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Reviews for Indago:Reborn

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - eimiaj on December 13, 2005
    Poor Harry!! *cries* i don't care that Draco's trying to protect them, he should treat Harry like that!!!! Harry should have reacted like that to Luicius, but Draco shouldn't have done that to Harry! ...please update soon!
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  • From aloveablegimp on December 13, 2005
    Aww... poor Harry... :( I am sad... I hope that they can work through this... please update soon!
    Love and a Peace,
    ~*~Kates~*~
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  • From ANON - elecktra on December 13, 2005
    OMG!!!! That was great!!! Go Harry!!! But sad he had to get yelled at by Draco!! That was one of your best chapters to me!! I sooo can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! Update ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - Akusaa on December 13, 2005
    Oooooooh!

    *breathes in*

    Wow.

    CANNOT wait for update! Draco is so scary *cough*sexy*cough* when he is angry *grin*
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  • From ANON - ChasteBlush on December 13, 2005
    Oh ... ... ... oh ... ... ... ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
    Ok, here goes, good on Harry for almost killing Lucius, DIE Lucius for threatening to ruin their life together, oh Draco noooooooooooooo for being so angry with Harry, Lucius was being a bastard, he must realise why he did it, why he said those things!!!!
    A brilliant update as always, truelly amazing story, i've been here from the beginning and i'll be with you too the end!!!!

    Update ASAP!!!
    ChasteBlush
    x x x
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 13, 2005
    Poor Harry! Need chapter 21! What a family to be married into. Harry gave it all away? The Potter and the Black fortunes? Holy moly! That was thoughtful and yet stupid at the same time.
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  • From ANON - NightShade on December 13, 2005
    This chaprter was very good! Only I thought Lucius have "more" in him - I enjoyed the scene in the first "indago" story, where he saw how Draco was seeing Harry almost die... But your Lucius is very good. Poor boys.
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  • From ANON - Storm on December 13, 2005
    Yay! an update and what an update it was. I had shivers. Not that Lucius didn't deserve something but damn, a mad Draco is a... Well a mad Draco! Great job and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job
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  • From ANON - red on December 13, 2005
    couldn't harry just claim he was protecting the bebe? *pouts* i would have laughed if he had kicked lucius' arse. ^.- great chap, i like all the action.
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  • From ANON - WretchedScar on December 13, 2005
    WOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! That was a furking AWESOME Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!! Please update fast!!! I can't stand this! yeesh!!!!
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  • From ANON - asD on December 13, 2005
    FUCK DRACO! He's was such an asshole in this chapter. I hope Harry runs away..with the baby and all. Hmm.. maybe live in a little cottage with swiss cheese walls, chedder shingles, motz. tiles....cheese...mmmmm....cheese......
    Eh. Anyway. Yeah and stab Lucius in the eye. Great chapter. The only piece of constructive criticism that i can give you is that right about now, it feels like you're cranking out chapters mainly to subdue the masses and please the reviewers. The pace of Current Situations seems a bit slow...like it's crawling and stopping every so often to elaborate upon 'this or that' which could be summed up much more quickly than believed. There's nothing wrong with your writing- it's just the pace of the whole shindig, from my perspective. A short chapter dedicated to a meeting with parents that sets up the idea that they can destory their children's lives? I don't think it should take one whole chapter to portray this (besides, you had gotten this point across through earlier chapters). Maybe take a break from writing or something. Write things at your own pace. From your latest description it seems like you're trying to meet 'deadlines' which may in turn compromise the quality of your chapters...not your writing, your writing is pretty good...just the pace of the storyline.
    Anyway, I'm not here to beat you up with a club or anything. I really appreciate the time and effort you put into your works, and your big fanbase really shows for this. Just- maybe you can take a look back at the chapters you had written or are writing and get rid of all the excess baggage? I'm stupid. Great work though. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - mira on December 12, 2005
    eeep!!! and meeeep!!
    Explosive chapter! And wow is Draco fun when he is mad. Is mai a supero or subicio? How soon will we know? And if she is subicio wont she need to marry an indago(in reference to the contracts and whatnot) Lucius is exciting like this but it seems like his love for his son would come out a bit more somewhere? Wonderful wonderful chapter and please write more!!
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  • From ANON - Brittany on December 12, 2005
    oh wow, angry draco. Hehe i love it!!! I like it when he takes control of his powers every now and then.please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - RedSharpie on December 12, 2005
    Just finished up the current chapters. It was v. good, and I am quite happy with how the story is going. Great job!
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  • From ANON - tinkita on December 11, 2005
    Really great sequel! I love it!

    tinkita
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