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Reviews for Indago:Reborn

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  • From ANON - doesitmatter on November 26, 2005
    OMG I NEED MORE!!
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  • From aloveablegimp on November 26, 2005
    Yay!! Harry talked! lol!! I am so glad they are getting along. I need more smut soon though!! The story is awesome though and i am throughly enjoying it!
    Much love!
    Love and a Peace,
    ~*~Kates~*~
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  • From ANON - Storm on November 26, 2005
    A great chapter. Aww no! No more written? Well the story is damn well worth waiting for but please hurry up! (giving sad puppy-dog eyes) :) Great job!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 26, 2005
    That last chapter went by too fast...So, Sev is leaving after Maia's Naming, and hopefully, Draco will finally be back to shagging his husband...but, what monkey-wrench is Lucius going to throw into the works?
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  • From ANON - splitbeak on November 26, 2005
    cool story. the way you have harry interact with the baby is surprisingly (in a good way) non corny and fun to read. poor draco.
    now that the baby's born, are they moving to canada soon? is snape going to come with them? i doubt hermione and ron will, but flooing does make visiting easier, although that means lucius could too, which would defeat the purpose.
    i had an idea that's probably stupid, but i figure there's no harm in sharing. what if the american indago abducts harry, trying to breed with him, but ends up being a horrible mate? you know how dogs that are used to fight other dogs in arenas can become little more than snarling, defensive, vicious creatures? like in white fang. draco and snape could save him, and sorta human-ize (for an indago) harry again, help him reconnect with his baby and pack.
    i know, stupid, but nothing to lose.
    no matter what, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING (aka flame_red_ginny) on November 25, 2005
    Yeppers! Another great chappie!!
    *HIP HIP HOORAY!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!*
    I dont know why I even bother writing on AFF if I write on your LJ...but oh well, its become a force of habit! :D
    You had some mistakes on this chapter (I wouldnt point them out bc they are so minute, but I know you're a perfectionist)
    the most glaringly obvious one (and the only one I can remember now) was the wrong name designated to the character: it says "Draco smiled innocently up at Draco..." when I believe it should say "Harry smiled innocently up at Draco..."
    But that's just a small mistake!
    I hope you had an EXCELLENT Turkey Day!!
    I have 15 pounds of good Turkey food inside my tummy...well, its more like 1/2 pound anyways
    *shrugs*
    hehe!
    Take care of yourself and update soon! (even though I know it will be a week, but I'm counting on you to have a change of heart and update sooner than that! :D I know that if all the readers/reviewers band together, we'll be able to pursuade you!!!(
    MWAHAHAHAHAH!! THAT is the power of the audience over the author!!!!!
    hehehehe
    anyways, update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING (aka flame_red_ginny) on November 25, 2005
    Yeppers! Another great chappie!!
    *HIP HIP HOORAY!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!*
    I dont know why I even bother writing on AFF if I write on your LJ...but oh well, its become a force of habit! :D
    You had some mistakes on this chapter (I wouldnt point them out bc they are so minute, but I know you're a perfectionist)
    the most glaringly obvious one (and the only one I can remember now) was the wrong name designated to the character: it says "Draco smiled innocently up at Draco..." when I believe it should say "Harry smiled innocently up at Draco..."
    But that's just a small mistake!
    I hope you had an EXCELLENT Turkey Day!!
    I have 15 pounds of good Turkey food inside my tummy...well, its more like 1/2 pound anyways
    *shrugs*
    hehe!
    Take care of yourself and update soon! (even though I know it will be a week, but I'm counting on you to have a change of heart and update sooner than that! :D I know that if all the readers/reviewers band together, we'll be able to pursuade you!!!(
    MWAHAHAHAHAH!! THAT is the power of the audience over the author!!!!!
    hehehehe
    anyways, update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on November 25, 2005
    Awe, poor Draco. lovely chapter
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 25, 2005
    Harry is still so cute and adorable. Another marvelous chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ChasteBlush on November 25, 2005
    Wow, hes had a baby, so amazing the way you've done all that
    its brilliant, the way Harry responds so to the child, like a true caring father,
    This is such a good story, and Dracos so sweet as a Daddy, its lovely,
    Snape as well, you know i'm generally liking this whole set up with the three of them.
    Please please write more,

    And would you believe, i was reading abck over it and i realised, i missed a whole chapter, the one at the ministry as well, can you
    believe it, what an idiot am i???

    Keep Writing, Update SOon,
    ChasteBlush
    x x x
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  • From ANON - doesitmatter on November 25, 2005
    OMG UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From aloveablegimp on November 25, 2005
    Aww!! She is so cute! I knew the American would come back! ^_^ That makes me happy! I want Draco to fight for Harry. Another great chapter and i cannot wait for more!! Update soon please!
    Love and a Peace,
    ~*~Kates~*~
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  • From ANON - Kayla on November 24, 2005
    Oh, one more thing. THE BABY IS SO ADORABLE =DDDD I love how she has Snape's eyes, and most importantly, Draco's hair. Beautiful!
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  • From ANON - Kayla on November 24, 2005
    Dear most favourite author besides J.K. Rowling.

    I'd just like to say that you write beautifully, and I've actually printed out Indago, and what there is of Indago: Reborn, and stapled them together so I can read them anytime I want n___n They are the most creative and intelligent fics I've ever read, not to mention my favourite - if that isn't already obvious. They're hilarious, and sad, and suspenseful, and I WANT CHAPTER 17 @___@. -breathes slowly- Hmm, yes, anyway. I'm in love with the way you've portrayed Harry, Draco, and Snape. They were always my favourite characters, but now they're even more so. I liked them better when they were still in school, but they're still indescribably amazing outside of Hogwarts =D You have true talent, you do. Keep it up ^_________^

    - Kayla
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  • From ANON - Anita on November 24, 2005
    So many chapters in the update! And the birth! I like the way you have kept the actually birth so low-key, it really showed how Harry was (and still is) relying on his instinct...hiding away like that and doing the birth by himself.
    The way that Draco and Sev had to aprove of the child is also very 'animal' like, just like in the wild.

    Great chapters! Keep on writing!
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