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By : cruttan
  • From ANON - NAR on November 01, 2005
    ahh, another insanely hot chapter. But then again, what else am I to expect? Great update, now update again! And if you do email updates, I'd love to be part of that list, and if you don't, that's cool too. Thanks for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on November 01, 2005
    Absolutly loved it!!
    hurry up and update!!
    youre taking to long:(
    k thnx
    Kristal
    (email)
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on November 01, 2005
    Excellent chapter. I do, I do too....awww how sweet. Your Draco is positively Hot, romantic, and cute at the same time. Though he remains Draco through and through. Good job. Like your Hermione too, your chracters are true. :)
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  • From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on November 01, 2005
    I don't know why on earth women tend to do exactly that: ask men if they really mean what they say. I do it myself, and have found out more times than I would have wanted to that they do. And men are just like Draco: they enjoy having an excuse. "It wasn't me who said it, it was the wine making me talk, now go figure by yourself if I meant it or not". Aaargh! And then, they also have a way of saying it, without saying it again. "That thing I said last night, I meant it." Damn them. I find myself looking back with nostalgia at the times when things were as easy as: "I like/love you, would you like to be my girlfriend?", "Yes/no". And you didn't have to go around asking yourself if he was drunk, sick, or suffering of temporary madness. Everything was clear. But, NO. Things are not clear anymore. This was just the kind of scene my friends and I talk a lot about when we meet for coffee/drinks (without the incredibly sexy-looking pirate, mind you). It's so real, and representative of our times, I think. The L-word. And if you check it out again, you'll notice none of them actually spoke it. It was left as a memory. Accepted, but not spoken again.

    However, I think it was a very sweet way of bringing it to a sober Draco. He's still not good at sharing his feelings verbally, but everytime he moves around Hermione, he's letting her know how much he cares for her. Am I the only one who supports the idea that men should have a manual included?

    Once again, I think you're doing an excellent work with your characters. They're so real (except for the both being so handsome and sexy part - I'm NOT complaining, I love sexy Draco, but let's face it, probably less than .01% of the couples in the world are like this: Jenniffer Aniston and Brad Pitt, Posh and David, ...). Everything they've done so far, I can remember doing it or picture myself doing it. I love the sense of "real" of your story.

    Keep updating, lady because you've just made my day.
    Much love,
    accio
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on November 01, 2005
    Yet another amazing chapter!

    I loved the way Draco played it cool with Hermione over the 'L' word, especially the way he admitted it whilst he was sober. Please update soon!

    Bek

    PS: Hehehehe, Suffer Crookshanks! Suffer!
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  • From ANON - Emmeline Vance on November 01, 2005
    Hello again!

    Thanks heaps for the e-mail update, and for the absolutely mind-blowing sex. Draco/Hermione sex and pirates...some of my favourite things! Hermione asking him to keep the eye-patch on was definitely scandalous and raised the heat up a few notches, and the sweet confession at the end was the perfect way to end the chapter.

    Hope to read more soon, and thanks so much for this beautiful update. Peace!

    Love, me.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on November 01, 2005
    I loved how that was eased in there. That they didn't have to say it... to express it.
    I love your writing style.
    Thanks for the awesome update, you always do so awesome.
    Can't wait for the next brilliant addition.
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  • From ANON - cleopatra on November 01, 2005
    Nicely done! Sometimes the 'L' word can get messy and far too fluffy compared to the rest of the story but I really liked that. Pirate Draco naked! *sigh* I wish! Thank you so much for finding the time this week to update!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 01, 2005
    Why haven't you used pet names *pouts* I LOVE PET NAMES. Especially, if it's Draco saying them to Hermione. Hope you write some pet names in your story like the last chapter. I'm the same michelle. I reviewed, again. I'm a pet name person, you can tell. lol. Hope to hear from you soon update soon.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 01, 2005
    Lilycat: I don't know, how to tell you, how much I LOVE your stories. They make me laugh, make me cry. When I'm reading a new chapter it makes my toes curl. It's so unexpected what you're going to write and this is one quality I LOVE ABOUT YOU AND YOUR STORIES. You attracted people with a simple, yet beautiful story or chapter, I don't know how you do it, but don't throw away that gift. I can't tell you how much your stories make my day, they are funny, SEXY, and alot more. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I LOVED pirate, Draco, you made him sound so sexy. Especially, when his whispering in his husky voice, naughty words. Hermione is one lucky witch. Hope to hear from you. Happy Halloween, everyone!
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  • From ANON - KittyBennet on November 01, 2005
    Such a beautiful chapter. I'm happy that you clarified on the "L" word instead of leaving it where it was. I still think the pirate thing was lame though, hopefully the Halloween bit is over with. No offence its just not my cup of tea. Would rather you made him a vampire and Hermione the slayer or maybe his late night snack. Different strokes for differnt folks.
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  • From ANON - Swaummy on October 31, 2005
    This is a great fic!!!! I love what you have done with the characters. Absolutely hilarious!!! Keep the chapters coming!!!
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  • From ANON - lullaby87 (kenzi) on October 31, 2005
    hahaha wonderful chapter. I love hallowe'en!! :D:D:D and pirates! arrr!
    sorry I haven't reviewed for a while, I've been horrendously busy. I had a spare moment though, and felt i should catch up with this wonderful story. I'm glad I did! I love where this is going...silly drunken draco professing his love. how cute :) *swoon*
    also, I'd love to be added to your update list :)
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  • From ANON - NAR on October 30, 2005
    Catalyst is one of the best Dramoine fics I've ever read. It is nothing less of perfection. I love the snark and Draco and Hermoine are just so cute together! Please keep writing and thank you so much for sharing with us. You're very talented. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Snarky4Severus on October 30, 2005
    This is a wonderful story. I believe that Hermione would behave like she was unsure of her womanly wiles (he hee) - although I am sure thta Draco will work on that... Please put me on the update list for this story. Keep up the excellent work!
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