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Reviews for Broken Inside

By : anaisjousserand
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Atrumnex on January 04, 2007
    Plz update soon i'm diein here.
    Cant wait u really have a good fic goin here.
    Good Luck with the writing and life.
    Happy New Year and Best Wishes To You And Your Familly! (^_^)
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  • From ANON - Atrumnex on January 01, 2007
    O love ur story why did u stop in 2005?
    Did u post som other place?
    plz go on its really good
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 06, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Foryoureyesonly on February 04, 2006
    Well,

    it is a Kind of Story that I normally dislke very much.
    Brutallitys against women/child, against human at all is
    very disturbend. Nonetheless it is a really interessting Story.
    Please go on, and write more


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  • From ANON - Nappy on January 04, 2006
    OMG!! i really love this story....it's AWESOME !!you know..oh yeah i had been cried a lot...lol Couldn't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - death on October 13, 2005
    Loved it! So cool! Please update soon! ^_~
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  • From ANON - kirika on October 09, 2005
    cool fic please update soon can't wait
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  • From ANON - fraser on September 29, 2005
    i can't wait for more, i love it
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  • From ANON - lindsey on September 28, 2005
    You break her wand but then she doing spells with Snape. Her door is sealed but she goes and visits her friends.
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  • From ANON - Hiding in the shadows on September 27, 2005
    The Chapters are short too short actually one would think you were writing drabbles instead of actual chapters. It needs a lot of work sentenses and what not. It has a good plot line but sorta rushed. I myself didn't like the past two chapters because you barely even confronted Dumbledore with what he did. You made it seem like Hermione has forgiven him already. But it is your story and I have noticed in some of your chapters you mispelled Lucius.

    My advice, spell check and possibly get a beta. There are a lot of them out there. Read the story from the readers point of view instead of just the authors.

    Good Luck
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  • From ANON - Rose Evans on September 26, 2005
    Thank you for rewritting the story. I think It's wonderful! Will you let me know when you update. Rose
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  • From ANON - angel on September 26, 2005
    i really really like this fic and how you mad the headmaster the bad guy i hope they get out and save mione from the hell she has live in for thr last month well in till next time keep up the awesome work and please update soon later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Laura on September 26, 2005
    Not a bad story idea but you really need a beta.
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