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By : cruttan
  • From ANON - Petalsoft on November 28, 2005
    Awww... I'm so glad it turned out happy! It's so nice how Hermione's friends are there to rally around her at just the right times. And it's nice to see that Draco can think for himself now and not be so influenced by his parents. Great chappie and thank you for your terrific reviews on my story as well. I'm touched.
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  • From ANON - DaM on November 28, 2005
    i really like how you write, but i must be honest... i can't stand your portrayal of hermione. how many times is she going to jump to such crazy conclusions? i have just never imagined the character with such little self-confidence. i don't know how draco could possibly put up with all her emotional outbursts. i hope that she grows a backbone for the rest of the story... its such a shame that you couldn't have written her a little closer to the canon hermione. i just can't stand how many times she has burst into tears, only t be comforted by such a forgiving Draco. It's all a bit much to digest. Then again, i prefer a D/Hr relationship based on sexual tension and when they battle wits with each other.

    i was looking to see if you have other stories to see if you wrote her in the same way. i hope that after this, you will write another with a much stronger, less paranoid Hermione
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  • From ANON - fandango2 on November 28, 2005
    i' ve been reading this story from the start and let me tell you it is one of the best i have ever read!

    its soooooooooo sweet
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  • From ANON - Allie-Oop on November 28, 2005
    I love this story. Love Love Love. It's so *sigh* romantic. And it feels like it could almost happen. Good on you
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  • From AraLuna on November 28, 2005
    First time I've reviewed-Just wanted to say I love this story. I actually really liked the "proposal." It was unconventional, which is great because fanfic does tend to get redundent. Btw, voted for you at Dangerous Liaisons. Second Chances is probably one of my all-time favorite D/Hr stories.
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  • From ANON - YumLovely on November 27, 2005
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - RahNee on November 27, 2005
    Whee! I love misunderstandings...well, as long as it works out okay in the end. I found myself wanting to smack Hermione silly for jumping to conclusions! And I totally felt for Draco asking her to at least tell him what he'd done, sounding so desperate! And this part just broke my heart:
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  • From ANON - truth44 on November 27, 2005
    I was waiting until I got to the end to review, but lemme tell you, it was hard. My God, this was awesome. It was so funny. And though I thought their relationship progressed a bit quickly, it was really good all the same. I loved you characterization of the parents in this fic (Lucius, Narcissa; Jane, Richard). And the banter between Hermione and Draco was utterly priceless. Especially when he was down south for a meal and she kept closing her legs. I laughed so hard at that. I mean, thevisual image is just so friggin' funny!

    And Hermione's jealousy was awesomely written too. I loved how she tried to get back at Draco by flirting with other guys, and his reaction was priceless--that awesome possessive Draco reared his head, and I loved him to death. Not that I don't love the normal Draco. I drool everytime I read a description of his utter sexiness. lol.

    Anyway, like I said before, awesome, AWESOME work. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
    Truth

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  • From ANON - Kathy on November 27, 2005
    Yippee!! He finally proposed .... or did he? (mimicking Ginny) Hee, hee. Great chapter but too short! Can't wait for more trials and tribulations. Keep up the great work. :-)
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  • From ANON - mira on November 27, 2005
    whimpers..... More story now!!! Wonderful Chapter, your nails are obviously unfairly abused.
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  • From ANON - Debi on November 27, 2005
    Oh Cat!!!!!


    Oh Cat I loved this chapter so much!! It made me cry, because I could so feel everyone you put in your chapter!! Poor Hermione and her insecurities, I sure know how she would feel!! Great chappy Cat!! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleve for the next post!! Sorry this review isn't as big as the other's but I'm kinda busy!! But I wanted to see what you had put and I'm glad I did!!! Can't wait for you next post!!! Your great!!
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  • From ANON - Kristal on November 27, 2005
    OMG! i absolutly loved it!!
    i cant wait for more!!
    i liked the whole fiasco w. hermione running away from draco and him tackling her...its so them!
    :) update ASAP!!
    mucho luv
    Kristal
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  • From ANON - on November 27, 2005
    I've been reading this story for quite some time now and have really been enjoying it. The one problem I have with the story though, is that you make Hermione so stupid. Every once in a while it's fine for a character to do something irrational and spontanious that ends badly... or at least awkwardly. However, seeing as the character is Hermione Granger (one of the most rational and thoughtful of people in the wonderful world of Harry Potter) these irrational outbursts are cut down to about one very well deserved per story (2 for a story of the same length or longer than your own). It does get annoying when the main Character is breaking down in almost every chapter. Other than that, I really like the story and ofter check for updates. Good luck with the Dangerous Liaisions Awards!
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  • From ANON - --- on November 27, 2005
    WOW! He's so sweeet!!! I'm so happy!
    Great job with this story! Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - J.J on November 27, 2005
    hmmm. good good. maybe add a little of what draco is feeling when he feels that hermione doesnt trust him...otherwise excellent. keep it up!
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