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Reviews for The Black Prince

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  • From ANON - saske\'s iris on October 25, 2005
    chuckling over lucious's problem with parseltounge hehe
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  • From ANON - joey on October 25, 2005
    This is a great story and while the whole dom/sub stuff with Sev/Harry is ok... i wonder if it could be considered sort of abuse when Sev knows Harry needs to feed and is in pain. He should allow Harry to feed like he needs and then play the dom/sub stuff. Al least in my opinion. Anyway this is a great story and I am enjoying it I liked how Harry took care of the guy gossiping about him. Harry can't have someone talking about him like that it shows lack of respect. Update again soon
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  • From ANON - momoko on October 25, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 25, 2005
    update soon please... :D :D cya xxx
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  • From ANON - dragonmhs on October 24, 2005
    Hey, I really like this story. Not sure if I reviewed here or not yet. I would like to read more. I suggest a small student friendly pub . . . there really isn't a proper place in hogsmead for just hanging . . . or at least one that isn't weird and also serves good food. Think on it . . . also I started reading this on fan fic dot net. I hate that site . . . why don't you check out hpfandom dot net ? much better service over there, not to mention it is easier for your fans to find out when you have updates. is there any way to drop me a line when you have updates? dragonmhs at juno dot com
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  • From ANON - Furgie on October 22, 2005
    Yum. This is really good, and I can't wait for another 'helping'.
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  • From ANON - Abraxis/Abraxisdragon on October 18, 2005
    I don't know how open your Voldemort and his Death Eaters would be to this idea but it should certainly pass with Dumbledore's muggle-loving ideal. Maybe you could sell it as studying the enemy or something. Anyway. I would suggest exactly what draws muggle children in droves - an arcade.

    It would require a number of "employees" with plenty of contact with the students to explain the games. It would also make talking about muggles and their relationship with the wizarding world a normal conversation - and fears that too much open contact with them might be a threat could easily be spread. Let's face it, if you want to show just how violent muggles can be, the games at most arcades are real good examples of it.

    Just a thought.

    Wouderful stoy. I'm enjoying it so much.
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  • From ANON - slashslut on October 16, 2005
    i do so love evil dumbles fics! im hooked and am anxious for upcoming chappies. update soon and often!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blue Phoenix on October 15, 2005
    I am dieing to find out what happens next.Will Dorian torture the old bastard and then feed him to the snakes piece by piece. I love Dorian and how he can be so commanding but wanting to please at the sametime. Truly a great fic please update soon~Beth
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  • From ANON - jess on October 15, 2005
    sounds intresting much better idea then dorian staying at hogwarts
    nice way of disolving the debate
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  • From ANON - Echo on October 14, 2005
    Great fic. Dark Harry .... yummmm! For the shop/restaurant ... if it's to attract younger kids and even teens ... a fast food place (like the M place) is normally packed with them... or some sort of cafe or gaming place. Some muggle like chain store would be a great cover and keep Bumblebore (not a typo ;p) off there backs. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - momoko on October 14, 2005
    good chapter, an ice cream parlor with games, maybe some muggle games that work with magic?, bye
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  • From ANON - Uld Ases on October 14, 2005
    Hello!
    I love this chapter (=>I LOVE THE STORY in globality)
    Maybe Dorian open a coffee? Something more friendly than Ms Puddifoot. (this is the right name?)
    The students can sit down in marrowies armchairs? -Like the central perk coffee in friends-
    I hope you understand me... (I'm french)
    Update soon!

    Uld Ases

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  • From ANON - Thanatos on October 14, 2005
    I really like your story, it is very interesting. I think that maybe instead of a restaurant or shop that maybe more of a club or a cross between a pub a club and a resaurant would be a good idea. That way Dorian could mingle with people as they drink, eat, and dance. I think that this would be a good thing because there are already pubs and teashops there so maybe an area where they can have those things but also dance would be good and they wouldn't have to worry as much about competition because it would be something totally different. It would also draw a lot of different types of people, not just students, and if it gets really well known, people from other areas then Hogsmeade and Hogwarts might come. Not to mention that people usually linger quite a long time in places like that.
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 14, 2005
    wow, im still getting used to the new layout LOL... im overwhelmed!! But anyway...

    ... uh, a pub? sorta like the Three Broomsticks, but classier, and serving food and sodas too, so the younger ones can go as well. u no u get cafes? and they serve alcohol? sort of like that place, and all the waitresses/waiters can be death eaters, and the bartender can do that thing when they see a depressed person, the offer a light(lighter) and then the depressed person talks about their problems... thats a good way for people to open up and then if it was Dorian he could talk them over to Voldemort.....?? ive gone on too long... cya now more soon xxx
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