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Reviews for Catalyst

By : cruttan

From ANON - tean_ah on January 22, 2006
i loved this story so much! the way that this story was compiled with so many different genres made me wanna keep reading. crookshanks was soo cute and loveable and narcissa and lucius were adorable. jealousy was my favourite part of the story, well second to draco's baby picture with only a hat and a wand. draco and mr. granger was HI-lairous because it would be so true and ron and harry were awesome since the over protective brother mode of ron was still in teh story.
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From ANON - Laura on January 16, 2006
I really thought this story was great. I hope you continue to write, as I love your characterizations of Draco.
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From ANON - kenzi on January 08, 2006
"take me to bed, or lose me forever" - what a line! :P I love that movie. And I love Meg Ryan in it. Her and Goose's relationship is adorable! :P
Absoultely wonderful ending. It could not have been better. Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing your last chapter. I was home over the hols and didn't ahve access to a computer. I'm so glad I didn't forget to come back and check on this though. Fabulous, absolutely fabulous! You wrapped it up very nicely indeed. :)
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From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
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From ANON - moonjameskitten on January 08, 2006
Awww!! Didn't realize that I didn' t write a review for the last chapter !! and Wow ! I'm so happy that you end that story like this : I JUST ADORE THE LAST PARAGRAPH ! him, thinking about what he 'gains' by loving her, asking her to marry him....hehehe ! Her cat, her parents, her friends !! but...'she worths it all' !
That is so cute and romantic! among all those great sex scenes (I still incredibly love the way you make Draco speaking during sex ! hehehe), you also wrote very romantic stuffs. I really love to re-read your story, and can't wait for the next stories to come.

Oops almost forget : Have a happy new year !

*hugssss*

Moonie
xxx
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From ANON - Vashka on January 06, 2006
*Sigh*

All good things must come to an end, yeah? But it was a fun, sexy ride, girl! Great job with this story, I give you so much credit as a writer for staying true to your vision- it payed off at the end. Hermione finally got her confidence back after her attempted rape and she got her man!

Ahhh... Am happy now :P

...

Soooo... What are you going to write next? ^_^
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From ANON - Debi on January 02, 2006
Oh Cat!!! Lovely chappy like always!!! I love your story sooo much!! I sent it to my friend so she could read it and she loves it too!!! I was wondering, I started to write my own fanfic of Hermione and Draco and was wondering if you could... maybe... if its not to much trouble.... Check it out for me.... If not I totally understand!! But anyways... I love how you had Hermione's dad react! that was just plan cute!! His baby girl all grown up.... Narcissa was a hoot!! Love how you made her get all excited!! I can't wait for your next chappy and I hope you had a wonderful Holiday!!

Love Debi!!
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From ANON - lorett on January 01, 2006
Cat!!!

Wow! I'm SO SORRY it's taken me a while to get over here! What has happened these last few weeks? I've been so crazy busy with work I've not been paying attention at all to the group, so if you've mentioned it there, I apologize. Are you okay now? Hope so. I hope you and your husband and family had a wonderful, beautiful Christmas and New Year too.

I don't know if you knew, but I was in Texas with my husband's family over Christmas, we drove there and I just got back late Friday night, so I'm doing my reading and catching up.

Anyway - GASP! This is the LAST CHAPTER! EEKS! I can't believe it's over. Well this has been a wonderful journey, to say the least! It's brought you into my life and into the groups' life and we're all so much better for getting to know you. Are you writing anything new? Let me know.

My darling, this was such a great way to wind down your amazing story. I'm so thrilled and honored to know you and to know that you enjoyed my little ficlet too. Your appreciation of my writing does wonders for my ego - grin -as you're so clearly talented!

So, I'd comment on the specifics of this chapter that I loved, but really, it was just perfect all the way around. I thought the idea of the dungeons was hysterical and the horrified look on Ginny's face was spot on. The Slytherin bunch was great too, Pansy - she can be such a wench!

But the sweetness and love with which you write Draco and Hermione is what is most captivating and endearing, and you do it so very well. Wit, humor, tenacity, desire, tenderness and understanding - all mixed together with a sprinkling of love. That's your Draco and Hermione and I'm most honored to have met them and fallen in love right along with everyone eles.

Shoot me an email when you have a moment and fill me in on what's happening with you, darling.

Kisses and Happy 2006,

Lorett

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From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
what is your problem with people getting drunk and embarrassing themselves in front of draco? you made hermione into a druken slut.
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From ANON - nicx on December 27, 2005
that was the best draco/hermoine fanfic that i read....it was really really good! even the bedroom scenes between the two are nicely detailed....*drooling*...^_^...anyways well done. i lurrve it!!!
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on December 26, 2005
I loved your story to the very end. It was full of sweet, realistic moments. I absolutely loved your Draco, Harry and Ron. But most of all, you know I ADORED your Lucius.
Special mention has to be made too, for Milllicent. Short part, but nicely done. I liked your tough-but-good Millicent. Sounds right to me. Only one who can control Pansy.
However, I feel like the restaurant scene was sort of excessive. Maybe it's just my little heart getting used to the fact that there will be no more Catalyst... but it felt a little rushed for me. ( A little voice in the back of my head says it was not rushed, that it HAD to finish sometime ). Mmmmh. Maybe the little voice is right.
I enjoyed your story very much, it made for a lot of wonderful minutes of reading. I look forward to reading something more written by you. You are very talented...
And if I could have my way.... you'd write a Lucius and Narcissa story... they are just WONDERFUL.
Much love!
accio
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From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
It's Dixi, I'm just too lazy to sign in...

I can't believe I missed this! Seriously, I don't know what is wrong with me. Oy. Well, onto business... That my dear was fabulous, a wonderful evolution of Hermione, I love that she held her own at the end with Pansy and the other little chit. *glomps* for including Millicent and making her have a personality (and a good one!) I adore her and I can't stand it when people assume that she hasn't evolved in ten or fifteen years! So, it's over?? Oh, well that just means it's time for a new one right?? hee!

I think you've really done a good job with this story. Draco/Hermione is one of the most difficult pairings to write in my opinion, just because so much has been done, written, expounded upon, etc. And you did beautifully, I liked the evolution of the characters and the story, you avoided a lot of stereotypes...and even, dare I say, had a bit of fun with some of them.

Brava darling! You most certainly deserve those awards!!

*HUGS*

Ohh...and how could a good 80's girl miss Meg Ryan's line from Top Gun?! Wonderful inclusion love!!
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From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2005
Awww that was a really sweet, hot fanfic. A+
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From ANON - Amada on December 24, 2005
::tear:: Wow...in the beginning you had me worried about how the story was going to end. I wanted a mushy, lovey and perfect ending. I got it!!! That was fun and romantic. Once again, you have such talent and I feel honored having the chance to read this truly amazing fic. Happy Holidays to you as well. :D
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From ANON - Joey on December 24, 2005
Oh man. That was...excellent! I really loved the story, I reeeeeeally did. You had me literally laughing out loud during so many scenes, especially the Draco and Ron and Harry scene in the bathroom towards the beginning of the story (chapter four?). That was hilarious! I couldn't stop reading. Sometimes I just wanted to shake Hermione for being so...so stupid. I was like, "Gah! You dolt! How could you believe that?!" when she found the article. And then I got all misty-eyed during the proposal, laughing at the same time. It was ludicrous! But hilarious. Yes, two thumbs way up.

I simply adored Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy. They weren't exactly what I'd have expected (and a first I was wondering what it was you were doing) but they really did grow on me. Best Out of Character Characters of the Year Award, I would say. ^.-

One question, though - what happened to Ginny being pregnant?

Write another story! xD
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