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Reviews for Catalyst

By : cruttan

From Dixi19 on November 29, 2005
I just devoured, I mean devoured the first three chapters and I'm forcing myself to stop and comment. I love this fic so much already, and I still have 12 chapters to go, I'm so excited! Your characterizations are wonderful, I love that Hermione was crushed by Oliver...not because of him so much but because of her frustration, I totally understand that feeling. And the bit with Theo was wonderful, it was so real. Well, and Draco...he's such an ass, I adore him for it! I love noble!ass!Draco though! Hermione's emotions are spot-on, as well as Draco's fighting to stay removed from the situation. Oh! Lucius! *snogs him* sorry about that. I love your Lucius and I truly adore Narcissa, very few people write her well and I love what you have done! Wonderful darling, I'm off to read more!!

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From ANON - DramioneDelirium on November 29, 2005
OMG! Good chapter!! ::Drool:: Please update soon! You're doing a marvelous job by the way!! PRETTY! I thought she would have learned to trust him by now and felt so bad when he told her to go..u.u Still. ::Wipes tears:: Its DRAMIONE!! You shall make it be so because you are an amazing writer! Don't ever stop writing and LONG LIVE DRAMIONE! Thank you for blessing us with this awesome DM/HG story and update soon!
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From ANON - K CASWELL on November 29, 2005
SO COMPLETELY F***KING LOOOOVE THIS STORY! ABSOLUTELY MY FAVE DRACO/HERMIONE YET! BRAVO!!
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From ANON - Sexy Relly on November 28, 2005
Oh please continue!
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From ANON - misty676 on November 28, 2005
you have nothing to worry about this story is so full of drama that i can honestly say that i found my own teen soap-opra keep updating
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From ANON - SlythErin on November 28, 2005

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From ANON - firefairy21 on November 28, 2005
HEE HEEE HEEE loved the chapter and hoping the next will make me smile just as much up-date soon PLEASE!
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From ANON - kaha on November 28, 2005
oh my...
This is undeniably perfect. I haven't found a good piece of work like this in so long.
Amazing, utterly amazing work!!
I look forward to the next chapter...
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From ANON - a devoted reader on November 28, 2005
Wow, I almost cried from happiness! This is such an amazing story, plus it's so cute! They're a little out of character, but you make it totally worth it! I love this story so much, please please continue writing!
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From ANON - Kenzi on November 28, 2005
AAHHHHH!! :D:D:D *grins like an idiot* You just made my day! Hermione's so stupid! lol But *sigh* how cute. Draco's adorable in this story. I'm all fluttery now! Well done! :)
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From ANON - Lulu on November 28, 2005
I think that was the most unusual proposal I've ever heard of......but considering who it was, it was absolutley perfect.
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From ANON - SJ on November 28, 2005
Well, I made it through - it was a long and arduous process, but I managed to trudge through it from beginning to end aaaaaaaaand . . . .

I'm full of crap! This was a delightful story to read - fun and fluffy, a little angsty and chock full of ups and downs, but happy all the same. There's nothing arduous about it! You have a great sense of humor, Cat, and Draco positively oozes with wit in this story - and excellent comedic timing, always popping up out of nowhere. Hermione definitely has insecurity issues, but considering her past and recent trauma, who wouldn't?

I definitely think a marriage between these two characters would involve LOTS of compromise and arguing and subsequent make up sex, but it would work because they're passionate - about each other and their beliefs.

Anywhooooooooooo, Cat, you're a doll and it's always a pleasure conversing with you at 'keys'!

Keep up the excellent writing!

Always,
SJ

'I am guided by a force much greater than luck.'
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From ANON - Jessi on November 28, 2005
It is really really good you have nothing to be nervous about.
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From ANON - lorett on November 28, 2005
Oh Cat!

I'm reviewing chapters 14 & 15, I'm a tad behind on everyone these last couple of weeks. My boss and home life are kicking my butt presently. Sad, sigh.

Anyway, back to more pleasant topics - This story is just SUCH the fun! I was ROLLING when I read this:

'Hermione refrained from informing her mother that Draco was raised in what basically equated to some sort of royal family that was entirely convinced of their own superiority to the entire muggle world and the vast majority of the wizarding as well. She also did not mention that those manners may as well have been non-existent during their school years when his greatest delight had been threatening, ridiculing, hexing, and annoying her and her friends at every possible opportunity.

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From ANON - tashi on November 28, 2005
oh my god! i dont even care that it wasnt a "real" proposal! i had butterflies running through my stomach the entire chapter! it was GREAT! thanks so much! update as soon as you can o great one!
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