Adult-FanFiction.org : Harry Potter

Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg

From ANON - firewall on October 09, 2005
Yahoo! Go Severus go! I liked that better than a wizard duel...the latter would have been too final, someone would have had to die. Hermione needs to smarten up with the booze though. If she is reaching the point where she loses cognizance of her surroundings and partner, she has a real problem.

So I'm sitting here wondering if the DADA curse is still in effect and Albus needs to find a new professor or will Marcus turn his dragon gaze to the three lovely muggles?
Report Review
From ANON - JW on October 09, 2005
Ch 19 - Mathias better not tell Marcus who he bet on! I wonder if those three Muggle women will still want Marcus now.... sigh.... VERY glad that Hermione didn't run in fear, the way she did in her dream. And how will Marcus react - with respect to Severus, or will he just leave? Will Hermione still want to be Marcus' friend? Could go either way. Thanks for posting! Great fight.
Report Review
From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 09, 2005
Absolutely perfect... there is something more gratifying in hands on combat, not to mention that it takes real skill. I am dying for more and I am hoping you will have a couple more chapters up before I go to bed. This is a ray of light in my dark and otherwise gloomy world!
Report Review
From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 09, 2005
Ch.19 - HOLY FUCKING BRILLIANT!!!!! *speechless*

I was HOPING AGAINST HOPE that you would make it a real fight, a lw down and dirty hands on fight! HOLY SHIT THAT WAS BAD ASS!!!!! OMG Snape was fucking brutal! I LOVE IT! Oh man, my favorite part was that irst punch Snape layed into Marcus!!! I reread it a few times and I actually screamed out YES the first time! My mom thinks I'm nutz now but I dont give a flying poo!!!! AWESOMENESS IS ALL I CAN SAY!!!!! YOU ROCK! SERIOUSLY!!!! YOU= AWESOME!

I can't wait to see what happens next! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! YEE HAW! Gods...... if it is possible....... you just made Severus Snape even more sexy than ever before! MUAHAHAHAHA! Toodles! ANXIOUSLY AWAITING!!!!!
Report Review
From ANON - PurestBlood on October 09, 2005
WOW love the fight, wish it could have been done w/ magic, but this is diff. I love this fic, do update ASAP or NOW!!! LOL :D
Report Review
From ANON - mary on October 09, 2005
This is getting good! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Report Review
From ANON - GriseldaMarchbanks on October 09, 2005
Wow. I'm happy that's all been settled. Now how will Hermione react? I've been enjoying your writing immensely; please continue to update!
GM
Report Review
From ANON - anon on October 09, 2005
*YAY*
go team severus!!!
Report Review
From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 09, 2005
Ch.18 - OH............ MY............ GOD!!!! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints*

How on earth could you stop there?!!!!!!!!!! That's it! I'm calling the FBI and having you tracked right this instant! Muahahahahahaha!

Ok, not really, but that was bloody brilliant!!!!! Seriously, Marcus is a dead, dead, dead dead dead dead man! Woooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!! Evil evil eviiiiiiiiiiiillllll cliffie!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! IT WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!

Ok, so the interaction was perfect! I got goosebumps again because Marcu, yet again , reminded me of my creepo ex! GAH! I hope Severus pains him horribly! HA! It's so funny Marcus is the DADA teacher because you know it's cursed, muahahahahahaha! Even if Voldie is dead... WOOT! hahahahahahhahaha!!!!

Oh and yes, I loved the fact that Snape is considering children. Remeber?!!! I asked you before if they would ever have kids! YAY! I hope they get married, travel and have lots and lots of little Snape and Hermione's! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

Ok, now back to this CLIFFIE!!! GAH! Please update soon! I want to see this duel and I want to see it BAD BAD BAD!!!!! Bad boy bad boy! Watcha gonna do? Watcha gonna DO? Watcha gonna do when Snape comes for youuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *sings stupid COPS song* Muahahahahahahahahaha!!! Alrighty, awesome chapter as always! UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL TURN INTO A MUTANT MARSHMALLOW AND DEVOUR YOU!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Funny, how you could just eat the marshmallow and end up killing me instead, hahahahaha! Wow, I'm soooooooooo giidy rightnow it's not even funny. I think Marcus must have slipped me some of that wine too! Woooooooooooo! Toodles!
Report Review
From ANON - bronte on October 09, 2005
hmmm...somehow, I don't think that Marcus is truly out of the picture.

I'm curious about what Snape will say to Hermione in the coming discussion.
Report Review
From ANON - Addict on October 09, 2005
FOUL! Oh, you're so bad you're good. I'll do anything I have to do, I'll say anything I have to say...just to get you to KEEP WRITING! Call it a thanksgiving gift, just give us the next chapter! (And the one after that, and the one after that...)
Report Review
From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 09, 2005
Ch.16 - *heart stops* Gods...... I thought he was practically going to propose to her right there! Wow! I suppose once he started opening his heart it all just spilled out like a shaken up bottle of champaigne! Sheesh! I was nearly in tears..... excellent..... brilliant..... wonderful. Oh dear, they love each other somuch it's beautiful *snif snif tear sob*
Report Review
From ANON - firewall on October 09, 2005
Whoa! you are as demanding as Hermione!! hahahaha Great chapter...that girl had better learn to watch her drink. Talk about a low tolerance. I loved Severus's assertion that he was dangerous as well. Oh yeah.

More more...there I can be demanding too. : )
Report Review
From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 09, 2005
Ch.15 - *rubs hands together* muahahahahahahahahaha!
Report Review
From ANON - Anguloce on October 09, 2005
all i can say is Severus needs to unleash a royal ass-whoopin upon that idiot. let him have it.
Report Review

Adult-FanFiction.Org is not in any way associated with or related to FanFiction.Net

Adult-FanFiction.org (AFF, the site), its owners, agents, and any other entities related to Adult-FanFiction.org or the AFF forum take no responsibility for the works posted to the Adult-FanFiction.org by its members.

While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.

All works displayed here, whether pictorial or literary, are the property of their owners and not Adult-FanFiction.org. Opinions stated in profiles of users may not reflect the opinions or views of Adult-FanFiction.org or any of its owners, agents, or related entities.

Website Domain ©2002-2017 by Apollo. PHP scripting, CSS style sheets, Database layout & Original artwork ©2005-2017 C. Kennington. Restructured Database & Forum skins ©2007-2017 J. Salva. Images, coding, and any other potentially liftable content may not be used without express written permission from their respective creator(s). Thank you for visiting!

Powered by Fiction Portal 2.0
Modifications © Manta2g, DemonGoddess
Site Owner - Apollo