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By : lojenn

From ANON - Chrysler...again on December 14, 2006
At first I was against Harry for getting mad at Draco, then against Draco for being a jealous, incosiderate asshole--though I love jealousy, then against Harry cause Draco was just trying to be protective, and then I was like screw this!!! Harry wised up and was all over Draco and I was like, I don't care anymore! YES! Draco won't have to wait for a year or two now! Bet Draco's going to be doing alot of protecting from now on, damn! Harry's really horny, yeah? All all the weird shit Draco calls out, Venus's tits, Merlin's cock....uh huh.... lol. Hahahaha, Harry arrogant...I love it.And Draco having a conversation with his infant kid. Priceless. It doesn't get cutter than that. I would be recording this and awwing if I were there. Damn! Luicius, do you never learn? Keep your damn mouth shut! I swear, there'll never be a peaceful father in law moment with harry ever! Wow...these 2 are always fighting, no? Sounds like me and my sister. If we don't fight atleast twice a day...something is wrong. Oh yeah, I knew Harry's request would be to be on top! This should be exciting. Love how they kept fighting their insticts. Awww, Draco said no...understandable, but it was a delicious thought! Maybe oneday...afterall, their love is thicker than their insticts...right? Hell, who wouldn't like a submissive Draco either....wow! That scene was very disatisfying though, I have to agree....but can't wait for that thought to be put into action. ^_^
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From ANON - Chrysler on December 14, 2006
Awww, poor Logan. He's feeling alone and lonely. I would too if my hubby moved in with a couple of hotties. I like how chumy Snape and HArry are getting, nothing sexual, but quite sweet. AWWW! THEY HAVE THEIR BABY!!! And it's a girl!! How cute!And Harry's maternalness (Sp?) so cute too! It'd be crazy to go through all that just to touch the cute little one, but hell, it's understandable. I'd be pretty protective too. 'She's perfect... ofcourse' lol! HAHA, the baby has Snape's eyes! But i'm glad the kid belongs to all of them. Snape deserves it afterall he's done, and you can tell he likes the kid already. Who wouldn't? She's perfect, ofcourse! But a giggling Snape in a sense, odd as it is, is still pretty amusingly cute. Poor Draco, all this conflict. Can't imagine what that must feel like with all this....*sniff* but now snape has to go...bet logan will be happy about this. *sigh* you make me like Luicius...alot--I liked him a bit before--but all these ridiculous parties! UGH! Hahaha, maybe in a year or two, when the baby finally gets the dreadful babysitter it'll take months to convince they get--snape perhaps....maybe then Draco can have Harry alone. Till then, tough luck buddy. Might as well get acquainted with that right hand.
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From ANON - Chrysler on December 13, 2006
Damn, isn't Harry sassy? "I'm the boy who lived, I can fry you like that....I demand to speak to someone higher that you?" Well....hahhaha..LOL!! Kinsley wants his body.....oh god, this is so crazy! But poor thing, he's being surrounded. Probably things they want his baby...nope, draco....Omg...all that for lunch? Awww, poor Harry...he may be a bit crazy but he did take time to do that lunch. AHHAHAH, snapes still evil, wow...Ooohh, so all Harry needed was love. Wohoo! Go Hermoine, telling Harry to shove it. And snape and her getting along....scary. But what the hell? Now Harry is trying to kill her? The drama never ends, does it? Is he jealous? Of Snape and Hermoine....lol!!! OMG, he is. Hahaha, guess they weren't really getting along afterall. It's so funny how their both ignoring the poor boy. I could've died when Snape crushed his crackers when Harry threw the zeus thing at him. aWwwww, harry's in a box, hahaha.Lol, Harry's got Draco wipped, subico or not, but either way, Draco's finally working his common sense and keeping his lover under control, i'm proud. And no harry, you're not a freak....That parkiensen dude is a dumbass, but damn...that was a bit scary, the gravy part too. But hey, he had fair warning. Atleast he wised up in the end.
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From ANON - Chrysler on December 13, 2006
Awww, I just adore Ably, poor baby.I want an Ably. I was totally in love with Dobby, but Ably sadly beats that little elf by a long run. Hahaha, and Ron gets funnier every minute. Hmm, it was interesting learning about those other Superos, definetly have the feeling we'll be seeing them later. And this new life in America sounds interesting. No more Ron or Hermoine (Pout), but Harry and Draco are so cute! And a new baby is on the way! YES! I loved that chapter too, with the party and Draco/Harry's midnight conversation, it was so cute, loving, and gentle. I just love the way they love each other, and the small things--DRaco softening, Harry sniffing Draco's underwear, how they both melt instantly after a fight cause it's so unbearable to stay mad for long ^_^. And Snape and Harry's friendship....sorta...is so amusing! Lucius and Narcissa...caring..to Harry....huh, who would've thunk it? Also, mood swings in stuff like this would make me kinda irked because some people overdo it to the point the character is just downright evil, but with Harry it's so amusing!!! I can't help snickering, reminds me of the 5th book--everyone hated pissy Harry, but I thought it was so humorous added with all the pity I felt for the poor guy. Sometimes, I feel like i'm reading the books, the character are really THAT exact most and basically the entire time. Hell, but if I were Hermoine in that situation, I'd either be laughing my ass of or going bezerck...mostly laughing my ass off at the hormonal teen--neither being wise. The Ron thing was a little below the belt though. Coincidence, I just finished watching a music video about Ron wanting to be like Harry, and all that jealousy crap. Oooh, where did Harry go? God, that boy is a handful. WOnder how Malfoy does it. Sometimes, i'm really glad that i'm a girl. I have all the reasons to be hormonal and I never have to be on the outside wrath of it ^____________^
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From ANON - Tarlina on November 16, 2006
From the moment I stumbled across your fanfic, Indago (and by relation, Indago:Reborn) it has been like a book I can't seem to put down. I was a bit shaky at first by the portrayal of Harry's bleak outlook, lack of any sort of free will (for apparantly all time), and Draco's cruelty... but I stuck with it and have been quite impressed by your writing style, and your conviction to pursue your muse the way you see fit.
I will admit that it is difficult to see Harry so different from our regular Harry, but I can get around it.
Mostly I wanted to commend you on your interaction between Maia and Draco at the end of chapter 19. You have a way of cleverly wording it that I could picture in my head 2 scenes; interaction between father and daughter, and a man confidently talking to himself. It was very amusing and I loved every minute of it.
Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - newjay on November 08, 2006
Wow! I have been fallowing all of your work. I think you are the best fanfiction writter I have and will ever read.
This storie litterly made me have an emotional breackdown reading it. But it is beyond worth it. The line -- Severus shrugged. "I stopped paying any real attention to him years ago." -- is what saved me in the end from a night of the weeps. -blush-
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your writting. You sure know how to throw a girls heart around with it. ^_~

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From ANON - Jennifer on October 23, 2006
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very cute story and ending! I LOVED it. If you ever write any more long stories PLEASE let me know my e-mail is sweetkisses80830@aol.com!

Jen
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From ANON - LMStruchen on October 20, 2006
Love this story will there be a third instalment?
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From ANON - sinheart on October 17, 2006
awww! a happy ending, i love happy endings. you are a phat writer!
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From xvshadowsqueenvx on October 16, 2006
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story. I've been waiting for this for some time. Thank you thank you thank you. Please continue with the next episode whenever you are ready
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From ANON - LittleBit84 on October 15, 2006
Aww that was like the cutest ending and the interaction between Severus and Maia was awesome it was so funny. I just love your Indago stories I will definately keep my eye out for the third one.

laters,Manda
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From ANON - yoblossom on October 15, 2006
^____^ I loved the ending! I can't wait for the thrid story!
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From ANON - Bouvais on October 15, 2006
That was just lovely! A few terrifying moments but all in all, another job fantastically done. So glad you're continuing with this series.
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From ANON - j.s. on October 14, 2006
Nope, I haven't gotten sick of Indago yet. It's nice to read a well-thought-out story for a change. I'm looking forward to the third one in the series. Will it be a trilogy, or do you think you will be doing a fourth one too?
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From xvshadowsqueenvx on October 14, 2006
Thank you for updating I've been waiting for a while for these new chapters. Please please keep writing. I'm in love with this series and I have to know what happens to poor Harry
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