love, me.
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  • From ANON - SlythErin on November 09, 2005
    Aww...I want a naked toddler picture of Draco only donning a hat! :o(

    I love the wicked Harry that you've created. He deserves to have a bit of fun. I'm not usually a Harry fan in comparison, but you've managed to create a yummy one.
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  • From ANON - Amada on November 09, 2005
    *SQUEEEEEE* Bravo! Very well written. You provide a new and wonderful insight on the beloved characters without taking what makes them special away. Lovely!! I will admit to figuring out the pregnancy twist but you made it your own by adding Harry's reaction. It was truly poignant and most unexpected. Wonderful job!

    PS: I will very much like a naked pic of Draco...pref. present-day.
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  • From ANON - RahNee on November 09, 2005
    Hee hee! I love the "drama of the Boy-Who-Lived" which was hilarious. I can just picture Hermione waiting for more explanation, and Harry thinking the fact that Ginny is pregnant is the end of the world. Poor Harry, having daddy-anxiety and feeling so apprehensive about being a father. I think Hermione (you) hit it on the head: Harry feels that his childhood has spoiled him somehow, ruined him... I hate that he has so little confidence in himself like that! Poor poor Harry!

    And then, two seconds later, he's perving on his best friend! OMG, so like a guy.

    I like Draco's manly-man response to Harry and Ginny's announcement: "Well done, Potter." OMG, so like a guy.

    The little scene about Draco's baby pic had me chuckling quite loudly. But I ROFL when Harry pulled his little "I never had childhood pictures" routine and then flashed the truimphant smile at Draco. This was hilarious: "Draco shook his head to himself, his jaw dropping at the calculated deception. The boy really should have been in Slytherin." LOL!

    And oh, the sweet lemony scene at the end...yum yum. I love your swooningly romantic Draco!
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 08, 2005
    Very nice I like it alot and to be honest this is one of few Harry Potter fics I've ever read. If I could make a suggestion though...I think your lemon scenes need to be longer, not like pages longer, but a few paragraphs maybe. It could just be me, maybe I'm just a weirdo, but that's my opinion. Otherwise I rather think this story is awesome.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on November 08, 2005
    Soooo.... I wonder how long Draco will settle for just dating Hermione if he can't get enough of her right now. He even suffered an evening with the Weasleys, it MUST be love. Hermione needs to quit that horrible job, too. If she believes they won't even give her leeway for an off day, they don't deserve her. And I love how Draco isn't shy about himself. It's just how I picture he'd be in the sack, self confident and assertive.


    Harry!!! Deceptive, naughty Harry!! I love him!! I've never seen him written with enough mischief in the fandom, but you've done it. I know he only has a small part in this, but I absolutely see him as sprung from canon. This IS the same guy who snuck up behind a polyjuiced-into-a-girl Crabby/Goyle and said "My, aren't YOU pretty." I think I'm begging you to write a Harry fic. ;D If you can pry yourself away from the Draco at any point, would you consider it?

    Lovely fiction, as you can tell, I'm enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - aleja21 on November 08, 2005
    in a nutshell great chap.
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  • From BlackxBellax on November 08, 2005
    Another brilliant chapter!

    I loved Harry's panic, even better was everyone's reaction to the news. I've done a fic where two of my characters' have ended up pregnant, and it's always fun to write peoples reactions.

    Draco trying to con Hermione into a nude photograph was hilarious (I couldn't stop giggling over Harry's little slip, and his Slytherin cunningness). You also managed to capture the seriousness of Hermione's insecurities. A beautiful ending to a beautiful chapter.

    Please update soon!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 08, 2005
    I loved the pet name: baby. It made my toes curl. lol. you made my day. I hope you continue a little more with this story, make it a little longer then the last one, which was damn good in my opinion. I can't wait for you to update a new chapter. Hope to hear for your soon, kind of funny how harry make draco look bad, i cracked up.
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