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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 09, 2005
    Fantastic, as always... that was alot of emotion for Severus, but I think he spoke eloquently and knowing Hermione's big heart, she won't be able to stay away for much longer. Well I'm off to work, but I do hope for more upon my return ;)
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on October 09, 2005
    Gads! I feel like I've been raked over the coals in these last few chapters.

    Marcus -- How I HATE him. I am an extremely avid SS/HG fan, and this guy is just an abomination. He's rude, he's scary, he's threatened Severus! But, I'll give you this... he's a great storyline catalyst! [Damn bastard.]

    Masochist that I am [er, not like HG] I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Shdwcat27 on October 09, 2005
    I'm crying now, are you happy? he he That was beautiful!!
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  • From ANON - BananaFlavoredEskimo on October 09, 2005
    I love you.

    I love you for writing this fic.

    I love my Professor for giving me homework that i didn't bother doing because i was surfing this site which eventually led me to this story.

    I love myself for reading it.

    Honestly, you're a brilliant author and i enjoy all your stories. This is just the first one i've ever actually reviewed. ^^;

    Keep it up.


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  • From ANON - cutie_berry on October 09, 2005
    wow! i never thought Severus could be that eloquent... he really is trying hard to express his feelings... wow... n i wonder what Eli's role will be? n what marcus' plans are? keep up the great job! :D
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  • From ANON - JW on October 09, 2005
    Ch 16 - ?????? Why did she run away??? He just poured out every emotion he had, and then she runs out? (Ahem... and she didn't even have her chocolate dessert! Which just tells you where MY mind would be.) Is it because "on principle" she doesn't want to give in too easily to Severus? And will she still go out flying with Marcus? Sure you can't find a dragon-lady for Marcus? BTW, love that Eli!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 09, 2005
    Man, does Eli rock!?! Brilliant! The tension you built up... I held my breath when Eli interrupted Severus, but then he continued and I still held my breath!

    I swear if Marcus ruins this now...grrrr...

    I look forward to your update!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 09, 2005
    aaargh...i can't stop checking for updates. your fantastic story is ruining my life!!! :)

    gosh, what to say about severus and hermione? that sure is one complicated relationship.
    -although i wouldn't expect anything less from the snarky pootions master.

    i really, REALLY want severus to duel with marcus. *please* let them duel...(you write action scenes so well)
    great chapter and a perfect date, thanks for not taking the easy way out and making them go to bed straight away. -makes the lemons all the more worthwhile if you have to wait for them.
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  • From ANON - Megan on October 09, 2005
    Yay Severus!!! A beautiful speech.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 09, 2005
    This is got to be one of my favorites ontheis site. Excellent. And you update continuously!!!
    But, you evil evil little thing!!! Evil Cliffie!!! Not right!
    After he finally opens up and tell her what she has wanted to her, she bolts??!?!?!?!?!?!!?
    And is Marcus goning to try and rape for real? I think he might. And Hermione should kill him if that is the
    case. I just hope Serverus's revelation hasn't caused her to run right into MArcus's waiting arms, which it
    has, but does she really feel anything?

    We will see?

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  • From ANON - anon on October 09, 2005
    dinner hey? interesting choice on severus's behalf. i wonder how stilted the table conversation will be?
    you've made me loathe marcus, and i know how difficult it is to write a character like marcus without making them appear annoying.
    your pace is also really consistent; not to mention your remarkably frequent postings.
    can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 09, 2005
    Ch 15 - I was getting upset at the idea of Severus waiting WEEKS to ask Hermione on a date, until you said it was all part of his plan - a RISKY plan, but a sneaky plan, 'cuz Marcus hasn't seen her with Ron and Harry. And Marcus had time to ask her on a romantic date too, so it's partly his fault that she's feeling less romantic about him. I wonder how this date with S&H will turn out; dinner in his rooms doesn't sound romantic, unless he decorates or does something really special. Hmm..... where's the next chapter??
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  • From ANON - Megan on October 09, 2005
    I LOVE your stories. Keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - pumkin on October 09, 2005
    loved all of your other storys. keep up the good work.can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2005
    Actually this would be an opportune time for Severus to show some softness and vulnerability in his lovemaking...Hermione is ready for it.
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