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Reviews for Indago:Reborn

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - avihenda on November 08, 2005
    oh! this chapter was fun to read :-) great humor in it, especially the end :-)
    There was alot of critizism of the last chapter? *Hmm* *thinks about it* I guess you could see it in a bad light.... But I can't say I feelt that it was all that bad when I read it, coz I can't remember any stong feelings like that.
    I think your doing a great jobb with this fic and I love every update, there is allways a new twist I didn't see coming.
    I hope the others wheren't to harsh with their coments.
    youre dedicated fan/Avihenda
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  • From ANON - lilycat on November 08, 2005
    I LOVE your story and no one could write it better than you do, so I hope you didn't take my concerns as criticism. They certainly weren't intended as such, but rather just to let you know exactly how emotionally involved we get with your story. Whereas you know exactly where it is going and why the Superos act the way they do, we don't always see that right away. Does that make sense? It's not that I don't trust that you have a great reason for everything you've written and the way you've written it. I just wanted to let you know that after the last few chapters, I was really hurting for Harry.

    Anyhow, I will always love your story. LOVE! It's one of my permanent favorites, and I hope that you didn't take offense to anything I said, as it certainly wasn't intended that way. With my own writing, one of the most helpful reviews to get is the emotional reaction of a reader that is totally different to my own. I know that as I'm writing, I typically have the end result in mind, which has a huge effect on how I perceive everything that happens in between.

    I will stop rambling now and tell you that the last chapter (as all of your chapters) was great. I loved that Harry was kick-ass in addition to Snape and Draco. I have to say, I can't get enough of Snape and Draco in this setting- as the dangerous magical creatures with their hackles up. Beautifully done!
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  • From ANON - Akusaa on November 08, 2005
    Lol, I was too badly affected by Sev's experiment. It needed to be done!

    Can't wait for the next chapter, I love your nasty Draco *grins*
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  • From ANON - ChasteBlush on November 08, 2005
    good two updates but a little short, and i think maybe Harrys a bit feminine. But still loving it, keep writing, waiting for another update soon!

    thanks,
    ChasteBlush
    x x x
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  • From ANON - Forgive my anon on November 08, 2005
    Thanks for the new chap. Very entertaining. Just like the last one. I haven't read the reviews so I don't know what people's problem is. But I thought it was very much in character. I can soo see Snape 'trying an experiment' just to see what Harry does, not worrying about if Hermione got hurt. I'm sure he'd feel guilty if Harry was upset that he hurt his friend, but that wouldn't occur to him right away. And as far as Snape's and Draco's cavalier attitude about Harry 'going off his rocker', that just seems like good survival instincts. And let's face it, Snape and Draco are both very self centered. But it is very obvious that they both care for Harry.
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  • From ANON - Hey on November 08, 2005
    Could you please tell us if snape is going to have something romantic towards Harry? Please tell us now. And explain why Harry puts up with being so neglected? Cause Draco is always just working or irritating Harry.. or worst: leting Snape do Experiments with him... It doesn't seem to be a lovely relationship...
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  • From ANON - acr on November 08, 2005
    AWWW! Poor Mr. Parkenstein! LOL! I was kind of hoping he'd be a recurring character. I gotta agree with some of your other readers about the last chapter, though. Snape and Draco REALLY need an attitude adjustment.
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  • From ANON - Aki Arau on November 08, 2005
    God that was short!!! I need more! MORE! NOW!
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  • From ANON - Roberta26 on November 08, 2005
    I guess he got a clue about how the Indago "pack" works! Don't be suprised at the critics, just be aware there are far more of us who love how the story is going. Yo have created a whole new "race" after all, and Severus wouldn't be Severus if he didn't want to know how things work.
    More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Addict on November 08, 2005
    Hooray for quick updates! I'm glad you gave us that last chapter- it did help to bring the 'pack' back to cohesiveness a bit (before, it seemed like Draco and Snape were dealing with a puppy- one they didn't care about much.) I can't believe I'm about to write this, but I think I could really use some fluff (the inner me cringes as I type) to make Draco at least back into the caring husband he's supposed to be (isn't he???)
    And I loved your zoologist. Good diversion!
    Please, please please don't make us wait long for more new chapters!
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  • From ANON - Rosencofff on November 08, 2005
    :laughs: I love chapter 11! For some reason, I find it humorous. ^^; Although, I really shouldn't laugh about idiots being hurt... Oh well. XD This is my favorite chapter so far. :heart:
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 08, 2005
    Stupid stupid man! Almost feel sorry for the idiot! Harry got to him first. Hahaha! Can't wait for chapter 12!
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  • From ANON - Sahira on November 08, 2005
    Mahahahaaaa!!! Right on!!!
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  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on November 08, 2005
    Heh heh heh, no protection for the oblivious, is there? You sure you can't work a similar punishment in for Dolores Umbridge? Sorry, that was unworthy of Auntie. I am not going to make suggestions, because this is YOUR story, YOUR world that YOU are creating. YOU make the rules. Thank you for allowing me to wander around and explore in it, by the way. Love it and can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Missi on November 08, 2005
    So......Harry's protective of his tummy, too. I had a question that will undoubtably not be answered, but that's alright. Does the fact that the baby follows the Superos hands mean that it a subicio? I realize it's a stupid question and I'm probably overthinking it or reading things into it that aren't there, but my husband has very sternly ordered me to ask you and stop asking him all the f****** time (his words, well sort of. He doesn't speak *).

    Still love this fic, and the other one, and my dogs, and now I'll add my husband to the list. Thanks for the update!!
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