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Reviews for Indago:Reborn

By : lojenn

From ANON - asdf on November 08, 2005
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!! TWO NEW CHAPTERS! THIS IS BETTER THAN MY SECOND BEST DAY THIS WEEK (today being the second, first was sunday....mondays suck). :) Great great great good good good....I love this....keep up the cool work.
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From ANON - tsuzukuu on November 08, 2005
o_o well that seemed really odd.. it was a funny short piece (love harry's reaction btw!) but seemed so totally out of place with what was going on (i thought harry was taken to bed?) that it's made me confused...
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From ANON - anave on November 08, 2005
wow that's classic haha =D what a fun short chapter XD see ya soon!
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From ANON - Splitbeak on November 08, 2005
What was this chapter, comic relief? Lol. Great story so far. Thank you for delaying the birth. I'm not really looking foward to having the baby around. I think Snape's experiments are awesome- I hope you don't stop!
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From ANON - yoblossom on November 08, 2005
^^ I LOVE IT WHEN A IDIOT ANGERS THEM!!!!

Please continue! I simply love it!
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From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on November 08, 2005
that chapter was HILARIOUS!!
that parkenstein!
*shakes head*
Thank you for updating so soon!
I'm sorry your reviews made you feel that way! We just didnt like to see harry objectified so.
But Power Harry of chapter11 is awesome!!!
Good job!
we also like Sub Harry, but we just want Snape and Draco to be a little considerate next time and not disregard him when he's having a tantrum.
We love ur stories as they are! :D

however, if the only way we can get you to update 3 chapters in one day is to complain about the plot of the story,
I believe you will be hearing a lot of complaints (atleast from me) in the near future!!
*wink wink*
love the frequency of updates
*enjoying it while it lasts
update soon!
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From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on November 07, 2005
Another side note:
I forgot to mention this in my previous post, but I do hope that Harry will be given more respect by his superos in the future.
If not, will he be driven into the arms of a certain...*ahem ahem*...mr. muroch? *blushes*(sounds hot actually!)
*fans self*
*wonders how 2 jealous indagos will act like...how romantic! or not...they'll probably rip muroch's head off if that happens*

Anyways, please ignore the ridiculous writing by my alter ego in between the asterisks.
What I'm trying to get at is: I hope there's a method to the madness of snape (and draco)
Its really hurtful to read Harry (such a strong character originally) to be made to kneel to others when he is pregnant!
I could understand it b4 (it was strangely kinky in Indago--except the throwing-harry-down-the-stairs episode), but now he's pregnant. he deserves to be treated with more respect
not that I think he only should get respect when he's with child, but he should be treated with more care and concern. snape and draco are bastards here and I hope you can resolve that in the future chapters :D
please?!
update soon!
we love ur work!
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From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on November 07, 2005
*breathes a sigh of relief*
suspense over! I had a feeling harry was jealous but I had no idea it was an experiment!
Its nice to know that snape has no feelings for hermione...that was bothering me for awhile...for what reason, only God knows...
I mean snape...hermione....no.
I have a problem with him being with logan as it is...if he had feelings for hermione, suffice it to say, that that would have incited me to discontinue reading this story (and I dont wanna do that! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!)

this chapter is entirely too short just so you know ;)
but its good that you've put that evil cliffie to rest!
thank you for that!
I couldnt sleep at night because of the disturbing ending to chapter 9!
*hey! i'm not weird!!!*
hehehe
love love love this chapter and the story in general!
please update soon and we'll love the story and you even more!!
^-^
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From ANON - lilycat on November 07, 2005
Let me begin by saying that I LOVE your stories. I love that the relationships are complex and I love the subtleties of your characterizations. I think the humor is hilarious and the specifics of their species are amazingly creative.

That said, I am having a hard time getting on board with these latest chapters. I am hoping that it is intentionally so- that you are building up the tension in anticipation of some sort of resolution i.e. MASSIVE guilt and apologetic behavior, if not the actual words, on the part of Draco and now Snape as well.

There's the dominant/submissive aspect of their relationship and I really do understand that. It isn't always a fluffy sort of love and I understand that as well. But I find Draco and Snape's behavior as of late to be absolutely appalling. It isn't a matter of dominance, but of being callous, cruel, and objectifying Harry. They are not treating his (very genuine and valid) emotions and reactions with any sort of concern or decency. He's like a toy or an actual pet that they manipulate, then laugh at his expense.

As I said, I certainly don't mean to question your writing, which is absolutely superb. I'm sure you have a dramatic arch planned out here. It's just getting to the point that it is very uncomfortable to read, as their treatment of Harry is bordering on unforgivable in my eyes. Perhaps that is merely the point of view of one who has witnessed similar behavior in real life relationships, I don't know.

Anyhow, it's as well-written as always and I do absolutely love your writing. Will be looking forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - LadyX on November 07, 2005
well then that was...interesting...nice of Draco to be home early.cant wait for more
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From ANON - empathic siren on November 07, 2005
Hello. I quite enjoyed Indago and have been enjoying Indago:Reborn. Until now, that is. I was utterly dismayed by Harry's treatment in this chapter--I found the indignity he was made to suffer beyond the pale. To me, that's saying something given much of what he has suffered in both this story and the one previous. But, I always felt (before now, anyway) that either Draco or Severus was rooting for him as a person--someone with intelligence, independence; someone worthy and deserving of respect. Draco and Severus's treatment of him in this chapter, however, seem to point to a complete and total lack of respect. They (Severus especially) were unnecessarily cruel and paternalistic. They treated him as a thing; something to be toyed with at their whim, something without thought or feeling. Heartbreaking, really. My only hope is that this is merely a plot point that will either force Harry to leave or will be explained in some other satisfactory way.

Please understand that I get that the relationship between Harry/Draco and/or Harry/Severus is unequal. I get that Harry is a sub. I even get that that the conversation between Draco and Severus while Harry was attempting to throw things was meant to be humourous (though, I think the "humor" merely exacerbated the exploitive cruelty Harry was made to suffer). But, what I don't get is the complete disregard for his dignity by people who have come to love him (Draco) and care for him (Severus). Neither emotion is present in this chapter and the characters appear to act without regard to the themes and motivations you have already established. You are a gifted storyteller and, certainly, this is your story to tell. This chapter, however, does not feel like your story.

I look forward to the next chapter (I really do) if for no other reason than to be proven wrong in my assessment.

--Siren
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From ANON - aloveablegimp on November 07, 2005
yay!! another update! thank you!! I love this story so much, good job!
Cheers!
Kates
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From ANON - Kat on November 07, 2005
Hi, Love your writing, and am really enjoying this sequel. I feel at times as though poor Harry is getting such a lack of respect and although it is apparent that Draco loves him, it's almost like he's a possession, which I guess is the Indago-ness and I'm not expressing myself well. I feel annoyed at Snape treating Harry as research and not as a real live person going through a difficult time and I guess I see Draco not treating him that well either and I feel so bad for him. And Hermione, poor poppet. Harry is going to feel so dreadful about that, something that Snape didn't take into account or doesn't care about, Harry's not a toy to play with he's a real live person, sorry ranting now. I'm stopping and saying that I can't wait to see where you are taking our boys.

Hugs

Kat
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From ANON - yoblossom on November 07, 2005
that was a very nasty experiment Snape did. but it did prove a point.

can't wait till the next chapter
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From ANON - anonymous on November 07, 2005
How mean of Snape, hope Hermione pays him back good. Please update soon, another excellent chapter.
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