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By : tas
  • From ANON - emily on November 03, 2006
    wow i loved that story...really well written

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  • From ANON - dmweasley on November 01, 2006
    Loved the story. Very nicely done. Am also very interested in your new Harry/Spike fanfic. Will definitely be keeping an eye out for that!
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  • From ANON - ME! (Manda) on October 31, 2006
    HI! I have many many things to ask you, but first I have to get something out of the way: GREAT FIT! You did really well making this challenge your own. I would praise you more on that subject, but I to be some where soon(just scruffing down dinner right now). So, first of all, who came up with this challenge? And don't yell at me if it's on your profile, cuz I haven't looked at it yet, kay's? Secondly, is the challenge still open to take? I'm really busy at the moment (that
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  • From ANON - Rez on October 30, 2006
    Super awsome fic...never read one with Vanteera before...meh, they are cool, if a little too good to be true. I think my favorite part was that you're Canadian. Wanna know how I know? It's all in the smarties baby.

    Keep typin'
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on October 18, 2006
    What else is there to say but OH MY GOD!!! Talk about great writing. Your whole story was great but I have to say your sex scenes where out of this world. Made me want to go attack my other half. Good Job !!
    K.
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  • From Pheobi on October 18, 2006
    Hey, this review is for two reasons. One: I just LOVE this story! It's my favorite out of all of the Vanteerian ones I've read...and I've read quite a few!

    Two: in response to the review from jj about how people can't be allergic to salt. That's untrue. I happen to have what's known as a "skin allergy" to it. I am incapable of swimming in the ocean without developing a severe rash on my entire body; the rash is both itchy and painful as it makes my skin very tight. As to our eyes naturally making a saline solution...trust me, crying isn't very pleasant when it makes your eyes burn like crazy and your cheeks get red and itchy, not to mention it's as painful as swimming in the ocean is. While I can safely eat salt and can handle it in my body quite well, it's not fun having it stuck to my skin. And having talked to an allergist about it, I've learned that "skin allergies" to salt are actually fairly common!

    So, considering Harry is a magical creature, it's not that odd for him to have developed a more serious allergy to salt.

    This isn't me flaming jj at all...just me feeling the need to point out that often allergies are very strange in HUMANS...so magical creatures could certainly be expected to have stranger ones!

    Again, I absolutely ADORE this story, and look forward to the epilogue!

    ~ FallenAngel
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  • From ANON - Lowz on October 17, 2006
    very nice realy enjoyed you story! cant wait for your nxt enstalment! low x
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  • From ANON - manx on October 16, 2006
    I REALLY don't understand WHY Harry didn't "accio" Hedwig while his uncle was still in the yard! He had PLENTY of time, as it would have taken several minutes for Vernon to even get to Harry's room. Harry could have had the LOCK opened even and Hedwig would have been able to fly away. I hate stories where Vernon kills her.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 16, 2006
    YAY! ^_^ Aw, they're so happy! And Voldie's dead now! *cheers* *throws confetti* Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - purrfus on October 07, 2006
    Can't wait for the last few chapters. I don't understand why some people get so upset about logic and reality, or out of canon behavior: fan fiction is automatically out of canon. If the writing is good, and the story stays true to its own logic - those are the important things. Your writing is very good, and the story is true to itself - keep on doing things your way.
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  • From ANON - SilverShadow on July 03, 2006
    I resently saw this story on the silver snitch, and I was just a little curious as to why it has more chapters on this site.
    Oh well. I praise the great YAOI story!!! Great story!!!! Have Fun!!!Love-Ya. Bye.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2006
    that was one hot story!!!more please???
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  • From kataly on January 29, 2006
    Very good


    Kat
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  • From ANON - dark_samira on January 26, 2006
    I'm relatively new to HP/SS ship but, nonetheless, I think this is one of those I like most.
    Even because I think it is particulary difficult to not fall in the ridiculous or to give in to excesses when you write strories with such particular features: Lucius in the good side, Harry as a magical creature, ecc.
    Often they become just hideous parody of a story.
    Yours instead keeps having a good plot, lot of smut and lot of suspence.

    So, does Voldemort knows all about the Vanteera?
    Was he the one to make someone put the sail on the potion?

    Why did the light of the wand hurt Harry?
    Didn't you said that a normal wand light wouldn't hurt him, just a very strong one?

    Keep feeding me with your story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Redskye on January 17, 2006
    So Far so good. Can't wait to see where you take it.
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