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By : LadyRaye
  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on November 04, 2005
    ok so i just read this story in its entirety so far. it's really good, and very interesting. hopefully a happy ending! i'm so happy you update quickly...there's just a total loss of interest that occurs with authors who take fooorreeever to update a good story. can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on November 02, 2005
    ooh , this looks cool. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Emmeline Vance on November 02, 2005
    Hey again!

    I was so shocked and excited at seeing your next-day update, and am so grateful that Hermione's had her win over him. She deserves it especially with the shit he says to her, and I hope that their relationship steams up even more.

    I adored the line "I'm rich, remember?". It's good knowing he can stil lcome up with logical responses in his frenzied state. Cool!

    Hope you update again soon, and thanks so much for the fantastic update. Peace!

    Love, me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    dude, this is awesome!!! I love it! please update lots!

    geo
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  • From ANON - Tanpopo on November 02, 2005
    Oh boo, you can't just leave it there. Thats just so mean. You set us up with the foreplay and then you just end the chapter. This is AFF.net lets get some action going.

    Oh well hopefully next chapter we get to see Draco get her back for everything she did to him in school also. Hope it is just as good as what Hermione did to him.
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  • From ANON - Shmee on November 02, 2005
    o.o -.- O.O!! omg...i just read all of this in one sitting, just so I could avoid doing homework. Well, that is what I was doing at first, but I just got hooked and couldn't stop! This peice is great, I love it. Can I have some more of it? Please? At one point, I was starting to feal a little sad because my friend was used the same way Hermione was, and she knew she could have stopped it, but "she loved him". Well any way, I look foward to your update.

    -Shmee
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  • From ANON - Siobahn on November 02, 2005
    uu I love this!
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  • From ANON - fiona on November 01, 2005
    great chpater! update soon!
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  • From ANON - novasenshi on November 01, 2005
    I really like this fic. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2005
    nice work, especially with Hermione's thoughts about the cop costume involving Draco. Naughty girl! Hope you had a great halloween yourself. bye and update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Emmeline Vance on November 01, 2005
    Heya, fantastic update!

    I absolutely loved the evolution of their relationship from the denial stage to the secretly caring stage. Sweet!

    I can't wait till I read more of this wonderful piece, and hope that you'll update again soon. Peace!

    Love, me.
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  • From ANON - moxie on October 31, 2005
    Thank you for updating! And on Halloween too- what a treat! Really liked this chapter, you see how Draco & Hermione's relatinship is subtley changing.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on October 31, 2005
    Well, I like what you are doing with this. Hermione and Draco have a healthier relationship than just about everybody else. Everyone is so very tolerant of Ron, but I haven't figured out why. He's being horrible and selfish, I'm surprised Harry and Hermione have put up with his self-serving bullshit for so long. I was rooting for Draco to use the cruciatus!! lol. Now to get Hermione's head where it ought to be.....
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  • From ANON - lemonade on October 27, 2005
    Ron's double standards seems compatible with canon. I could actually see him doing this kind of thing, with his immaturity and his selfishness. The thing that seems menacing is that he now hates Hermione as much as Malfoy. Makes me think that sheis in for some trouble with Won won. ~shiver~

    Harry doesn't know yet, I wonder if she will tell him the truth about why she's using Malfoy or not. If not, he might have a really hard time with her new 'boyfriend'. It's still a bit sad that the only thing she can count on with the men in her life is that according to them, she is only good enough to be used. They treat her like a slut, and then condemn her for it.
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  • From ANON - coco puffs on October 25, 2005
    wow, i love your story! keep up the good work ;D
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