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Reviews for Indago:Reborn

By : lojenn

From Chandrima on January 24, 2006
Oh, my god. This story just keeps geting better! I'm on the edge of my computer chair wanting to know what happens! Please post more!
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From ANON - sternschen on January 24, 2006
So, a review was long overdue! Finally we know why Harry acted like an arse and thank the all mighty Gods
that it isn't some after birht thing which I first suspected. You made us all forget about that american who has a reservation
for a straight-jacket. I feel really sorry for Harry woulnd't surprise me if he becomes a tad suicidal after he remembers that he
tried to kill his baby.
But I remembered lustrum. The big question is: How far away or how close is it? Will they find Harry in time? Is Remus going to find him?
Okay, keep working. You are creating a wonderful story. You had me hooked from the first chapter of Indago.

Bye Sternschen
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From ANON - sak on January 24, 2006
I agree with some of your readers that this back and forth of Harry's was difficult to take, but I suspected what you revealed in this chapter--the rogue Supero was the cause. I did not see the werewolf twist, but I am hoping for a happy conclusion. Dougal does not sound like a reasonable individual.
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From ANON - Aunt Bijou on January 24, 2006
Oh, honey, thank you for updating so soon, and I hope you update just as quickly again. I will admit, right now, reading this is so stressful, Auntie's heart is just pounding, and if she could, she'd write herself right into your fic just so she could swoop in and rescue Harry! But that's what shows how good this is, that you've got her heart pounding so! I'm trembling! Oh, soon, soon, so Auntie can cheer when Draco and Severus rescue him!
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From ANON - RD Wind on January 24, 2006
And the "Excellence in Writing" award goes to: INDAGO 2: REBORN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

{{{the crowd goes wild!!}}}

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From ANON - NightShade on January 24, 2006
I am so happy it was not Lucius... I will cut Muroch to little pieces and give him to crows to eat him! Poor Harry! I hope werewolves will not hurt him. I hope Remus would be able to find him... OMG it is excellent!
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From ANON - LadyJane on January 24, 2006
poor poor ably, having her parents killed and being threatened with the killing of her siblings... sooo mean how that evil git tricked her into it!
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From ANON - Jan on January 24, 2006
Alrighty, then...here comes the rollercoaster! What a great story...of course, it all fits together, now! Poor Ably... the werewolves ate his parents? Gah! Too bad the little guy didn't tell Harry...Harry would have gone off to rescue his sister and brother. Yes, parts of the story have been depressing...I was almost terrified to read the last couple of chapters, but I had faith it would get better. I fear for Harry and what might be done to him physically and emotionally. And I can't wait until Draco meets the werewolf who cost the life of his first child....I hope you got some really (!) harsh plans for that particular wolf...*feeling a little blood thirsty here*. Surely the leak will come to Lupin thru the Werewolves, thus earning him a grudgeful respect from Draco. Plus, I knew there was something weird Muroch had going with his mother from the few hints you dropped earlier...what a nutcase! He also deserves whatever Snape and Draco can dish out *yet more bloodthirsty feelings*. This has been an incredible story, and I am so glad you are writing it... Until next time....*goes to put on safety helmet for the ride to come* ^_^
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From ANON - JJ on January 24, 2006
P.S. About your AN. You were right in that your warnings did say there would be plenty of nastiness. The problem is that we read those warnings when we start a story only. If the story is written in serial form, like most fic's on this site, then we never read the warnings again as we avidly pick up from where we left off from the previous week or month that we've read. I too was guilty of getting drawn into a story that was fascinating, with my favorite characters and a juicy/hot plot only to find both characters were killed in the final chapter. One of the few flames I've ever sent was to that one for a lack of warning and another for just incredibly bad taste. Being a teacher, and seeing all the grammar/spelling/plot misstakes in these stories, that should tell you how upset I was because I never pick on another's grammar/spelling/plot mistakes. I know how hard it is to write and I'm so proud to see people who want to write and share stories for fun that I either ignore the mistakes and enjoy the plot or stop reading that fic. I think you came across someone who either missed the warning or was having a bad day. And they gave you one and it was passed around. Please don't let some jerk discourage you!!!! They are entitled to their opinion, but all of your other readers should be more than enough to balance the occassional bad review. Personally, I can't write a story for shi* and I enjoy your AU very much. You managed to create such a convincing universe with cool new creatures and two amazinginly interesting/exciting/adventurous plots that I wish you could feel proud about what you've done. The stories aren't always fluff and fun; they also include drama and angst but that rollor coaster of feelings is what makes them so exciting! I can see this story coming to it's conclusion soon and when it does I'm hoping you'll still want to write more stories, even different one's, and share them with us, too!!!
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From ANON - JJ on January 24, 2006
Yea!!!!!!! You set up the story so well that the natural progression is playing out beautifully. Lot's of hints from the beginning point to a well planned story. I love this AU!!! (P.S. Do you ever think Draco would let Harry breed a child for him?)
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From ANON - The Doctors In on January 24, 2006
Thought I would pop in and thank you for writing a great story. Remember folks, this is the person that wrote Indigo and you loved that story. There were trying times in that story as well. Trust your author for she seems to need no suggestions on how to write better, her grammer is just fine, past that, we really have no right to interfere in the creation of someone elses original work. To do so is to ruin the integrity of the first story. Remember, our reviews are only to improve a story, not to take it out of the authors hands and continue on our merry way and write it the way we want to. If we were so good at that, then we would have written our own story and I doubt that we would want anyone to mess with our story if we did. The Doctor.
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From ANON - lita on January 24, 2006
O..M..G!!! This is getting really good. I love this story!! I'm so glad there finally finding out what's happening to Harry!!! This chapter had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! And you brought back a character from the first part of Indago. Please update ASAP!!! I soooo can't wait to see what they do when Draco/Sev finally does find out!!
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From ANON - Storm on January 24, 2006
Finally back at school and able to be on the internet for indefinite periods of time. Loved the updates. I found them fascinating. My Heart jumped in fear when Harry let go of Maia. I was worried something would happen and then Draco would really go insane on him. Great work. I enjoyed it immensely. I can't wait to see what Snape and Draco do to those others. Slightly off topic question. Didn't you have another story on here that was a completed challenge, it was like 7 or 8 chapters long where Harry dances in a Faery circle, Draco finds him and binds him to himself and it goes from there for those two to work out their new relationship? I can't remember the name of it, but I was trying to tell my friend to read it and I couldn't find it. I thought you were the author but I could be mistaken. Am I or is it yours and where could she find it to read it, I told her it was a must read. I left my email address if you know what I'm talking about and could hopefully please let me know? Thanks! Great job again!
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From ANON - angelstarfire on January 24, 2006
Ohhh... this is getting good. :P I actually really liked this chapter... hehe. It is finally bringing pieces of the story together! *can't wait for the next chapter*
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From aloveablegimp on January 24, 2006
Hahaha!!! Things are finally falling into place! Oh God please dont kill Harry!!! Or worse make him have a a baby with that damn American! You are a brilliant writer and I cannot wait for more!! Please update soon!!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
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