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Reviews for It All Started With The Mechanical Bull

By : MidnightEve
  • From on October 10, 2005
    This story is really really good. I like it and It's awesome
    Keep righting
    Amber
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  • From ANON - Patronuscharm2 on October 10, 2005
    I love this story! its fantastic! I have been reading random stories and this one caught my eye but everytime i tried to read it i got interrupted, i finally finished and i LOVE IT! GREAT JOB! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 09, 2005
    You would really benefit from a beta reader. This is a good story, but it's very distracting because you use different tenses, sometimes in the same sentence. Look up some examples of the correct use of present and past tense and practice it a bit. Otherwise I'm liking your story.
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  • From ANON - john the heavy on October 09, 2005
    This Shit is Hot! Hurrah^^
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  • From ANON - michelle on October 09, 2005
    *grins* Oh! what a good story, kind of funny, with the bull you know. lol keep updating and keep writing more hermione and draco stories.
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  • From ANON - Sommer on October 09, 2005
    She left him wanting more
    Great Part
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  • From ANON - Artemis on October 08, 2005
    Very good. Well written and well thought out. The ending was unexpected, but good. So keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - jarry87655 on October 07, 2005
    whata cliff hanger let's see if malfoy likes being under a mucblood
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  • From ANON - Artemis on October 06, 2005
    It's very good, however I suggest that if you finish it it would be even better.
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  • From ANON - DD on October 06, 2005
    It's a great story, but have you considered checking your work. I know that I sound like a teacher or a parent, (BTW, I'm not) but if you read it aloud you find mistakes better, or you could have someone read it to you. I know that might seem lame but trust me on this one.
    PS I'm writing a story on another website can I borrow one of your ideas? (Well really I'm just telling you that I am going to) You can email me if you don't want me to.
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  • From ANON - Sexy relly on October 05, 2005
    Oh please. please, please udate soon. Cant wait!
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  • From ANON - DD on October 05, 2005
    It's really good I expected her to torture him some more. I really think that you should continue with the story.
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  • From ANON - DemonDaughter on October 05, 2005
    How could you do that to me? I was just getting into it and then you just had to go and not finish the story! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease finish it soon, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaase!
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on October 03, 2005
    Interesting premise - you're off to a good start, but really could use some help with spelling and grammar. Have you considered getting a beta reader? It might also help with the flow of the story, which is a bit choppy, and a bit more exposition -- not a whole lot more, would improve it some. I think the idea of a mechanical bull at Hogwarts is pretty hilarious - you can really do a lot with the idea - very clever.
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  • From ANON - Jason on October 03, 2005
    I can't wait for the next part.
    You left off in a spot to where I really need to read more
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