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Reviews for My Fallen Angel

By : crimsonvipera
  • From ANON - amyordinary on November 30, 2006
    it's about time! hehe.. I know, we're only five chapters in.. I'm not the most patient person. :-D seriously, though.. great story, and I hope that Snape at least begins to find out what's going on, though him finding out about all of it would be great too!
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  • From ANON - Sophia on November 30, 2006
    A very interesting chapter. Especially the development with Miss Campbell, lol. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Talia Naeva on November 30, 2006
    *bouncing in the chair* update...Update...UPDATE!!! You must hurry and continue the story. I mean seriously, who needs sleep. It wastes a good 5-8 hours every night that you could be doing something productive.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 30, 2006
    Oh my! What happened?
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on November 28, 2006
    Would you please put bottom!name in the summary or warnings, because I don't read fics in this pairing that don't explicitly state dom!Harry (since they tend towards the other nearly exclusively), so I was just wondering if I'm missing out on something I would enjoy.
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  • From Vittani on November 28, 2006
    Very interesting i cant wait to see where you are going with this. please update soon
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  • From ANON - Sophia on November 28, 2006
    An interesting story and I would love to read more. Keep up the very good work!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 27, 2006
    Yea! An update! Thanx! I hope you get time to put more into the computer soon! I can't wait to see how Harry's mate reacts to all of this!
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  • From ANON - liz on November 27, 2006
    i just wanted to say that despite it's much used topic, i find you story to be well written and refreshing. a fic can be the most original thing you've ever read and still be written so poorly that it's terrible. i like this a lot. i felt that the characterizations were well done and accurate. you gave enough information in the clever flashbacks. i especially like the realistic conversations. my favorite so far is the chess game between harry and dumbledore. at first i thought you were going to portray dumbledore as a manipulative bastard who doesn't care about harry's safety. i'm glad you didn't go that route. so few people embrace the affection dumbledore truly feels for harry. i also like that you're not trio bashing just because harry has befriended the malfoys. draco's honest assessment of hermione and ron's reaction to harry's secret was just that, an honest assessment. what harry feels, it doesn't mean he no longer cares for his friends or that they no longer care for him. all friendships have weaknesses and i think you've betrayed that accurately and with heart. anyway, as i said, this is well done and i hope you plan on updating frequently. vanteera stories are my favorite creature fics and i'd hate to get addicted and then have you lose interest. keep up the good work.
    ps: i apologize for the long review.
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  • From ANON - amyordinary on November 27, 2006
    I just found this story.. though I kind of remember something like this, so I may have read the first chapter and forgotten.. anyways, I love it so far and look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - SAVAAN on January 30, 2006
    THIS IS REALLY GOOD, KEEP IT UP
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  • From ANON - Janai on January 29, 2006
    Okaaay. Um, good story and all, but the last part of chapter two made absolutely --no-- sense. At all. Which kinda wreck the 'oh, this is really good...' thing I had going. ^^0 Um, did you accidentally cut out the middle? What in the heck's going on?? I'd really appriciate an explanation...so yeah, thanks in advance. ^^0
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on January 27, 2006
    mm-hmm. Ok, I didn't realize I had read thisss before until mid ch1, ssso I continued on. Pleassse continue, I jussst love creature ficsss.
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 27, 2006
    good chapter, bye
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  • From Tamura on January 26, 2006
    so far so good. keep up the good work
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