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Reviews for Bittersweet

By : SiriuslySevered
  • From ANON - DawnEB on October 28, 2005
    Well, I thought the 1st chapter was well written, and had enough individuality in it to keep it's head above the usually 'ho hum, Snape and/or Granger hit by love and/or lust magic'. 2nd chapter was more like you were treading water, worrying we would understand the differences in the spells, but I did love the scene between the boys at the end. This chapter has been a huge leap forward, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.


    I had been a little worried that they both seemed a little too ready to throw themselves at each other when they seemed to have had little interaction over the preceding weeks, but then I thought 'hormonally charged young woman who knows what she wants, previously repressed man under influence of magic with a young woman giving him the green light' and realised that they may need to get some of the UST out of the way before they can have a decent conversation :)
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  • From ANON - MAGGIE on October 20, 2005
    this is so good its so sweet and cute! please continue soon
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  • From ANON - Vickie on September 30, 2005
    Ch. 1. Great beginning! Your plot bunny may not be completely original, but I don't remember seeing one exactly like this. I like the way it happened due to Ron trying to hex Harry. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes. As for the song, I absolutely love it - the video as well. My teenage daughter, who is a huge fan of both HIM and The Rasmus, introduced me to the song, which led to checking out Apocalyptica's other music too. I especially love all the Metallica covers. Anyway, can't wait for more of your story!
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