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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 10, 2005
    That, was incredibly hilarious - Severus beat the sh*t out of Marcus - yay, go Severus, go Severus, go go Severus!!! Lol! I'm not usually one for violence, but really, he bloody deserved it! Oh, I can't wait to see what Hermione does!!!!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 10, 2005
    Well of course I'll review.

    I'm glad that Hermione finally had to face her weaknesses. Her drinking is something she needed to confront and deal with. Some people just can't drink *wine in her case* and it's time for her to deal with it. I was also glad that you didn't allow her to think that the potential rape was her just due. You are correct; it was not. Marcus had no right to accept that she was willing with that amount of drink in her...especially since he encouraged it.

    I found it interesting the way she cared for Severus. It was a reversal of roles. Usually he is caring for Hermione after inflicting the pain. An interesting relationship for sure. I was glad to see that he could show her softness in this last chapter 21. This was something I had been waiting for because it fleshes out their relationship. As much as I loved their encounters, the relationship itself seemed one-dimensional to me. Severus has made the transition: he shared so eloquently his feelings and he has cared for her so touchingly; now, Hermione needs to step up and do her part.

    On a purely personal level, I hope she breaks Marcus's nose again. heehee

    BTW, have you considered the suggestion made by others here and are you going to write a Marcus story. I would read it for sure. The Ministry successfully eradicated *I couldn't resist* his humanity, it would be interesting seeing if he could replace it. I hope you let us know if you do. Also please don't forget your Snape/Granger pairings, you write them too well.

    Anyway, kudos to you and please carry on. I love it.
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  • From ANON - lilly on October 10, 2005
    I love it. I love it. Kick his ass hermione!!!! I love your story, Please continue. You rock!!!!! Out loud!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 10, 2005
    jebus...i think marcus is in for more trouble with hermione than he ever was with severus.
    'hell has no fury like a woman scorned...'
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
    How can you leave us like that!? Please review soon,
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 10, 2005
    WHOOPS! I meant "SHE" sleeps with him, not HE! hahahahahahaha! My bad!!!! Sorry bou that.... got a little finger happy I did, hehehehehehe!
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 10, 2005
    Ch.20 - Waaaaaaaaaaa hoooooooooo! Oh, I'm so glad he decided to "sleep" with him. That's so comforting and sweet. Yay for them! Oh gods, I cannot WAIT for her confrontation with Marcus! Let the little lioness eat his flesh! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!! Bloody piece of chicken shit he is! No no...... worse than that! Gah.... don't even get me started! Blah! Funnily enough, I actually popped my ex right in the nose. Interesting how Marcus has a broken nose. Muahahahahahahaha! Well anyways, anxiously awaiting more my friend! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on October 10, 2005
    Whew! You had me on the edge of my seat for a few chapters there!

    About the only thing I found disappointing in Hermione is that she was stupid enough to drink with Marcus. Even if she did think of him as a friend, she is also very aware of how she acts when intoxicated. Knowing this and knowing she was planning on going back with Severus, drinking was about the most unintelligent thing she could have done. Of course, I know it was inevitible that he'd get her drunk but I thought he'd have to be sneakier about it -- I didn't think she'd be dozy enough to willingly put herself at risk.

    Thank goodness Severus was smart enough to get his ass there and fast! You go, Sev! I'm so unbelievably happy that he kicked Marcus's ass. That creep diserved it and more. And I'm also so relieved Severus finally showed her the pensieve memory. I can't imagine that she would want to stay his friend or have anything else to do with him anymore. He wasn't actually her friend, after all. It was all a big game so he could rape her. I certainly hope she thinks things through and irons out a plan with Severus (and Dumbledore) prior to confronting Marcus. As they did with Draco. This guy is certainly more dangerous and more of a threat to all.

    I would love for them to totally set the guy up. Let him think that she doesn't remember her behavior or the fight. Let him think that she is still his friend. The guy is running out of patience and is to the point of forcing her so if they catch him, they can send his ass away for good. Wouldn't that be hilarious if he tried to penetrate and couldn't because a fidelity chastity charm of some type protects her from him and that's how he finds out she and Snape got married.

    Excellent story! Please post more soon!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 10, 2005
    man he is sooooooooooooo going to get it again please more and in till then keep up the awesome work ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - JW on October 10, 2005
    Ch 20 - she's going to confront Marcus? Before he even gets healed up? What, she's not friends with him anymore?! He didn't know what would happen when she got drunk - but boy did he learn quick.... Will Albus keep him on staff? Where else would a former Eradicator go to?
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  • From ANON - anon on October 10, 2005
    mmm...nice fight scene.

    post again soon
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on October 10, 2005
    with you updateing so much(thank you thank you) this story is like crack it is so addicting and i like how you are going to show hermione evrything all the conversations he has had with marchus and such i like that a buch of stories would dance around the issue for a few chaps and frustrate people and well anyway i also liek how you keep contnueing the stories also pls excuse my spelllignass i don;t care at the moment anyway pls keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 10, 2005
    Wow, I had to respond to this chapter. It was AMAZING! Severus really beat the shit out of Marcus...and that dude deserved every pulping...fantastic chapter...eagerly looking forward to more.

    Red

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  • From ANON - angel on October 09, 2005
    yeaaaaaaaaaaaa go snape ... know mione will know the truth and see marcus as what he really is ass hole ... i cant wait in till next time and and in till then keep upthe awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 09, 2005
    YESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Kick His ASS!!!!!
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