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By : tas
  • From ANON - Tris on January 14, 2006
    DETENTION is gone for good sadly...i love the story
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  • From Severine on December 18, 2005
    brilliant story, can't wait to read the next chapter
    thx for writing
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  • From on December 17, 2005
    Great chapter, i absolutely loved it!!
    Can't wait for more
    Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - DrarrySev on December 16, 2005
    I just thought of something... what happens when Harry comes into contact with Severus' bodily fluids? Male ejaculate, blood, tears, sweat... all of which he can be expected to encounter at one time or another... all have a measurable amount of salt in them... and even if he is protected from harm because Sev is his mate... what about his other family members? Perhaps you should have something happen where Harry encounters some salty fluids of someone other than Sev... and that could be the inspiration to create a charmed piece of jewelery or a potion or something that would protect harry... just a thought.
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  • From ANON - DrarrySev on December 16, 2005
    I am so totally in love with this story... regarding salt... you may make mention of the fact that his body creates the needed salts from other minerals he obtains through the foods he eats... and that the amount is so small that it does not effect him, but the concentrated salt fond in sea water... or in most foods is what causes the allergic reaction. I do think you should consider creating some sort of sheild to protect him during battle... since the war could be lost by simply conjuring sea water and dousing Harry with it during a duel... Whatever you decide, I sincerely hope that you will be posting again soon!
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  • From ANON - adi on December 15, 2005
    Love this story!! So glad that you have added two new chapters! I have been reading other Vanteera challenges and have fallen in love with the idea. I appreciate all the hard work that comes from using someone else's requirments for a story and have to say that you have done a superb job with this one. I eagerly await your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Liz on December 15, 2005
    What about Harry's animagus form? Is it gonna come into play again?

    I love this story, just sat and read through it almost non-stop (damned internet connection..it went down earlier) This story is fucking fantstic....Harry and Snape...they make such a hot couple....*sighs dramatically* For a challenge fic this is awesome, I hope to see an update soon, I'll be keeping my eyes open for one.

    Devotedly,

    Liz
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on December 15, 2005
    I love your story. I just read all the posted chapters and it is fabulous!
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 15, 2005
    good chapters
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  • From ANON - jess on December 15, 2005
    i like it

    altho almost everything has salt in it but we can ignore that and asume harry has a diff composition then us measly humans
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  • From Sevvie0901 on December 15, 2005
    Wow, really good story so far! One of my favourites ^.^

    Detention is closed. They are not putting it back up because it has been deleted, everything is gone. I don't know if you have livejournal, but recently there has been some wankage with the co-mods and the administrator. So The admin closed down the site for many different reasons revolving around that. I don't have the links to it but I could go look and see if the lj community for Detention is still up. The mod there said it will shut down as well in a few days. Let me know!

    Although there was an archive "Walking the Plank" also shut down some time ago and there has been an announcement regarding re-opening it because of what happen at Detention.

    Anyway, I hope you have a wonderful christmas and see you on your next update!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on December 14, 2005
    Thanx for updating! Yippy! My condolences to you for working retail. Definately no free time at Christmas ( lucky enough to get a day off!). Harry and Severus are sure getting to know each other over these last few chapters. Makes for lovely reading! I'm looking forward to what Voldemort has in store for them.
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  • From ANON - Newtype on December 14, 2005
    Sweet aditions Tas! I liked the arangment of teasing adn pet name intros as well as the fact that Draco's owl dose nto like Severus, the visit by Dudley was nice aws well. I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Demon on December 14, 2005
    I love this and I look forward to the next chapter I love this story and it is easily one of my most favourites to read
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  • From ANON - Demon on December 14, 2005
    Great chapter looking forward to the next one
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