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By : cruttan
  • From ANON - PolarThestral on September 25, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this so far, though I was a little unsure of Draco's quick capitulation into physical comfort. I liked that you were aware of how uncharacteristic that was and worked through how bizarre the situation was for Draco in his head. That helped me to accept an OOC action in a way that a lot of authors forgot to do. My favourite section so far was the meal at the Malfoy Manor, with Narcissa and Lucius smirking over how cagey Draco's responses about Hermione were. That was wonderfully written. I am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. :)

    B xxx
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  • From ANON - Sommer on September 25, 2005
    Keep this going.
    It's really good.
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  • From ANON - Liz on September 25, 2005

    good build up and definitely good outburst!! On both counts with Arthur/Harry and then with Draco himself!
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  • From ANON - alicat999 on September 25, 2005
    A very swift update indeed...I Love that!!

    Poor Draco, I think i love him even more when he's out of sorts...hell, I love him anyway I can get him. lol

    as for Harry...that was positively Slytherin of him, using emotional blackmail like that. No wonder he was nearly sorted there.

    Alicia xox

    Keep up the updates cheeks! looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on September 25, 2005
    I've just read your first chapters and have enjoyed it quite a bit. You've pegged Hermione's insecurities beautifully, and the fact that Oliver wasn't interested, even if it was just because of timing, was believably hurtful. I've had roommates who would hit a bar or nightclub to pick up a man just to prove to themselves that they were desirable, and I could see Nott wanting to 'teach her a lesson.' All in all, it's a very plausible set up, and Malfoy's coming to the rescue was a nice thing to see. He was a gentleman despite their earlier history. I look forward to reading where you take the story, but also wanted to congratulate you on a modulated and very nice encapsulation of the changes in Lucius. I think they're very reasonable, and I enjoyed reading them in your story so far.
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  • From ANON - lorett on September 25, 2005
    HEY Lilycat!

    I just saw your review and decided to pop on over and see if you had any works to read. And, how glad I am that I did. This is a wonderful story and I look forward to reading the rest. You're bringing around a nice, well-rounded Draco and that is always a pleasure to read.

    This was my fav line by far. SO Draco like:

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  • From ANON - moxie on September 25, 2005
    Loves this chapter! LIke how the relationship is developing.
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  • From TCardan on September 25, 2005
    Wow! Nicely done. I'm enjoying how well you're keeping Draco in character. In fact all the characters are well described. You have great writing skills and I'm definately looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - jess on September 24, 2005
    holy crap! i love this story! its sooo good! oh please do continue! and update soon! you are totally awesome!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on September 24, 2005
    Draco is funny... doesn't want thanks or involvement, but he takes her home, calls aurors, puts his friend in Azkaban... all for Hermione. Poor Hermione. She does have self esteem issues, doesn't she.

    Okay, Harry is forgiven. At least she can be honest with Harry and he accepts her. I thought she would fester with her dark thoughts of unlovablilty. but she seems to be seeking for independence.
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  • From ANON - alicat999 on September 24, 2005
    Poor old Draco *sighs* he's just so hard done by isn't he? lol

    It'll be intersting to see how you get HG/DM to hook up, since she fled Malfoy Manor like a bat out of hell.. maybe he'll run into to her while she's on a date or something and get all green eyed over it..*snickers* I just love a totally put out Draco.

    Keep them chapters coming!

    xox
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  • From ANON - fiona on September 24, 2005
    ooo update soon!
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  • From ANON - Liz on September 24, 2005
    nice beginning. A good start, and follow up! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - moxie on September 23, 2005
    Thanks for updating! Love the story so far. I live how you've developed Draco's character. Realistic instead of romanticized.
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  • From ANON - DB2020 on September 23, 2005
    That was an awesome start! I can't wait for future chapters. I usually don't go for any storyline set post Hogwarts years, but somehow it didn't even register to me in this. The writing is great, and the plot is so original. Reading this story was the highlight of my day, I am eagerly awaiting chapter three ^_^ Keep up the great work, you're such a good author!
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