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Reviews for The Black Prince

By : Vingilot
  • From ANON - Rachel on October 07, 2005
    Yes, a new chapter, yes, yes! And a very good one too (well... too short, just one : ( , not fast enough for the crazy compulsive read that I am... yes, I'm being a prat, sorry)

    Just one thing, I think there is a paragraph missing right after Lucius' report (before Ava's and Cassandra's) and from that point on the whole chapter is in italic, maybe one of your... gods, what is the name of it? editing marks? Whatever, I think the problem might be one of them - probably the one where LV speaks in parseltongue to HP. I hope you don't mind me pointing it out.

    Well, anyway, love your fic, please up date.
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  • From ANON - Adia on October 06, 2005
    WOW- I LOVE Your story! I have been checking everyday for updates. I have been reading Harry/Severus for a long time and this is the best story I've seen in a long while.

    Thank you! Thank you!

    Adia
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2005
    hahaha dorian black

    very clever
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  • From ANON - acr on October 06, 2005
    I like this type of Dark! Harry story. I don't like suddenly evil harry, but more cold, thoughtful harry. BTW, did some of your text get deleted?
    The Prince turned to Lord Voldemort. he hissed softly.



    he said, grinning evilly.

    Seems to be a gap?
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  • From ANON - jess on October 05, 2005
    nice

    i like the thing with the kidnap of harry potter
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  • From ANON - +deb/ on October 05, 2005
    hey hope too see order members children trying to get harry to go out with them, you know like Ginny and Cho love potions would be cool too, hm... yes that would although it would not work harry is after all a submittive to SEverus and will know the potions and all that update soon please great stroy bye
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  • From ANON - Demon on October 05, 2005
    This is great and I know what you mean with ranking abuse all of it is something what shouldn't be done and it's all as bad as anything else
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  • From ANON - Nightwing on October 04, 2005
    Woah, i'm really enjoying your story!
    Usually i don't read stories with Harry allying with Voldie, but your story is very unique. Especially with the twist being submissive to Sev. Can't wait for more.
    Chow for now...
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 04, 2005
    oooh great chapter.... i agree with ur basis of neglect/abuse... it wud be worse to be hated and ignored than to be punished... at least when being punished u no others no u exist!
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  • From ANON - deb on October 04, 2005
    also cant wait to see Dumbldore's face when he finds out about there relationship. maybe have him try to force them to break up. but cant snape shows Dumbledore the contract that cant be broken, yea! lol maybe have him try and give him a potion maybe love potion ? discreatly of course anyway him always being around the potions master knew that somthing was wrong switched the potion around and they then find themselves in love with Ginny Weasley, of course harry keeps switching them lol. when the potions stop the person who had fell for ginny realises what he had been doing and had been drugged accusess ginny! lol yea ! whooo update soon
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  • From ANON - deb on October 04, 2005
    brillant, i would love a flash back to the first time he took harry that would be nice likes, the very first time, as his master, would also love another scene when they were in the rooms thereselves from what his first time was like and what he was like then. for instance Snape would have had to show him how to obviously for his first time and what he is like now, it will be nice to see, update soon, also update skin deep. missing it already update them both soon goodbye
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on October 04, 2005
    amazing..... yet another wonderful chapter... i am looking forward to a good sev and harry chapter tho..
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  • From ANON - Mistress Vamp on October 04, 2005
    This is very interesting. Please update again soon, ok? I need to know what is going to happen next! ::MV::
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  • From ANON - icestar on October 04, 2005
    very nice.

    The personas harry has are interesting, completely seperated... maybe potter has issues with the malfoys, but the black prince doesnt...

    anyways, *thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 01, 2005
    yay more now soon please!!
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