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Reviews for Lascivus Wanton

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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 08, 2005
    There is only one thing I need to know. Is Harry and Severus going to be together again? I hope this new Professor doesn't try to win the heart of Harry. Keep writing. This is too good.
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  • From ANON - as on November 08, 2005
    update ^_^
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  • From ANON - Moi on November 05, 2005
    I am liking this story a lot. I didn't like it very much, at first. But I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jo on November 05, 2005
    I think your story is great! There are a few grammatical errors but they don't take away from the story. I love the angst that Harry and Severus are suffering - I like the boys to suffer, so that they can have a lovely happy ending - the buildup is what gives a good story it's emotional tension. I also love the way you have just about everybody disapproving of the relationship, because that's what I reckon would happen.

    Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on November 05, 2005
    Yes a good and useful chpater.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on November 05, 2005
    How could you end it there? We need another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Neko Miu on November 05, 2005
    I do like your story and I really hope you update again...
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  • From ANON - deb on November 05, 2005
    i like it. i want you to make Voldemort come to hogwarts, harry stands there going to let Voldemort kill him, dumbldore tries to get there in time, but he is to late, in the last minute a student stands in the way, not Ron hermione or anyone important colin Creevy or somthing, then voldi ends up having to leave Dumbldore drove him of. he takes the spell of harry, or no one jumps in the way, and the killing curse takes the stats of him and he leaves leaving everyone to die for taking his happiness from him. lol

    it was only when Dumbledore was dying and Snape and harry killing voldemort to realise he was wrong to split them up for that he accepts his fate, harry isint bothered about that he has his love of his life back!
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 05, 2005
    I'd like to see where this goes. I wanna know if Harry gets out and finds Snape. Please keep writing. :)

    En4cerMax
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on November 05, 2005
    Oh I love it. I hope Harry finds a way out of Hogwarts. Did they take his Invisibility Cloak? Cause when they didn't he can escape using a secret passage. I really love it!!! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 05, 2005
    Bad dumbledore, please reunite Severus and Harry. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on November 05, 2005
    Nope, I still love the story, especially the changes. They tell me that you're thinking and moulding the story to fit the way you want it to. To what feels right.

    I can see more drama coming into the picture, then the angst will start. Keep writing and I'll review more than I have been - sorry about that. I tend to print off the chapters and forget to send you a thanks.

    Thanks!

    Post more!
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  • From ANON - Demon on November 05, 2005
    AWWW please update soon this is amazing
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  • From ANON - fyrefawkes on November 03, 2005
    ahh! need more!
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  • From ANON - Demon on November 02, 2005
    AHHH you have to update what happens!!!!! please update soon this is amazing
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