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Reviews for The Black Prince

By : Vingilot
  • From ANON - Annie on October 13, 2005
    Hey! I think I might have reviewed once or twice but my internet's been down for days and you update really quickly (which is a very, very good thing by the way). Anyways I have an idea for your shop. You can have a bookstore/pub-restaurant/supplies shop. I've seen people start these and teenages spend a lot of time there (I am a teenager so I should know lol). People can buy things they like- qudditch- you got your active people, you've got your books, there's your brainy people, and they want to stay there because its got food and drink *and* you don't have to be quite like you have to in a library. No to mention if you have supplies they need for school: potion stuff, gloves and what-not for herbology (I planned on starting something like it around my town {not magical stuff obviously} so if your wondering why its so thought out there you have it).

    Anyways this is a really, really great story. I love it so much. I hop on every day after school to see if you've updated yet and am so happy when you do and so disappointed that you don't. Not that I'm disappointed for long as you *do* update very fast.

    I do have one question: What does they're room look like? Or Voldemort's hideout. If you've already said and I just didn't pay enough attention go ahead and yell at me.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - deb on October 13, 2005
    hm.... i dont know, maybe a bit of everything, Magic the name of the store, books and artefacts and all that. as well as a cafe, in the small area. it would attract all sorts of people students adults and all. great updates both are great love em!
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  • From ANON - lilith on October 13, 2005
    Why not a dance club? Between The Hog's Head and The Tree Broomsticks I always thought Hogsmeade was missing a meeting place for the older students. Also, it would have the added benefit that reachers would most likely avoid it.
    Oh, and you wrote Tallis once instead of Dorian. I like the interactions between Dorian and Severus, but I hope you wont make Dorian too submissive. I think, their public and their private lives should be kept apart. Otherwise, Severus will become the leader in the backgroud, and I don't think that would be fitting. I liked your description of them earlier, when you wrote they were opposites to their private selfs in public. Severus can't just make the princes decisions for him, even if he is Dorians master in private. I liked how you showed he cared, though.
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  • From ANON - shadowraven113 on October 13, 2005
    love your story please keep updating
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  • From ANON - amanda on October 13, 2005
    update soon great chapter
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on October 13, 2005
    fantastic chapter... i love the fight that harry went through between his two sides... so wonderfully written into this chapter.... :)
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  • From ANON - amethyst on October 13, 2005
    hello
    ont the store in hogs meed i think the reasturant idea has merit. i was thinking maybe mugglefie the idea and have a small cinema with fast food / malt shop combination. i looove the story so far.
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  • From ANON - mokito on October 11, 2005
    Hi!

    Although i am one of those persons who very rarely get their lazy ass up to review, I now do so.
    Your story is really good, I find Harry as a *dark* leader *very* fascinating! And in a Dom/sub relationship with hot Sevvie too, mmh, yummie, too much to resist!!
    You describe the change between "The Black Prince" and "Harry, Severus' pet" so good, it
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix on October 11, 2005
    hey, well i just want to say that i read up to the 5th (i think) chapter, but i cant read anymore...its not that i dont like it, cuz i do love it, the idea of it is great, but i cant read fics where Harrys name is changed...this isnt the first time that ive stoped cuz of it though, this really good one that i loved, after reading it for a year( on the 26 chapter) she changed Harrys name and i tryed to read more but i couldnt...im really sorry *hugs* this story is great, and i hope you end up finishing it :)
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  • From ANON - Adia on October 10, 2005
    WOW this story is really shaping up well! um... more sex please!
    don't get me wrong- I love your story! it's just that I didn't even get turned on reading this (very well written) chapter.

    -Adia
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  • From ANON - chibifae on October 10, 2005
    Wow! i love dark Harry and this is a wonderful example. please update soon. excellent writing and i love the black prince-dorian black thing.
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  • From ANON - Moppit on October 10, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this story. I started with reading Skin Deep before finding this one. Just thought you would like to know however that in chapter 7 you refer to Harry/Dorian as Tallis when talking about the desires of an incubi. The joys of having more than one story in progress.
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 10, 2005
    :D :D oooh yay!! more soon please... :D cya xx poor Draco tho LOL :P
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  • From ANON - Wizzel on October 10, 2005
    Thanks for another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - TyRisha on October 10, 2005
    words cannot describe how much i love this fic. he's such a perfect leader and such a good bottom too. i never could see Severus as a submissive, and he's not really that in the ranks of the Death Eaters, so it all works out. keep going
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