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Reviews for It All Started With The Mechanical Bull

By : MidnightEve
  • From ANON - TNgirl on December 09, 2005
    Sorry, I forgot to write something in the other one. I don't know where you are from, but if from America, have you seen the Hardee's commercial? The one with the girl on the mechanical bull? That's what you ought to have Hermione do for Draco. Put on a show. If you haven't seen it, it's like she's having sex on the bull. Going kinda slow and basically humping it. Actually pretty sexy. I couldn't believe they used it as a commercial to sell hamburgers! It's also kinda like the scene in Urban Cowboy, if you've ever seen the movie, where Debra Winger rides the bull. It would be a way to get Draco's attention again, if he'd gone back to his stupid attitude and/or make him jealous if she did it in front of others or both. I can see every guy wanting to be the bull and sporting wood only to have Draco notice something going on when it got really quite or loud with catcalls and I can see Draco drooling and having a fit after realizing what was going on and throwing out everyone in one of his possesive tantrums, as she should only show that side of herself for him. Also, you could have them fucking on the bull, fun, fun, fun!! Then Draco could buy it for himself and her, to keep ..... anyway, just an idea. Use it, don't use it, it's up to you. I look forward to seeing what you do!
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on December 09, 2005
    What a place to leave us!! Update soon, please!!
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  • From TCardan on October 30, 2005
    That was sexy, but poor Draco. I hope he's all right!
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  • From ANON - mona on October 30, 2005
    ooo update!
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  • From ANON - stacy on October 29, 2005
    Awesome update!! but i cant believe he passed out i was waiting for some action!!! lol, pleae update soon!
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  • From ANON - lunstar on October 29, 2005
    Leaving me in suspense, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on October 29, 2005
    I love it!!! Take your time if need be but know that you are driving me crazy waiting but it is wonderful story!!!
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  • From ANON - Alex on October 29, 2005
    *bursts out laughing* haha.. too much blood loss.
    MORe! i loved it.
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  • From ANON - Sommer on October 29, 2005
    Idiot passed out. He should have gotten help with his head.
    Great Job
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  • From ANON - john the heavy on October 29, 2005
    Why...the book....which must surely be the biggest book in history....head...book....not cool.....Very good though hot scenes and I was wondering when he was going to pass out-Update soon
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  • From ANON - demonspirit on October 27, 2005
    When are you going to update?
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  • From ANON - carabella on October 19, 2005
    i cant believe u leeft me w/ that evil cliffhanger! Bad writer, bad! :)
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  • From ANON - Sexy relly on October 14, 2005
    Woa! wat a comprimising position. Please continue, cant wait to c wat happens next.
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  • From ANON - DD on October 10, 2005
    It's very good, but I don't think that you should have a message in the body of the story, people won't take you seirously as a writer. Oh and thank you for letting me 'borrow' some of your ideas. Overall, good job! Keep up the good work. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dream_Toxin on October 10, 2005
    Don't leave me hanging or in this case riding. Update Soon!!!!!!
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